One Last Dance SaHil TS Part 2 updated - Page 6

THE FEELS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Would you believe me if I said I needed a moment to comprehend the story? Would you believe me if I told you that I actually shed a few tears.

*Takes a deep breath*

I cannot get a hold of my emotions! Esha, what have you done? I cried buckets while reading.. 😭

I'm so honored that I got a chance to read this incredible piece. I was a bit late, but you know how busy.. I cannot express how beautiful this story is. I can read it over and over again - and I will!

And that song! I have imagined them so many times on this song. It just fits perfectly on this heartwarming couple.

I had goosebumps running through my body as I my eyes went to each and every word you wrote. 😳

The only source of light was the one shining through the dark curtains, yet the two souls could clearly see one another, and there was nothing else they wanted to look at.

So beautifully written! Wow..

I could easily see the shear desperation in Aahil's brown eyes. Esha, you got your ways with words..👏

Aahil felt her! His Sanam! She was still there! He could hear her heart beating. For him! He could sense her body reacting! To him! How could he leave her behind! Sanam come on please remember me! Your Aahil! Stop me from leaving! Tell me that your only mine and I... I am only yours!

I'm in an emotional wreck right now..

She wanted to be free!

I feel like I could quote the whole thing. Really, I'm not even kidding.

The dance was so passionate and the heartfelt conversation they had in the dark.

The tears, the desperation, the need, the feel, the touch.. Oh so beautiful! ❤️

You're such an incredible and gifted writer, Esha.. And I'm so looking forward for another piece of your beautiful work.

I loved how you used their moments and I could feel Sanam's confusion. She can still feel him linger on her skin. And the way you reminded us of the Graveyard scene. It sure took me back of the days where we all fell in love with Aahil Raza Ibrahim and Sanam Ahmed Khan. - That scene was the beginning of SaHil's journey. The very first step he took toward anyone - toward her. ❤️

And the ending broke my heart into million tiny pieces. Please, tell me that nothing is going to happen to Aahil.

Thank you so much for writing such an emotional story that it made me fill with so much love for our passionate SaHil. 🤗

Esha, you're such a beautiful soul. Lots of love to you, dear! <3