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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
thanks guys I will update tomorrow cause I got
midterm for a class 2morrow
but i will update
thanks again


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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok here wid the update


part 5
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Sapna is shocked n then says ooo .umm dono andhar aaye na please.... sheeka smiles n says of course ab itne door se aye toh andaar toh aaogi .. come lets go
sam: mom mein kapre uthar ke ahthi hoon
sapna: jaldi kaor na beta hmm
as they go in abhi turns but realizes his hand is stuck to dubatta.. he sees his ring stuck to the bead on the dubatta....n tries to take it out sam turns away not noticing abhi n she is stepping on her dubatta which cause abhi to pull forward n fall on her sam on the ground... n abhi on top....
(dont ask me how that causes him to fall it just did lol)
the song...
Bol na halke halke is playing n sam abhi remeber all the past moments then sam remembers abhi- hugging sheeka so she moves her face abhi immediately gets up takes the dubatta off the ring n goes inside
sam: sameera yeh tu kya karrahi hain.. abhi sheeka ki hain ..
she grabs the clothes n walks away
abhi comes in n says he has to go to base..
sameera coems in and puts the clothes away... n goes back out..
sapna:abhi kam se kam chai toh pilo beta
abhi: naye aunty phir kabhi abhi im getting late
uh chale sheeka
sapna: phir kabhi ... tum baache toh hamesha aise kehte ho aur phir kabhi nayee ahte
sheeka 😆 😆 baath toh aunty sayee keh rahi hain... abhi ab ek chai pihne mein kya harsh hain... plz abhi
abhi: teek hain...
sapna brings tea n sameera goes inside n sheeka says
sameera u not going to base
umm mein jahrahi hoo lehkin kal... abhi kal toh ghar ayee hoon
sheeka: good. aunty ko bhi company mil jaye gi
just then sheeka says okay lets go abhi.. base par saare doston ko bhi gifta dehne hain
sheeka: aunty pata hain muhjhe gifts aur surprises bohut pasand.. kas kar jab muhjhe doorson ko dehna hain
aur pata hain din mein agar kam se kam ek bhar kisiko surpirse na kaaro toh mere din nahin dhalte
jaise ek bhar maine din mein kisi ko nahin surprise diya aur raat ki kuch 2 bhaje thi maine kya kiya maine car nikali aur seedha abhi ki ghar poochgaye
woh sohrahe the aur darwarse koldiya apne boxers mein abhi gets shocked n mad that sheeka said that
sam n sapna laugh
sheeka: aur ajjmuhjhe abhi aur sameera ki doorse doston ko bhi surprise dehna hain
aur dad ko bhi
uknow what i always wanted a man like my dad n im so happy i got abhi
sapna is sad but a bit happy
sam: umm mein chalti hoon kampr suhkahne hain.. aur achar bhi upar dhalna hain ummm mein tum dono ko kal milthi hoon
abhi= haan hume chalna chaye
they eave sam is on the roof. n abhi goes back to get his phone as he goes back to the car after that he glances at sameera who is hanging clothes n he sees her hair in her face n when a air forced plane padsses int he air.. he sees sam salute it n he does too
n he smiels n leaves
now at the base
sheeka is giving presents to all tanvi, farhan, samrat n then ask where is ur friend isha

isha is in a cornere tlakign on the ohone
yhellign at someone to not call her but then says main koshish karthi hoon hafte poore hone se pehle tum muhjhe utha do main koi bahana banathi hoon
ok n hangs up n turn to see farhan
n gets scared
isha: bad manners kisiko peeche se nahin buhlate
sheeka is behind her while she taunts farhan who didn not hear a word
sheeka covers her eyes n puts a gift in her hands
she turns around n like the gift n says thanks
sheeka : welcome
ab chale bohut baate karne hain
isha:haan tum chalo main ahti hoon they leave n ishais relieved they didnt hear
she closes the phone n leaves
veer sir comes n tells all that tomorrow sam is coming so we will order a cake n welocme her return
tanvi: says i will get it
they leave to prepare
while
abhi remembers the time him n sam cut the cake when sheeka hugs him from the back n kisses hischeks
jaan kya soch rahe the
abhi:kuch nahin he excuses his self n leaves

veer comes back n says to someone that abhi ko sameera ki saath koi important mission pe jaana hain uss ki file theyar rakhna kal smaeera ki ahthe hi muhjhe chehye ok
person;; yes sir n he leaves
sunaian comes n says abhi toh abhi aaya hian aur itna kaam acha nahin
warna rishte pe bhura asar parjahtha
veer gets upset abit but sheeka goes to her dad n hugs him n says
abhi ko dad ki tahra honna chehye coz dads the best .,. n rest her head on his arm.. veer says
no beta bhi is much better then me n will bhi tumhe apne dad jaise jeevan saathi nahin chehye
jo pyaar toh kartha he par nibhatha nahin.. sheeka is loking at her dad in surprise n shock n it ends there

precap:
sam is back in uniform n abhi n her are working on a some work when sheeka comes in and says kabhi toh abhi ko mere saath akele chordo
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dont worry guys im not gonna make sheeka mean


plz plz plz plz plz plz
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rabiah

Edited by Rabiah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
thanks ridhijai
for the comments
come on ppl so many ppl are viewing my post but no coments even its one word plz comment

ok i have midterms n Eid is coming so i wont be able to update until maybe the end of the week but i will update a quick one today
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PART 6

Sheeka is looking at veer in shock
n says jo pyaar kartha hain lehkin nibhatha nahin..main kuhc samji nahin dad.....
sunaina gives a dissapointed face n tells sheeka that hume shopping pe jaana hain aur pandit se bhi milna hain tumhari aur abhi ki mangni ki mohrat nihkalne ke liye
sh:lehkin papa toh pandit ki pass janna tha right
veer: sheeka beta
sunaina: sheeka woh sab mujpar chordo ur papa is too busy for us

they leave n veer is sad

next mornign sam is in her uniform n at base... she is sitting wid samrat, n tanvi
isha comes n says her realitive is sick n she has to go in a little bit
all wish her gud luck , farhan gets sad
when abhi comes n joins.. n also wishes her good luck but

sam leaves n tanvi goes after her
samrat; yaar abhi kahin tum aur sam ki beech ko jahgra toh nahin howa
abhi: nodda no . farhan comes takign about isha nthey laugh
abhi is worried bout sam n remebers the dance at the award night
abhi: arre samrat .. tum kyun shaadi nahin karthe
samRAT: kya karoon sam haath mein nahin ahte
abhi: maine kab kahan ki sam se shaadi kyun nahin karthe maine toh sameera ki nam bhi nahin liya
samrat: is shocked ---umm woh uhh
farhan n abhi smile
abhi: toh u like sameera right
samrat 😳 yaah i mena nooo shes alright
farhan: jumps n says usko cahsi na malaria hua .,. yeh gaaya yaar usko .... loveveria hua loveria huwa
samrat: pulls him down..
abhi: toh tum sameera ko bohlthi nahin...
samrat: maine toh bohut bar isharo mein bola kelkin isne toh har cheez masak lakthi hain toh main kya karo
farhan: tum usse boldo simple behgar isharo ki
samrat: tum isha ko bolpaaye .. kisi ladki ko bolla ajj tak
bol do simples..hmm
abhi: samrat i have an idea
they talk n sam is sitting outside whentanvi comes
t: sam tum har bar abhi se nahin baghsakthe na
sam: i know lehkin kam ki waqt toh nahin karu gi
t: sam kaam ki waqt ki saath saath tumhe bhi free time mein uss se nahin bhag sakthi log kya kehge
u have to be strong n tough n fight this muqabla
sameera singh ko kamzoor nahin hain
sam: right chalo
veer sir tells sam n abhi about their new mission

In the control room, Abhi and Sam are working on the mission. They pick up a singal and try to figure it out. As they are they come close to one another. they have a eye lock moment n then break up
as then that it is someone in their team who is a traitor
after shopping.. sheeka goes to base to give sameera a gift becoz she wants to be best friends wid her just like abhi so she brought her a dress

abhi n sam are trying to figure out who could it be when sheeka walk in n ses them close but not that close n says
kabhi toh abhi ko mere saath akele chordo
sam n abhi turn in shock n abhi goes to sheeka
sam turns back n begins to do some work...
sheeka laughs
n says arre tum toh serious hoge
i know im disturbing but i have to give this to u.. she goes to sam n abhi gets aworried look
sam refuses the gift
n sheeka says aggar mein tumhari behen hoti toh bhi mana karthe
sam: behen!? sam saya mere ko bahen nahin hain n gets sad
sheeka: oh im sorry lehkin main app ki saheeli aur behen dono hosakthi na
tanvi toh bhi dono hain na
sam gives her a hug.. n takes the gift.. sheka says tum isse mere engagement par mehna plz
sam
: gets a little sad but agrees
sheeka
: says ab tumhe bhi mere saath ek din nihkal ki.. shopping karo gi.. muhjhe sari aur salwar kammezz ki zaada kuch nahin pata.. aur shadi aur mangi li liya yeh sab pehna zarrori hain na
sam: says lehkin mein
sheeka: dehki bari mushkil se 5 gannte lagadiya tumhare liys yeh choose karna ... i know ull look gr8 in this sari...
sheeka: toh ub ek din mere mangni ki shooppiung toh dehi do
sam: alright n smiles sheeka tells abhi that papa app ko date batha hi dehthe lehkin i couldnt resist
humhara mangni ki date 2weeks later hain
aur shaadi bhi hum saaath milkar decide karleh ge
ok
she leavs
n abhi is worried bout sheeka n sameera becomign too close friends ...just liek sisters.. coz he knows they really are
sam says kaam kare
he nodds n they began looking for the signal agian
by now
isha is outside at a car n quic'kly runs in.. the car n there are guys wid tons of gusn n scaryy faces lol

precap::: abhi n sameera says toh yeh hain dehdruhu
i cant believe it.. sam: hum isse rokna hoga

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plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz
comments ppl
i need them plz

rabiah
Edited by Rabiah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
wow awesome

cant wait for more

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sorry to say that is it ur fanfic or updating the episode of CHA. there is no difference in ur FF & the EPI CHA.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ashwini_k

sorry to say that is it ur fanfic or updating the episode of CHA. there is no difference in ur FF & the EPI CHA.

ashwini .. this is a fanfic as it is written on the post's topic

im sorry if u feel it is no different from the epi CHA

but i took it off after watching the episode that ended wid ABHI hugging Sheeka

Parft 5, 6 were written way before todays episode came i jsut read the written update n was shocked myself to see that my ff waa similar to todays episode.. im sorry if u feel its the same but its not

samrat n sam are not getting hooked up by abhi in epi of cha but are in my ff

isha is gonna get exposed in my ff

but i dont c that coming in cha epi nytime soon

sorry if i sound rude n sorry if u feel this ff is not a ff but a written update of the epi cha

but thanks all ppl who love my ff n i will update soon

----rabiah

Edited by Rabiah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i know i shuld be studying for my midterms but i couldnt resist to update.. since some feel this is like the episode 😭 😭 n not a creative ff
i will change n add sum more twists....

ok now for part 7
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Abhi-sam are searching for the lost signal again n sam finds it
they trace the call n find out its from a similar # but wasnt sure whatr number so.. they take the # down while abhi continues to follow it n says its from this building its leaving the building .... sameera hurry up
---samis calling the man wid the phone # n he says it belongs to isha
sam is shock n abhi said im able to trace the dcall chaldi pata laghao i kaun hain
just then sam says isha
abhi said woh jahchuki usse kyun yaad kara hi hain jaldi naam do
abhi # isha ka ahain
then farhan bangs tghe door
they get worried
he crys n sam ask whats wrong
he said muhjhe isha ko bye bhi nahin kahan 😭 😭
sam asays farhan tum isha ko phone lagayo
farhan: haan wohi toh pehle kyun dhamak mein nhain aya
farhan rings it up but abhi grabs it n puts througha call tracer to rcord the mesg while sam calls veer sir.... n tells him the info
he come sthere n they wait for isha to pick up
isha picks up but its not her its a man
farhan says isha tumhare awwaz ko kya hua.. the man said app kaun
frahan says isha kahan hain
isha gfrabs the phone n in a panic voice says.. farhan woh mere mama hain..
farhan says maein toh bye kehne ki liye phoen kiya
n trys to distract her although he doesnt know y
mena time police get to the gate n stops isha n her gang
isha is pissed farhan just realize isha is a traitor n is heartroken n upset
sam n abhi are disgusted n veer sir is outraged
sam remebers isha n all the time she gave tananas
isha is arrested n the guys are too except one escapes leaving his locket on the ground
isha is taken by police n latter will get posh tash on who ahe really is n y she did such thing

samn abhi are congratulated by veer sir n he calls the hawk tomorrow mornign at 7 sharp for meeting
hawks are aware of isha n are aslo disgusted

veer sir orders n talk bout this plan is acieved
when abhi says nahin sir abhi woh admi bhag gaya aur isha ka sachai bhi samna na hua toh usse pehle karhte
hain
all leave to get to work to trace isha bground

sam n abhi are left after the meeting n are about to move when abhi trips on a pencil on the flooe n bumps into sam n they share a eye lock wid the tune tusse naina laga in the bground they come close when sam cells rings n abhi moves away but is still there
sam says
ji mama
haan maine vitamins liya ... mom mein base par hoon
ghar kaise aao abhi toh base par ayye
mom
ok bye
n hangs up she looks back
abhi? kahan gaye
n leaves
samrat is at the reception wid a folder waiting for sam
farhah n comes runnign saying sam is coming
samrat suddenly goes to the desk n turn away so he can bump to sam like it was an accident
n drops all her papers n his too
he picks up the paper nthere hands touch sam is trying to figure out y samrat is staring at her n samrat is all lost in her eys when sam gets up n moves but turns back to samrat to figure out y is he acting strange.. he gets up n moves away fast n goes to the receptionist
abhi n farhan smacks there head coz they are hiding n watchign this
sam is mad that samrat is ignoring her when she asks wat wrong?
so she leaves upset

next day
sam is walking down to the receptionist n is hangin up after talking to someone when she sees samrat walkign wid flowers white roses n she gets happy coz she knows samrat only buy flowers for her as a best friend n no other girl he walks past her n gives the rose to another girl

samrat is flirting wid the girl in the airforce... n sam gets mad but not jealous

samrat meets wid abhi in the cafe n gets happy that abhi plan is working
n says ab mein asam ka dil ohut jald jeetoon gi
tumhe toh dehkna chehye the aaj yaar jaidse mein ne uss lardki ko phool diya kaise gusse se lal huhe hian sam

abhi think its jealously n is happy his plan is working
abhi says now ull now be able to get sam in 6 days
che din aur lardki in
samrat: che kyun
abhi: sunday ko muhjhe shopping jana hain sheeka ki saath iss liye
abhi: samrat ab tum usse woh kehdo gi jab ajj tak nahin kaha... us kaho ki jab bhi mein akh band kartha hoon toh tumhare chehre nazar ahtha hain
tum ek kaam karo
samrat: wait mein kya karu samj mein nahi aahraha he
abhi :
Zubaan Hi Sirf Ek Zariya Nahin
Jo Aap Shabdon Ko Samajh Paayein Gain
Kabhi Aankhon Main Jhaank Kar Dekhiey
Hazaroon Alfaaz Khud Ba Khud Bekhar Jayein Gain
samrat: arre wah... abhi sheeka ki pyar se ab sharyar bhi howa he 😃 👏
abhi:--- 😛 yeh
u go na tell her ok
samrat: i will go my friend
abhi is in thoughts n is thiking sameera mein jantha hoon ke tum samrat se pyaar nahin karthi magar... mein kya karu
Main Teri Ankhon Se Nahi
In May Doob Janey Se Darta Hoon
Main Teri Muhabat Se Nahi
Teri intaha se Darta Hoon
Main raat ki tareeqi se nahi
Is tareeqi main basi apni tanhaiee se darta hoon
Mujhe bohat chahat hai tujhe paney ki
Liken tere door janey se darta hoon


precap: sameera is asking samrat .. kya kehna hain samrat.. tum muhjse kuhc baat karna chate the na ...
n samrat is looking nervous...

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hope u all like the update
i wont update till maybe the end of the week coz eid is coming n i have my midterm this wk
so enjoy this one for now

plz forgive ny mistakes made


n

ashwini_k plz mere baath ka bura maath maanna
😕 😳😉


---rabiah

Edited by Rabiah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#29
Great updates.
liked it.
plz cont. soon

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