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Chapter-1

Kartik Convincing his Dad

The next day Kabir and Kartik went downstairs for the breakfast as it was already 9. While descending down the stairs Kartik was mumbling something.

Kabir- Kya hua bhai? Kyon thaak rahe ho (in Akshay Kumar style)

Kartik- What a brother you are Kabir! Here I am getting tensed and you are so casual.

Kabir- Bro! he stopped him on the stairs and made Kartik look him. he held his hand and said in an assuring tone

"Bro! I am not reacting because I know that you are really brave and you will say it. And I know my dad. His happiness is with his sons. He would never say no to the proposal."

"Sacchi Kabir?" Kartik looked with reproachable eyes at Kabir.

"Are you going to kiss me or what?" Kabir acted as if he was feared.

"I knew you can be serious about anything. " Kartik got irked and descended down the stairs. Kabir giggled and followed him. they reached the table and found their dad reading the newspaper. The newspaper covered his face.

"Good morning dad!" the bro team said it together. arjun got that paper down. (YOU CAN IMAGINE DURGAPRASAD OF SWARAGINI OR SOME OTHER HITLER LOOK CHARACTER AS ARJUN)

Ar- You both are late. It is 9:05. You were supposed to reach here by 9.

Kar- Sorry Dad

Kabir (monologue)- Aise Hitler dad ke saamne yeh bhi bolna that I need to go to the washroom bhi bahut difficult hai. Toh fir apne love ke baare mein batana toh jaan par Aa jaane waali baat hai. Now I actually understand that bhai ki dad se kyun fatt rahi hai. Mujhe hi bhai ki madad karni padegi.

Ar- Kabir! Don't you want to say anything?

Kabir- I am sorry dad.

Ar- Sit here two of you.

Kabir and Kartik sat and looked at each other. "Hitler!" the duo said together with a sigh.

"Good morning children! Tad bit late I guess?" they heard a voice. They saw their mom coming with a bowl in her hand and that beautiful smile which she gives every morning.

Kabir and Kartik said together with a sad face (Well yes, they were acting because only Vasu had the capacity to shout at Arjun. And the best part, Arjun would say nothing and rather pacify her with the help of his kids but today even the kids were in no mood)- Good morning mom!

V- Kya aap bhi subah subah jalladon jaise mere nanhe munhe bachon par chillate rehte ho. Dekho mere bacche kitne udas ho rahe hain subah subah. Ueh bhi koi tareeka hota hai!

Ar- They came late and that is why I shouted. (he said trying to defend himself)

V- Arre! Bacche hain. Late nahi ho sakte kya! Dekho sahi se uth bhi nahi paaye. Ek din milta hai becharon ko rest ka woh bhi aap chiin lete ho! Ye konsa tareeka hai! Bataiye mujhe? (she sat down on her place)

The kids were enjoying it. why wouldn't they? Their father was getting scolded by their mother and today they were angry so they had an excuse to enjoy it.

"But Vasyu..." Arjun was trying to defend himself when Vasu cut him off, "Vasu, basu kuch nahi. Abhi mere bacchon se maafi maangiye warna mujhse baat karne ki sochna bhi mat." Vasu warned him. Arjun knew there was no way left. he looked the other side and said "Sorry!" the kids giggled.

Kabir hit Kartik's leg under the table. Arjun was trying to apologise to Vasu but she wanted to enjoy that moment.

"What?" Kartik whispered trying to be unnoticed by his mom and dad. "When are you going to tell dad? After Kirti bhabhi gets married to someone else?" Kabir whispered back in an angry tone.

"Abbe! Apne jallad baap se aisi baat karne mein time toh lagta hai na!" Kartik whispered trying to express his fear.

"Par Kirti bhabhi ke papa time nahi lagayenge unke rishte ki baat kahi aur karne mein." Kabir tried to explain his fear as he could not bear a depressed bro around him. Kabir showed his eyes to Kartik while Kartik almost begged through his eyes to give him some time and not disturb him. Kabir knew that he would have to start it.

"Dad! Bhai wants to tell you something!" Kabir said disturbing Vasu and Arjun. Kartik was astonished with his brother's stupidity. Kartik was not even prepared with the lines.

"Kabir! I will kill you one day and no one will come to know that it was me." Kartik thought and looked at Kabir with anger while Kabir acted as if eating his food with full concentration trying to avoid eye contact with his brother.

"What is it Kartik?" Arjun asked.

"Kartik was hesitant to speak. "Yes, Kartik we are listening. And I am sure it is not some business work because we are not allowed to talk business on the table." Vasu said. Kartik knew that there was no way out. Kabir was smiling though he didn't show it much. He was eating his food and enjoying his brother's antics.

"Kabir what are you doing? Here your brother is trying to tell us something and you don't want to listen and rather eat!" Vasu scolded him. This time Arjun smiled. He wanted Vasu to shout on her LOVELY' kids. Revenge 1: checked.

"Mom actually..." Kartik was hesitating. "You need not fear. We are all there with you." Vasu tried motivating him.

"I love a girl and want to marry her." Kartik said it in one go closing his eyes in fear. But instead of hearing taunts he heard sounds of laughter. He opened his eyes and saw his family members laughing.

"I am telling the truth. I love her and she loves me." Kartik tried to explain it to them but they were just laughing.

"I get it Kartik. But what was there to fear!" Vasu said in between her laughs.

"Haan beta! Come on we are your parents and we know that you are big enough to take some decisions for yourself. And we are sure that you must have got the right choice for you." Arjun added.

"I thought that you would be angry for I did not tell you earlier." Kartik said.

"Bhai I understand. Hamara baap itna jallad hai isliye. But he is good at heart." Kabir said while laughing. All the others stopped laughing. "What did I say it out loud?" Kabir thought.

"Kabir tu toh gaya. Tune mujhe marwaya tha na. dekh bhagvan ne tujhe marwaya." Kartik was doing happy dance inside.

Kabir was about to say something when his mother started laughing. Neither could Kartik control anymore. He also started laughing. Kabir was astonished but he also joined them. Arjun was making baby faces. "You all take me to be a jallad. I hate you all." He complained like a small child. Vasu held his cheeks and started pulling them. "Ole Le! Babu ko bura laga!" she teased him. "I don't want to talk to you Vasu." Arjun complained looking the other side with a pouting face.

Suddenly Kabir got a message. "People I need to go to the academy. I have got some work there and some new students who need to learn the basics today so that they can join with the other batches tomorrow." Kabir said.

"What Kabir? This is not done. Today is Sunday. And remember no work on Sunday. Come on Kabir." Vasu complained.

Ka- Mom I know but dance is really important to me.

(Yes, Kabir owns a dance academy which is all because of him. he did not take the help of his father or brother and well now as I told you, he is a great dancer and many girls are his fans.)

Ar- But Kabir, we are going to that girl's place. Wait! Kartik you did not tell us anything about that girl you love! And Kabir sit down for now.

Kar- (blushing) Dad her name is Kirti Gangwal. And... he was about to continue but Arjun cut him in the middle.

Ar- Daughter of Ramesh and Laxmi Gangwal?

Kar- (astonished) Yes.

V- sister of Suketu Gangwal?

Kar- (Surprised) Yes!

Ka- But how do you guys know?

Ar- Ramesh is my childhood friend but we could not meet very often since his marriage as he got indulged in his works and I got in mine. But we met 3 to 4 times when Suketu was young. After that we only met him once in a party with his daughter and son. He has another daughter but she was not in the town that time.

V- We know Kirti. She is a good person and a great daughter. Bahut sanskaari bacchi hai. The day we met her we thought that we should get Kartik and Kirti married but thought that you are too young to get married as you were only 23.

Ar- But how did you two come close in the presence of her brother, Suketu?

Kar- At work. She is my personal assistant and we fell in love.

Ar- We will go today in the afternoon to talk to her parents and my childhood best friend.

Ka- Well, I gotta go.

Va- But Kabir what about the meeting?

Ka- Mom, you are elders and you can talk. Just to make them have a look at me, I won't leave my dance. Bye.

Kar- Kabir!

Ka- I will come home by evening. And dad mom ko pata lena warna raat ko good night kissi kaun dega!

He teased his parents and left shouting, "Bye!"

V- And yes Kartik I am angry with you. Why didn't you tell me earlier? I am your mom. You should tell me these things to the least.

Ar- (Monologue) Revenge 2 - Completed

They had their breakfast and went to do their SUNDAY CHORES. But today the time table of Kartik was changed. He called Kirti and talked to her and told her everything.

PRECAP: STORY FROM KIRTI'S SIDE

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Very nice update👍🏼
Kabir is damn naughty😆

All the very best for your exam and update it when you are free😊
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ohhh god this is sooo interesting...loved loved loved the family convo😃soo cute lovely funny😃😆
update sooonish...waiting for nibir meeting😃
ALL THE BEST FOR UR EXAMS👍🏼
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Chapter-2

KIRTI'S SIDE

Nisha, Kirti and Suku are sitting in Kirti's room where she is pacing to and fro since almost 15 minutes.

Kirti- Arre Yaar guys! What am I gonna do? Kartik ne bataya ki uski family aaj Aa rahe hain shaadi ki baat karne. Maine socha tha ki aaj Kartik bata dega fir main bataungi but ab toh batane ka time hi nahi hai. They will be here by afternoon. AB main kya karoon? Kartik will get angry with me. what am I gonna do? I can't understand. Someone give me some anti-anxiety pills.

Kirti is blabbering while pacing across the room and Nisha and Suku are sitting on the bed with their legs folded and staring at Kirti. They were also getting irritated by her continuous blabbering. Finally Nisha decided to do something. She looked at Suku and gestured him something. They got up from either sides of the bed. Kirti turned back and saw Nisha standing, she turned the other side and saw Suku standing.

"What do you want guys?" Kirti said with tension. "A little attention." Suku replied. "Go and talk to dad. He would never say no." Nisha suggested.

Ra- What do you want to talk to me about? (Ramesh was standing on the door and only heard what Nisha said.)

N-Dad woh Kirti wanted to talk to you.

r- even I want to talk to her.

K- Yes, dad what's the matter?

R- Actually my childhood friend and his son is coming to see you for your wedding. So get ready and come down when your mother comes and calls you.

Kirti's face turned into a sad one. She knew that she had done a blunder and now because of her Kartik will also have to pay for it. after all she cannot say no to her father who asked her something for once. Ramesh saw the change in her expression. He gestured Nisha and Suku to leave the room. But they were the Sibling Gang. They stood outside the door hiding behind the wall to hear the father-daughter convo.

Ramesh went and made Kirti sit on the bed. He sat beside her. He made her look at him.

R- Kirti, you know what! When you were small and got hurt while playing you would wash your wound in the playground and try covering the wound with your clothes. Your mother never figured it out but I always did. Kirti you are delicate glass doll who wants to bear everything but doesn't know that when she would break that sound would come into my ear. You can't hide anything from me, can you?

Kirti had tears in her eyes. She hugged Ramesh and started sobbing like she used to do when she was a child.

k- (Still hugging) Dad, I love you. I know I can never hide anything from you. But its just I need some time.

Ra- (Broke the hug) Kirti beta, no one is asking you to marry him then and there. You have to see him. if you like him then only we will get you married to that guy. And we would give you enough time to think. Nobody on this earth will force this marriage on you.

Kirti hugged him telling her emotions.

OUTSIDE THE ROOM

N- Suku, yaar yeh baap-beti sirf emotional baatein kyu karte hain? Kirti ko iss mauke par chauka marna chahiye tha. Bata deti that she loves Kartik Jiju. Befaaltu mein time barbaad kar rahi hai.

S- Haan yaar! Sahi mein! Mujhe lagta hai iski shaadi ki baat hamein hi papa se karni padegi.

Just then Laxmi came from behind with a cup of tea.

L- Koi zaroorat nahi hai tum dono ko kaam bigaadne ki.

They turned with shock faces.

n- yaar Maa aapki aur papa ki bahut buri aadat hai eardropping ki.

Nisha teased her and ran.

S- Abbe rukk! Nisha main bhi chal raha hoon. (Nisha didn't stop. Why would she? She won't get herself killed. Suku ran behind her.) Abbe! Meri maiyyad pe rukegi kya? Rukk na!

Laxmi laughed at them and then entered Kirti's room where the daughter-father duo were talking and laughing remembering some incidents.

R- What have those two done now that they ran away?

L- That you need to ask them. (To Kirti) Kirti come on in my room. I will get you ready.

R- Laxmi have you prepared the food?

L (with attitude) I have done my job.

Kirti sensed it.

K- (Questioningly) What's with you two now?

L- Your father!

R- Me!

K- What now dad?

L- I asked him to bring capsicum from the market and he did not bring it. and when I asked him he gave an excuse that capsicums were over while they were not.

R- How do you know?

L- because when you were talking to your friend I had to go to the market and I saw capsicums in almost all the stalls and even in the reliance mart.

Ramesh gave a cute sorry look.

K- Dad not again. You hate capsicums so this means that you won't even bring it?

R- Yes! Because your mother makes me suffer it as well.

L- it is good for health.

R- For you! For me it is like a big fat beast wearing a green gown.

Kirti and Laxmi gave him an unbelievable look.

"You won't change?" Laxmi asked.

"Why should I!" Ramesh said and left knowing what was in the bucket. Kirti laughed while Laxmi frowned.


Thank you all for liking the story. i hope that you would

like it even further,actually i really dont have time but still

i wrote 2 parts. will be posting the second one within a

short while. please koi PM kardo. i really dont have time.

Maine kuch pehle se nahi padha usika anjaam bhugat rahi

hoon. Please agar acchi lage toh PM kar dena koi. Aur

Comments likhna mat bhulna. i am waiting to read them.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Chapter-3

Wedding Planning

It was almost 2 in the afternoon. The guests arrived.

Kirti was sitting in Laxmi's room with an upset face. Nisha and Suku aftermeeting the guests were sent to bring Kirti.

IN the room, Kirti was talking to herself looking at the reflection in the mirror.

K- I have lost him. Not because of his mistake but this time it is mine. I was the fearing one. Fattu hu main! I couldn't even tell my dad even after knowing that he would understand me in all situations. I am sorry Kartik. I am sorry.

N- (came inside the room with Suku) Chal Kirti woh log Aa gaye hain.

Kirti turned back.

K- I am feeling that I would spoil the life of that person, mine and Kartik if I marry this guy.

S- I can assure you, you won't.

Suku looked at Nisha and both giggled.

K- Here I am getting nervous and feeling sad and you two are giggling. I don't want to talk to you. She got up and was ready to walk.

They walked to the hall. Kirti did not even see the guy. She had tears formed in her eyes and one dropped. She did not look up. She was feeling upset rather guilty for she could not do anything and ruined his life along with hers.

"Arre Kirti beta! Why are you crying?" she heard a familiar voice but she did not want to show them her sad face so she kept her head down and nodded in a no. everyone smiled at her for they saw how she was hiding her pain.

The father of the guy and the girl asked the guy to go to her. The guy walked to her and held her shoulders. Kirti was feeling more and more guilty. "Look at him for once Kirti!" she heard her siblings shout at her. This was enough for her. She could not get married to anyone else except for Kartik. She closed her eyes and put her head straight.

Without opening her eyes she said in one go, "I can't marry you I love someone else." The dried up tears marks and some fresh could be seen below her eyes.

"As you suggest! I am not going to force you for anything." Kirti heard a familiar voice. But this time it was very familiar. Was he here? Or was she dreaming again? She opened her eyes with a jerk and found no one in front of her. She collapsed on the ground. Even her parents and guy's parents were not here. She was dreaming might be.

Now she wanted to cry. Suddenly she felt a tap on her shoulders. She turned around and saw him standing there. That means she was not dreaming. She got up touched his hand to see if he was real.

"I am real!" Kartik replied. She hugged him immediately. Kartik hugged her back. She heard some sounds of laughter. She realized something and jerked him.

K- You idiot, you moron! How could you make the one who loves you and whom you love cry so much?

She started hitting him on his chest.

Kartik held her hands and made her look at him. She had tears in her eyes. He smiled. Tears formed in his eyes as well.

Kartik- I love you Kirti. (he bent down on his knees) Will you marry me?

K- I don't love you! And I won't marry you in any case.

Kartik- (he got up and said very casually) Okay then I am leaving.

K-Just like that?
Kartik- Well, I suppose that is how people go!

K- I hate you. (She said and hugged him)

He twirled her around and then made her stand on her feet. They got lost in each other's eyes.

Everyone- Ahem! Ahem!

Kartik and Kirti felt embarrassed.

Ra- Hamara hi idea tha aur ab yahi bhool gaya ki hum bhi hain yahan. Acha hai beta! Lage raho!

Ar- Aur nahi toh kya? Shaadi se pehle ye haal hai toh shaadi ke baad toh... (He teased them along with Ramesh)

Ra- Bhai apan ko kya matlab? Apne ko toh inhone ek bada sa tohfa de hi diya hai humari bachpan ki dosti ko rishtedaari mein badal kar.

They laughed together. Kirti and Kartik were red like tomato.

N- Arre Kirti! Tujhe aise sharmaate hue toh maine kabhi nahi dekha! Oh! Sorry jiju effect!

S- Haan yaar nishu samjha kar! Jiju saath mein honge aur khullam khulla... woh karenge toh sharmaayenge to sahi na.

K- Chup karo tum dono aur jao yahan se. (Kirti said looking down trying to hide her blush)

N- Haan Haan! Vaise bhi ab hamara kya kaam! Jiju hian hi tere paas. Woh toh teri saari ichchayein poori kar denge. Woh waali bhi.

Nisha said and ran away. It was not only Kirti and Kartik who blushed. Even the whole family was red now.

S- Abey nishu! Saare kaand karke akele bhaag jati hai. Rukk main bhi aaya. (After creating all the mischief you run away. Wait I will also join you.)

And saying so, Suku also ran away. Vasu went towards Kirti and asked to forward her hand. Kirti did as she was asked. Vasu put the kadha (Bangles) in her hand. Kirti was overwhelmed. She bent down to take Vasu's blessings. Kartik also did the same. They went and took blessings of all the elders.

Ra- Bhai! Ab panditji ko kal bulakar muhurat nikalvate hain.

And everyone else nodded.

S- Papa uski koi zaroorat nahi hai.

Suku came back along with Nisha and a panditji.

Va- Par beta hum Kartik ki kundli nahi laaye hain.

N- Aunty! If Kartik jiju and Kirti love each other then what is the need for any match of the kundlies. If there will be any problem, they will face it together. So no need to worry! And even if you still want that match, then you can send it tomorrow along with Kartik jiju. We will get it checked and will inform you.

Va- You are really a nice and intelligent girl, Nisha! I wish I had a daughter like you. (Cupped her face with one hand)

S- That is impossible aunty! Because god made one and only one piece like her. after that he decided that people can't take so much load on themselves.

N-Suku! Tu toh gaya! And they started running after each other.

After some time they stopped not before Nisha stamped his feet. They stood near the panditji.

Ra- So when is the best time for marriage, panditji?

The priest took out his book form his bag and saw it nicely.

Panditji- It is... (He looked at Nisha and Suku who eyed him. He gulped in fear) It is A week and 2 days from now.

Everyone except Nisha and Suku were astonished.

La- What? A week and 2 days? Panditji we won't be able to make any arrangements so please, find the next date.

Va- Yes, Laxmi is right.

Panditji- The next date is... (He was about to say something when Suku kept his hand on him and eyed him.) It is an year later. Or maybe two we can say.

Va- This means we will have to do all the arrangements in 4 days. So that we can complete the rasams in the later 5 days.

Ar- You are right Vasu!

Ra- I think we can do the Roka tomorrow.

The elders were discussing the dates when Suku sent a message to Kartik" TERA KAAM HO GAYA.


PRECAP- Nisha and Kabir's meet.


PS- I am sorry i am not elaborating their discussions too

much. i cant write too much because i have an examination

tomorrow. Sorry again guys. mein jaanti hoon main bakwaas

likhti hoon par jhel lo plz ab.

Thank you for reading and sorry if i wasted ur time. plz do

share ur feedbacks in the comments section below.

Edited by 357159pikachu - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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both updates are really tooo good👏
especially kirti-ramesh convo was lovely amazing😃❤️
loved the bond between nishu-sukku😃
capsicum😆tumhe pasandh nahi hai kya😆
ayooo kirti was crying ...😉karthik 😉
both families convo was tooo good funny 😆😳
sukku ...ne apne jiju ka kaam kar diya😆😆😆😆😆😆
waiting for nibir meeting...jaldi kar yaar waiting
Mai PM's bhej dhungi😊all the best👍🏼
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First of all i would like to say that you don't know me because i'm a newbie here..😆
I read all the parts in a go and the story seems really fantastic!👏
Loved the bonds of Kabir-Kartik and Nisha-Sukku
naughty Nisha here🤣
Whole heartedly Waiting for NiBir encounter
Also thanks to you Niha for her letting me know about this story❤️
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Both the parts are awesome loved them ... keep updating soon 😊
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Originally posted by: Niha0606

both updates are really tooo good👏

especially kirti-ramesh convo was lovely amazing😃❤️
loved the bond between nishu-sukku😃
capsicum😆tumhe pasandh nahi hai kya😆
ayooo kirti was crying ...😉karthik 😉
both families convo was tooo good funny 😆😳
sukku ...ne apne jiju ka kaam kar diya😆
waiting for nibir meeting...jaldi kar yaar waiting
Mai PM's bhej dhungi😊all the best👍🏼


Thanks a lot Niha
And yes you are right. i hate capsicum 🤢 and believe me the feeling is mutual between me and capsicum😉
Thanks a lot for sending pms. i owe it u friend. i will be updating it as soon as possible. i had one exam today so i will have some time free. i will see if i can complete it. Thanks a lot for ur ATB. i am sure it would work.
THANKS AGAIN.
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Originally posted by: aNibirFan

First of all i would like to say that you don't know me because i'm a newbie here..😆
I read all the parts in a go and the story seems really fantastic!👏
Loved the bonds of Kabir-Kartik and Nisha-Sukku
naughty Nisha here🤣
Whole heartedly Waiting for NiBir encounter
Also thanks to you Niha for her letting me know about this story❤️


Thank you. And yes nisha will be naughtier in the ff as compared to show.😉 Woh type mein nahi.😆
U are right. even i am thankful to niha for sending the pms.

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