AKDHA SS: MY JO'S TANTRUMS.... Chappy 9(b) updated..yipee.. Pg 65.. - Page 17

Originally posted by: lolo91

unres ch4

its beautiful and emotional ..but really i have to praise your beautiful description to there closeness ..i felt i am looking at a life scene ..i could imagine it so clear..your writing is amazing dear ..i am really happy to catch up with your story ..coming up to the chapter

naughty content😉 beautiful and blushing

and sad ending atifa is always a bitch😡 jallu is not at fault really ..i mean he though jodha moved on and he repond ..i mean his reaction is so understandable from man with his ego

i loved jodha words to him😊

precap scary

i hope jallu save her😉

Originally posted by: lolo91

unres ch5 a

amazing ..loved it to the core..i saw a shahensha in this chappy😉 angry lion on his queen ..i know its modern ff but i felt the amazing aroma of our akdha action ..i am so loving it👏 sherriffe eldin kidnapped jo thinking jallu dont care for her and thinking he can take advantage of her weakness..yet jo was like a fearless tigreous ..she fighted and threatened till our jallu came and saved his love..noodles..yummy ..jalal who made it😲 double yummy😉

so sweet ending😊

Originally posted by: lolo91

unres 5b

that was amazing ..so light hearted and sweet ..puppy ..i am crazy about animals so i actually enjoy it ..if jo didnt adopt him ..i would have taken him😊 jo will sure will be great mom and wife so caring😳

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Beautiful chapter n thnxx for pm dr

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

a nice chapter..love the part btwn hamida and jodha..jodha find motherly love..jo ja part s always lovable..ja blushing and the part where jo wearing saree s also nice..thanks for pm..and update nxt part soon..

Originally posted by: avika444

U know misty. ..i was having a lot of fun while reading the update untill i readched the last part ...

Yes and no together ?? How is it possible ...i think jo said yes and someone from Jodha's side is protesting ...anyways i will wait for the next chapter ..let me comment on this one first .

Aww Shy blushy mamujaan ...is a treat to our eyes 😆

Hamida accepted Jodha as her DIL by giving her their ancestral attire ..jo is so happy ...and jallu...as usual naughty ...hehehe

Precap sounds scary

Continue soon dear

Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

Mishu...
Who the hell are you decided it's useless Han..!!
It's lovely chappy my sweetie...
Totally enjoy to read it... ..
Aww trio sleep together...
AND disturb my baby...
Hahahaha jalal dreaming about their child...
AND MY Mr. Jalal is blushing...
AND jo talk with baby... And say ahead is in love with him... Finally she confec...
Awww jo is welcomed warmly by hamida in their family...
AND all the plot of conversation between hamida and jo is just a wonderful.. ...
AND the gift for jo...
Wow...
AND the marriage part thearaly enjoy to read it baby... You make fire on floor 😆
And the last proposal was is just cherry on cake... And the precap it must be YES... haina?????
Update soon mishu. ...
Waiting for read more...
Love you.. Muhhha...
More and more
And thanks for keeping your promise for update...