Shravan's POV shayari

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rkbaani

@rkbaani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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HELLO EVERYONE.

THANKS FOR THE WARM RESPONSE.IT HAS MOTIVATED ME TO WRITE MORE.

SO HERE IT GOES.

Ulfat ka aksar yehi dastur hota hai,

jise chaho wahi apne se dur hota hai,

Dil tutkar bikharta hai is kadar jaise,

koi kanch ka khilona chur-chur hota hai...😭

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Mad_Shubhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Very nice lines.. I liked them.

Just wanted to share some of my lines here.. I hope you don't mind. 😊

Bas itni si baat thi

Ke tum rok lete ek baar

Lautne ke iraade se

Hum bhi nahi aaye the

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rkbaani

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Posted: 9 years ago

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no not at all dear ...i wont mind...very nice lines...😉

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Loved it chotu!

Damn nice 👏

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sapphire3

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Beautiful lines bani !!
Loved it ❤️
@zoya ye bani hai chotu is ishani 😆

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orion23

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sapphire3
Beautiful lines bani !!
Loved it ❤️
@zoya ye bani hai chotu is ishani 😆

Yeh bhi choti hi hai na apne se😆

Mai zainab ko bhi on and off chotu bolti hoon😃

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Silverrmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#7

Brilliant lines dear 👏 Keep writing more...this depicts Shravn's POV so well...Loved the poetry !!!

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Mad_Shubhi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: rkbaani
no not at all dear ...i wont mind...very nice lines...😉

Thank you

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