Amri's ShiVika Story Gallery: NEW SS |Puppy Love| Pg 3 *Complete*

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We ShiVikians been having quite a ball with the 50th AT and have posted a number of VM's, snippets, GIFS, creations and stories in the thread. Please do check the AT to peruse them all- I am sure you'll enjoy them immensely. So much of stuff for your enjoyment in the first page of the AT-





This comprises my contribution- an OS called "The Green Eyed Monster" and a Drabble called "Paradox". Posting it here so that you can tell me what you think of it:)




ShiVika Drabble- "Paradox"


As he pondered unseeingly over the annual financial report of the Oberoi Group, Shivaay Singh Oberoi cast a covert glance at the slender figure sitting in the foyer in the Oberoi mansion, and wondered at how much of a paradox she was.


Anika.


A woman with a mighty heart, encased in a deceptively fragile body.


Seemingly naive and childish, yet her eyes belied a maturity beyond her years.


Her steely ambitiousness; determined to succeed in her work and do it well at any cost. But belying that attitude by letting her heart rule over her head every time.


A fighter- always ready to confront him, to call him out on his obsession with naam, paisa and power with her quick tongue and rapier wit. But she could be so vulnerable too- the slow trickle of tears whenever their confrontations got too intense testified to this.


Proud of herself and her identity, yet, respectful and humble, especially to elders like his Dadi, his Badi Ma and even his own mother.


Dressed smartly and professionally in a white shirt and jeans, she seemed devoid of any overt female charms or womanly wiles.


But God!!! She was beautiful. Not just pretty, beautiful. And what made it more enchanting was that she seemed to be utterly unaware of it.


Though no man who came within a mile of her could help but spot her beauty and be disarmed by her charms.


Oblivious to his scrutiny all this while, she was engaged in checking the preparations for the wedding.


He dragged his eyes off her, urging his mind to stop pondering on this woman's endless contradictions.


His heart seemed to be whispering something alien to him. His brain, however, anxiously affirmed - She is just another woman, nothing more than that. Sighing, he returned to the task at hand, all the while reprimanding himself...


"Mind on the game, Shivaay...mind on the game..."


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Please scroll down for the OS- "The Green Eyed Monster".

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ShiVika OS- "The Green-Eyed Monster"



He grit his teeth as he observed the couple sneakily from the corner of his eyes.


The two of them, standing at one of the tables of a cozy cafe, .chatting and smiling

over piping hot cups of coffee.


It seemed as if they were lost in their own world, completely oblivious to the hustle

and bustle that typified the area. His focus, as usual, drifted to her.


She was listening in rapt attention to whatever nonsense that man was spewing.


In spite of him, his eyes softened involuntarily, as they always did, when she was

within his sights.


A mere glance towards her could take his breath away. The untamed, wavy hair,

the way her face lighted up when she talked excitedly,the red blood of her lips,

classic in its plump vitality...


He basked in the glow of happiness as he took respite in the fact that she was standing

within a mere thirty feet of him. He tore his glance away from her slender,

graceful form, to that of her companion's.


He could not even bring himself to take that man's name.


Siddharth Vikram Rana.


What a silly combination of names. Who the hell had such three names as a name anyway?


Hmph.


Now...Shivaay Singh Oberoi. That sounds dignified and classy, he thought

to himself, with a perverse satisfaction.


[He had conveniently forgotten that his own comprised a mouthful.]


For the life of him, he could not figure out what she saw in the fellow.


Grinning all the while like a stupid monkey, hanging all over her, flirting with her,

and constantly demanding her attention.


Flirting. Hmmph.


He could probably teach that monkey a lesson or two about flirting, properly.


Only Shivaay Singh Oberoi could flirt like no tomorrow.


And remain a gentleman while doing it.


He felt a surge in him as he remembered how fate had conspired to bring them within

an inch of one another- the pool, the falling on the bed, the back hug in

the dark room.


His thoughts came to an abrupt end as he was startled by whatever he saw next.


That...pipsqueak was casually wrapping his arms around her in a friendly gesture.


He waited for her to swat the idiot's hands away.


But she just smiled and let him hold on to her for a full second, before unwillingly freeing

herself from his arms, as if she had liked it!


He clenched his jaw more, if that were possible.


This gesture of hers had... hurt. It was agonizing.


She should just have whipped out a gun and shot him in mercy.


The ugly, green-eyed monster of jealousy that seemed to reside in him permanently nowadays, changed colour.


For now, there was red-hot fury coursing through his veins, painting the entire world red, filling him with the urge to do something violent and destructive with his hands.


He got a grip on himself with great effort, trying hard to retain his sanity.


All this while, he had not been able to fathom why this was happening to him.


This sense of futility and ennui that pervaded everything when he saw her with another man.


But as the full weight of his epiphany sunk in, sense finally dawned on him.


His fate was linked inextricably to this woman, Anika.


And Shivaay Singh Oberoi had to do something about it before it was too late.


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Please go to Pages 3 and 4 for the short story, "Puppy Love".

Edited by YeHoKyaRahaHai - 9 years ago
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INDEX


Post 1: Drabble: "Paradox"
Post 2: One Shot: "The Green-Eyed Monster"
Page 3&4: Short Story: "Puppy Love"



*More to come soon*
Edited by YeHoKyaRahaHai - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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both were grt👏👏i desperately want SVR to flirt wid Ani nw when Shiv is enjoying 3 girls in da show😡😆
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Originally posted by: SRKian

both were grt👏👏i desperately want SVR to flirt wid Ani nw when Shiv is enjoying 3 girls in da show😡😆


Thank you so much! And tell me about it. Shivaay and OmRu seem to have girlfriends in abundance. Abb teenon ladkiyon ki baari hai. Hope SVR flirts with Anika😉
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Originally posted by: YeHoKyaRahaHai


Thank you so much! And tell me about it. Shivaay and OmRu seem to have girlfriends in abundance. Abb teenon ladkiyon ki baari hai. Hope SVR flirts with Anika😉

exactly!discrimination at its best😡😆i want him to ask her out 4 marriage actually.Dat 'll serve shiv rit after all y should boys have all da fun🤣
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Originally posted by: SRKian

exactly!discrimination at its best😡😆i want him to ask her out 4 marriage actually.Dat 'll serve shiv rit after all y should boys have all da fun🤣


Agar flirt hii kar le toh mein khush, I'm easy to please😆

Exactly, why should boys have all the fun?😡😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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enjoyed both os'z
look forward to reading more

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Originally posted by: pennyg

enjoyed both os'z
look forward to reading more


Thank you 😊 More coming soon.😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wowww!!
Really really good both of them!
Bas ab I'm waiting for SVR's entry!! Get on with the flirting!

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