FF-ABHISAM-UPDATE-PART 7 Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hello all CHA fans/members

i dont have star one but i watch CHA throught IF...

i love ABHI -Sam jodi n i decide to create a FF... after todays episode.

so it starts where the episode left off.. Abhi huggin sheeka

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PART ONE

abhi hugs sheeka n says i missed u a lot..

sheeka=sh

SH: oh abhi u know i missed u too..

Sam cant believe what she just saw n turns around as if some one took the life out of her.... n Abhi turns n looks at her but she isnt looking athim shes lost n loking somewhere out.. in his mind abhi says

A: im sorry Sameera lehkin yeh thi meri Majboori.... umeed hain tum muhjhe samjho... im sorry

n then tanvi sees this from far.. n gets mad... but decides to console Sam first...

Samrat , farhan call out to sameera but she looks n give them fake smile n walk out to the garden

tanvi follows... n sam crys a lot n says agar muhjse pyaar nahin tha toh woh sab kya tha ..😭.... bhallar village par..😭...... hospital par... kya tha tanvi

kya woh sirf dosti thi ..😭😭... haan

Tanvi too starts to cry a little n tells Sameera that u dont worry main Abhi se baat karthi hoon na... shiyad koi mazak

s: i hope soo

tanvi n sam wipe tears n then

Samrat arre tum dono yaha kya kare hann andhar kaamal kik party aur tum haan ki...

chalo lets go

sam smiles n acts as if shes happy but isnt in side

abhi feeld guilty n sad n is looking for Sam everywhere when someone taps him on the shoulder.....

he turns n gets shocked......

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sorry if its lame but......... plz comment N tell me if u like it

---rabiah

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice start..do continue! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very good starting rabiah
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome beginning.. u must continue!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey everyone!!!!

Thanks for the comments n I will update
tonight or tomorrow


Rabiah

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Great start.
liked it.
plz cont. soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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im extremely sorry but my computer had some connection issues with the net so i couldnt update.... plz forgive
i really appreciate all of your comments....i really appreciate it ..as this is my first attempt to a FF

ok ill continue now
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part 2


Abhi turns n gets shocked he sees Sheeka n she says
kahan chale gaye abhi i was looking everywhere....
abhi: oh sheeka i was looking for u...
sheeka:laktha air-force main ahkar mazak bhi seek liya
abhi smiles n then veer sir comes
he goes to sheeka first but he sees sameera sad so he goes to her
she is standing at the drink section
vs: ek supahi ko asai sahr kuhkar nahin rehna chehye
sam: oh veer sir aap
vs:yeh party tum hara aur abhi ki liye haan tumhe toh garv hone che ye apne kamyadi par
sam: abhi kahan kamiyad huye sir.. ab toh bohut kuch karne haan
vs:thats like a true solider.. hamesha sar uthakar chale ok .. now tum yahan akele kyiun jao apne dosto ki saath enjoy karo ase din baar baar nahin ahte
sam:yes sir
tanvi: arre sameera tum yahan ....oh.. hello sir... maine app ko disturn toh nahin kiya...
vs:arre nahin nahin... main toh chale raha hoon muhjhe tum youngster main kya kaam
he turns to sameera n puts his hand on her head n saysvs: u take care beta
sam: gets happy n surprised at the same time.. he realizes what he says n lets go n goes wid a fake smile
vs: he feels sad n happy that he got to call her beta but cant tell her that that he is her father...
sam : tanvi ab muhjhe tora better feel karahi hoon..
tanvi: tanvi smiles
sam: pata nahin kyun lehkin jab bhi veer sir mere samne ahjah the yahn muhjhe kisi tara se tasali yahi advice dehthe haan toh muhjhe bohut acha lagtha..
asai laghta jaise ....
tanvi: jaise?
sam: jaise ek pitaah ek beti se baat kar rahi haan..
tanvi: wohhh sam muhje lagtha haan tum hospital main rehte he bohut film shilme deh rahi thi... warna veer sir ke bahre main ahsa nahin kehti
sam n tanvi laugh n then get sad.
tanvi: kam se kam koi toh haan jo har bar peeche aur samne se he ek jaisa vibar karthe
tanvi: chalo samrat tumhe dund raha haan asae na ho ke woh dundte rahin yeah tumhare party haan aur tumhe enjoy karne haan
samje
SAM: chale...

as they leave........... two chairs down... someone turns wid watery eyes n its abhi
abhi in mind says: sameera muhje maloom haan ki tum veer sir se baat karthe waqt ahsa kyun mehsoos karthe.... aur muhjhe yeh tumhe batha na chehye lehkin.... ab main toh tumhare samna karne se he gabratha hoon.. tumhare sare sawaal ka jawab main nahin desak the.. im sorry sameera
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plz comment n recommend this FF ot all ur IF friends if i can get 4 new comments from different ppl then illl be able to continue.. plz plz plz plz
enjoy

{rabiah}

Edited by Rabiah - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome story cont soon plz!!!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i didnt get any comments except very few... plz ppl comment or i would think that no one likes this FF
If i dont get comments then i feel as if I sould not continue

plz comments
if u want me to continue

----rabiah
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awww.....abhi crying...!!1 😭 😭

but i like your ff..............continue soon!!!

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