Ratri....DESTINED TO BE..!! Part 1 posted on page 1 (02-09-2016)

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Hi peeps..
So another awesome idea popped up into my head...
Ideas toh bahut hain..but time nahi hai...likhne kaa..!!
But just couldnt keep myself from starting this one...!!

Its a really different concept..!!

Hope you all like this one too...

Enjoy the teaser for now..!!

Destined To Be..!!!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Destined To Be..!

Teaser:

Raghav wakes up to find himself in a strange room. Rubbing his eyes he looks around. He finds himself in a big room, with an amazing decor, he sees a big framed photo of himself on the wall in front.

"Maine kahan hoon..?"
He looks all around and gets off the bed. He looks at the shelf full of his books. Opening the drawer he find his favorite music cds, his rubic cube .
He looks amazed and tries to remember what had happened.
The last thing he remembers was he had broken up with Ria. He was disgusted at her name,she had been dating him all the while thinking he was rich and the moment she came to know he was not, she had insulted him and he angrily had left the place on his bike.

He held his head..confused .."usske baad kya hua.."
He goes out of the room to the hall...only to find himself in a huge hall with a huge balcony on one side.

He turns and sees a luxury kitchen where a woman dressed in capries and a long sleeveless kurta was cooking with headphones in her ears, swaying to music.
He was lost for a while...just admiring her.

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely and interesting concept continue soon
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Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely and interesting concept continue soon


1st part on the Way..!!
I just couldn't keep myself from penning this one..!!

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Destined To Be..!

Part 1:

Raghav wakes up to find himself in a strange room. Rubbing his eyes he looks around. He finds himself in a big room, with an amazing dcor, he sees a big framed photo of himself on the wall in front.

"Maine kahan hoon..?"
He looks all around and gets off the bed. He looks at the shelf full of his books. Opening the drawer he find his favourite music cds, his rubic cube .
He looks amazed and tries to remember what had happened.
The last thing he remembers was he had broken up with Ria. He was disgusted at her name,she had been dating him all the while thinking he was rich and the moment she came to know he was not,she had insulted him and he angrily had left the place on his bike.

He held his head..confused .."usske baad kya hua.."
He goes out of the room to the hall...only to find himself in a huge hall with a huge balcony on one side.

He turns and sees a luxury kitchen where a woman dressed in capries and a long sleeveless kurta was cooking with headphones in her ears, swaying to music.
He was lost for a while...just admiring her.

He then came back to the real world. And started wondering what the hell was happening he was here with this lady in the kitchen...!
He closed his eyes trying to recollect what had happened. But was startled by a voice.

"Good morning Raghav, tum manage kaise karte ho itni der tak sona manna ki Sunday hai phir bhi"
He opened his eyes and saw her, with a puzzled expression.
To himself in his head "Who is she..?? How does she know my name..??"

She sees him.."Aise kyaa dehk rahe hoo..? Don't worry maine tumhare liye bhi nastha banaya hai...!"
He still looking at her..."...Tum...Kaun ho..?"
She gives an annoyed look.."I am trying to be sweet aur tum...you know what galti meri hai...you are impossible...!! Khanna hai toh khao..!!" seeing him with folded hands.
"Look...mujhe sach mein nahii pata ki tum kaun hoo...main yahan kaise aaya..?"
"Raghav please stop acting ...yeh idea bahut stupid hai mujh par nahii chalega..!!"
He looking with disbelief...and annoyed.."R u mad..?? Maine nee kahan naa main tumhe nahii janta..!! Dehko tell me maine kahan hoon aur yahan kaise aaya...warna tumhare liye bahut buraa hoga..!!

"Raghav stop it..."
Raghav-"Arey ajeeb hoo...dehko don't act smart. Just answer my questions...tum nahii janti tum kis ke saath panga le rahi ho.."

With attitude " Really..?"
Raghav looks annoyed "Main ek CBI officer hoon"

She laughs."Arey waa yeh yaad hain par main kaun hoo yeh nahi pata...Raghav you lost it, maine uloo nahi banungi..."

He is annoyed and screams. "Stop it..."

She becomes silent.
"Maine yahan kyaa kar raha hoon ...tum kaun ho...main yahan kaise..."

She becomes alert seeing him confused...and helpless with his hand on his head.
"Tum kya bol rahe hoo ..."

Raghav annoyed.."tumhe samajh nahii aata kya...main yahan kaise?.. tum kaun hoo"

She looks shocked...!!"Tum sach mein nahii jaante main kaun hoon"

He hits her head.."Nahiii"

She is confused...thinks..."Raghav aaj ki date kya hai"

He looks at her making a face...
"IAb mujhe samaj mein aa raha hain... ...tum pagal ho...ek toh mujhe yahan le aai aur ab stupid sawaal kar rahi hoo..!!"

For once why couldn't he answer her straight. Taking a dep breath.."Please batao kya tummein aaj ki date maaloom hai.."
He looks at her...thinks...2nd December 2015.
She looks on shocked.
He tries to study her expression.
She sits on the nearby chair shocked.

Raghav "kya hua..?"

"Aaj ki date 1st sept 2016 hai..!!"

Raghav-"What??"

He sits down on the opposite chair with his face in his palms.
She sighs. Gets water for him to drink and pulls her chair close to his and sits.
"Raghav relax...Maine Trisha hoon tumhari patni"
Raghav chokes while drinking water. Trisha immediately rubs his back.
Raghav looking at her with wide eyes.
in his mind "What the hell meri shaadi bhi hogayi hain...God inn 9 mahino mein kya kya hua...Maine SHAADI kar lii...!!"He gulps.

Trisha-"Look Raghav stress mat lo, I think we should right away go the doctor."
Raghav-"Nahii ..pehle mujhe batao kii inn 9 mahino mein kya kya hua aur tum meri patni kaise...'
Trisha-"theek hain magar tum apne dimaag par strain mat dena.."
Raghav nods.

P.S.
Hope you would like this story.
please lemme know how was this part..!! Should I continue..?
And yes Next update will mostly be 2 weeks ke baad..!!

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely begin
Ratri are a married couple but it's shocking that Raghav doesn't remember his past 9 months of life. Trisha is his wife. Did Raghav met with an accident 9 months back because of which he lost his memory and now he regained it forgetting Trisha? Continue soon
By the way is it a TS or Fs or Ss?
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Wao...it's too good Anni... Raghav have lost his memory...he has forgotten his wife-Trisha...it's shocking... He has forgotten a year...Feeling very bad for Trisha...
Love this update a lot... Will wait fr the next part dear...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Az07

Lovely begin
Ratri are a married couple but it's shocking that Raghav doesn't remember his past 9 months of life. Trisha is his wife. Did Raghav met with an accident 9 months back because of which he lost his memory and now he regained it forgetting Trisha? Continue soon
By the way is it a TS or Fs or Ss?



Thanks.😊
As of now even I dont know..!!
Longer then three parts for sure..!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shaina744

Wao...it's too good Anni... Raghav have lost his memory...he has forgotten his wife-Trisha...it's shocking... He has forgotten a year...Feeling very bad for Trisha...
Love this update a lot... Will wait fr the next part dear...


Thanks..😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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such a awesome start anika. loved the concept soo much so Ratri are married and raghav does not not remember 9months of his life .such a interesting story pls do continue soon

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