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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kusharberry

yup i trust my keerthu

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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER:5

In the next second his conscience voiced out to him...''it isn't right..you should not wish that she will be your's...she deserves someone much better than you...she rightfully belongs to a place where she gets happiness..and you can never give her happiness..realize it and forget her''...''how will I ??''his heart reasoned out...his heart and mind was at conflict..he decided to move out of the place...he culdnt help but turn around and see his love one more time...she was smiling...he calmed down a bit after seeing her...and made his way out...

The elder ladies retired to a corner away from the bustle letting their children enjoy...Leela walked to a juice counter and placed an order for an orange juice...she was sipping it ..that's when someone patted over her shoulders ..she turned around and was greeted with a smile by a lady in her fifties...she returned a smile...''sat sri akaal ,leela ji''the lady greeted..''sat sri akaal..usha ji...mai bohoth khush hoon ke aap yahaa pe aa gayi...par aapne toh kahaan tha aap nahin aa sakthe..kya huva??...she replied seemingly surprised and happy at her unexpected visit...''haan kaha toh tha...par socha ki mujhe aana chahiye...aise sabse se milne ka mauka aaj kal bohoth kam milte hai...aur mai aagayi''usha stated...''haan ji aaj kal aise parivaar ke saath milkar khushi manane ka mauka bohoth kam miltha hai...hume isse aisi chodni nahi chahiye''...she smilingly replied...and received a smiled from usha...''toh aap kaise hai??ghar me sab theek tho haina??"leela inquired..."haan haan ghar me sab theek hai..aur mai bhi theek hoon...waise yeh bataaiye aap kaise hain??aur twinkle vo hai kaha??maine use mili hi nahi'' ...usha replied...''mai bhi theek hoon ji..twinkle??who tho abhi yahaan tha''she replied her eyes searching around for her daughter...''leela ji...mai use miloongi...par mujhe aapse ek zaroori baat karni thi.''usha interrupted...''ji bataaiye''leela affirmed..''woh mujhe aapse twinkle aur kunj ke bare mein baat karni thi..''usha uttered...''twinj aur kunj ke bare mein??"leela asked obviously confused..''haan twinkle aur kunj ke bare me hi mujhe aapse baat karni thi..dono ek dusre ko pehle se hi jaanthe hai...kya hum uske shaadi ke bare me soch sakthe hai??mujhe twinkle pehle se hi bohoth pasand hai ..aur mujhe poora vishwas hai ki who kunj ka poora dhyaan rakhungi aur use khush rakhoongi"usha replied with a happy smile over her lips..hearing this leela was happy..no not happy...that would be an understatement...she was on top of the world...she knew kunj..how a good soul he is...how he cared for everyone..she remembered about her promise too...here she was actually going to speak about their marriage to usha..when she herself came up with this proposal..."agar sach kahoon toh mai aapse yahi baat karni waali thi...mujhe kunj bohoth pasand hai.koi bhi maa chahega apni beti ke liye kunj jaisa pati..mujhe khushi hogi agar kunj meri daamad bane..par twinkle se baat toh mujhe karna hi padega..uske decision jo bhi ho..main wahi karoongi...mai usse shaadi ke liye force nahi karna chahtha''leela said ...''aap chintha mat kijiye sab theek hojayega...maine abhi tak kunj se iske bare me baat nahi ki par mujhe pata hai who raazi hojaayega ..kon nahi chahega twinkle jaisi jeevan saathi ko''usha reaffirmed her..leela returned her a smile...''maa..''twinkle called out and came to leela...''aap yaha kyu kade ho..wahaa sab log aapko bula rahe hai''twinkle pouted and spoke...leela smiled at her and made her meet usha..''twinkle yeh dekho kaun aaya hai''...twinkle was surprised..''usha aunty aap??aap kab aaye ??maine aapko dekha hi nahi..''twinkle asked..."mai abhi thodi der pehle aaya tha..jab naach gaana chal raha tha..waise beta tum aaj bohoth khoobsurat lag rahe ho..nazar na lage tujhe''saying this usha took some kajal from her eyes and smudged it behind her ear.and blessed her by keeping her hand on her head...twinkle smiled...leela stood there with happy tears in her eyes...if twinkle and kunj's marriage happened ..she would not only get a loving husband but a loving mother in law too...''waise kunj kahaan hai??maine usse bhi nahin dekhi..''twinkle asked..."usne aane se mana kar diya..kaha kuch zaroori kaaam hai office me..issliye mein akele hi aagayi"usha stated...twinkle gave an understanding smile..leela was happy that twinkle asked about kunj..this meant that she liked him..but that was not enough..she had to convince twinkle for marriage without forcing her..

the rest of the night passed smoothly with everyone enjoying to their heart's content.

leela and twinkle reached home the next morning as chinki had insisted on their stay at night in her place..which they couldn't deny..twinkle moved upsatairs to her room and decided to have a good sleep..there was obviously no work today..and she was hell tired after all the adventure she had done the previous night,,,as soon as she moved into the room she slumped on the bed covering herself with the duvet and turning the air conditioning on...leela walked into the room to see her pretty angel sleeping...she looked very cute...a tear fell from her eyes remembering how fast the time passed..her angel who used to play in her slap and walk with her baby feet holding her hands has now grown up...she wanted to relive her angel's childhood moments...she placed her hand on her head and started caressing her hairs...twinkle smiled in her sleep sensing her mother's touch...''babaji meri twinkle ko saari khushiyaan de...aur usse ek acche jeevan saathi de jo usse der saare pyaar kare aur uska khayal rakhe''leela prayed...she bended down and kissed twinkle's forehead and moved out of the room


It was evening..twinkle woke up from her sleep''offo babaji me itne der tak soo raha tha..jaldi se neeche jata hoon''she was surprised as to how much she slept ''maa..''she called out descending the stairs.''tum itni jaldi uthgaye??''leela teased..''m..maa mujhe chedo mat...mujhe bhi nahi pata ki me itne der tak kyu soo rahi thi.''twinkle spoke...''achha who sab chhod ye juice pii le.''leela said forwarding the juice glass...she took the glass and started sipping it..."puttar ...mujhe tumse baat karni thi''...leela mumbled unsure of what is going to happen after she discloses the topic to twinkle about her marriage..."haan toh bolo naa.."twinkle said looking up..she placed her hand on leela's and asked her to speak up through her eyes.."puttar...kunj ke bare me tere kya kehna hai??''...leela asked nervously..."kunj ke bare mein??..kyun??twinkle asked confused..."who puttar bas aise hi pooch raha tha...acha haina who??leela asked..."who toh bohoth accha hai maa..uske saare zimmedari nibhana usse bakhoobi aate hai..bohoth caring hai woh''twinkle spoke...leela felt happy listening this...''twinkle who kya haina kal usha ji mujhse mile the..''leela told...''who toh mujhe bhi pata hai ..mai thi na wahaan pe''twinkle stated...''haan...who mai keh rahi thi..usha ji kal mujhse ek baat kahi thi...who...''leela said nervously..only to be interrupted by twinkle..''maa aap yeh who..woh..kya kar raha hai??''twinkle asked confused as to why her mother was behaving so...''who puttar...usha ji ne kunj ke liye tere haath shaadi mein maangi thi''...leela quickly spilled out...''kya??''...that was the only thing twinkle uttered out...''puttar mujhe pata hai tujhe ab shadi nahi karni par kunj bohoth accha hai puttar...shaayad yeh rishta ki baath delay karne ki wajah se who kissi aur shaadi karega.''leela spoke asking her to think on it...''toh kya hai maa uski shaadi hui toh...maa mujhe pata hai kunj bohoth accha hai ..par shaadi ..meri job..mein confused hoon''...twinkle spoke up...''puttar main tujhe force nahi kar raha hoon par...par tum ek baar usse mil toh sakthe hai na..phir tum jo decision logi main tumhaari sath hoga..''leela told her...''maa usse milne ki kya zaroorat hai..mai toh usse pehle se hi jaanthi hoon aur hum ek doosre se mile bhi the''twinkle asked..''puttar who milna aur yeh milna alag hai..jab tum usse kal milne jaaongi..toh usse samajhne ka aur jaan ne ka oshish karna..iss tarah tumhe pata chal jayega who tumhare liye perfect hai ya nahi..aur puttar ek aur baath yaad rakhna..bina soche samjhe conclusions pe mat pohochna...''leela said...''ok maa agar aa keh rahe toh me usse kal zaroor milne jaaungi...aunty ko keh dena...mai central park mai aajaungi..time aap dono milkar fix lar lena''twinkle said finally agreeing..and walked back to her room...leela was soo happy...

She took her phone and called usha...she attended''hello''...''hello usha ji..mai leela hoon...wo mujhe yeh kehni thi ki twinkle ne kunj se milne ke liye haan kardiya..kal kunj ko keh dena who central park me aajaye..aur time who toh hum dono se fix karne ke liye bhi kaha tha twinkle ne''.leela spoke excitedly...''mei aaj bohoth khush hoon leela ji..toh twinkle se keh dena who evening 4 baje aajaye..mai kunj ko keh doongi''she spoke...she cutted the call...''finally mera sapna poora honewale hai twinkle aur kunj ki shaadi.."she spoke folding her hands..

She heard the bedroom door opening..kunj was coming out...she called out ''kunjjj''...he turned back..and stood there expressionless looking at her...''kal tum twinkle se milne jaa rahe hai 4 baje cental park mein''usha spoke...''mein kisise se milne nahi ja rahi''he spoke rudely..he didn't want such a meet because of usha...''kunj..maine yeh decide kiya hai...tum jaanthe ho twinkle kitne acche hai''she spoke...he just returned an uninterested smirk...''usse milke to aa..phir hum decide karenge ki kya karna hai"...she spoke..."hmm fine''..he said in a deadly tone
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Posted: 9 years ago
PRECAP:

''ALISHA...''..he muttered ...''kya tum use abhi bhi pyaar karte ho??''she asked unsure of what else to speak...''haan...mei pyaar sirf uss se karta hoon...zindagi me kabhi bhi kissi aur se pyaar nahi kar payega ...''he spoke...closing his eyes..giving colours to his memories with his love...so that whatever he spoke now made him feel that he told about her and not anyone else...


guyyyss...I beg u please leave ur comments...please atleast a word I wud be sooo happy😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
What's kunj doing?
I m scared. ..

Update soon. ..

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaveerkti

What's kunj doing?

I m scared. ..

Update soon. ..

THANX FOR THE COMMENT ...😛😛..IN WHICH UPDATE??u mentioned about the precap...
no need to get worried..

will try...but I need comments to forward my story...better say review..wud be happy if u have gave one😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Though m so busy but commenting this for you!!
I m actually confused?
Suspense han!!
I m lovin' it 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Komal1298

Though m so busy but commenting this for you!!

I m actually confused?
thanx a lot dii taking ur time out fr commenting..i feel glad😃😃
that's the reason why i want reviews ...so that i get to know what readers understood..theres no point in me writing if readers didn't understand what i actually wrote...or what i am trying to convey😛😛
Suspense han!!
yea...😉😉
I m lovin' it 👏
thanx a looot😳😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a nice update. Kunj was following twinkle. Now why is he uninterested in her? Also read all parts in one go. It is amazing. I hope endgame is twinj. Continue soon. Precap is scary.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: tikit

Such a nice update.thanx a loot😳😳 Kunj was following twinkle when??😕. Now why is he uninterested in her?everything has a reason😉 Also read all parts in one go.glad u took time for reading it😃😛 It is amazing thanx a loot once again😳😳. I hope endgame is twinj.depends if u want I can change it into yuvi twinkle..its not a big deal..u cud have make out from the chapters itself...yuvi isn't playing any revenge game but he seriously loves twinkle😛😛 Continue soon will try😳. Precap is scary.really??😕.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Amazing update dear. Loved it.
Continue soon please.
Thanks for pm.

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