New writer AarYa OS - Bargaining Ship - Page 3

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

I'm so sorry Sassy

Even though I've read it, I'm not commenting.

I'll do,it after I post DV update. Which will be sometime tomorrow.

Then I'll read the whole OS again and comment.

Btw, it was 🤢 And ⭐️

😳Take your time Nikky. And cool DV update is on its way.

Originally posted by: B-onesie

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I loved the story. I waited so long for it and could only read it now.

Loved the reality of the story. Sadly a lot of couples don't fight for their relationship and the guy would have accepted what was on the table to assuage a temporary need. But thank goodness he realised that desperate time calls for desperate measures and he took authority over the relationship.

What a scorcher. What girl doesn't want to swept off her feet like that🤬

He was man enough to confess his mistake and call her out on hers. Yes, it must have hurt but it made her realise that she was not blameless. Everyone and everything took precedence over him. I think he left too long, tried to be understanding until he had reached breaking point.

And she hurt him right back.😆 and the made up for it in a very pleasurable way.

His terms were well put together and she could not refuse as everything was to aid them to build a stronger relationship as husband and wife and to put each other first. As it should be.

It was worth nagging for. ⭐️

Thanks Bee. Thats is so true , too many time I have seen couples split from one mistake that escalate or giving up. Sometimes its worth fighting for what you want. Anyway this was meant to be entertaining not depressed. I do like a happy ending. That said 😳 blushing again , I should rein in my imagination. 😆.

OMG what a passionate wild OS

Originally posted by: cuteariya

OMG what a passionate wild OS

Poor yash was carving for his wife

On the other hand aarti was bg with her responsibilities

Bcoz of sexual frustration yash almost got into another woman

Oops yash took aarti at their new home

Ohh yash was was really wild with aarti at first & didn't even let her to breathe

Ouch aarti almost got heart attack when yash said they need separation

She was hurt knowing some other women kissed her yash

At least this time aarya shared their problems worried everything with their passionate love making

thanks cuteariya, yes at least they talked in the end. That was important

Wow sis congrats on your first Aarya story.
B e a u t i f u l Os s i s i l o v e i t.
I c a n t w a i t f o r y o u r Aarya creations.

Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Wow sis congrats on your first Aarya story.
B e a u t i f u l Os s i s i l o v e i t.
I c a n t w a i t f o r y o u r Aarya creations.

Hi Busi, you're back. Thanks . So now looking forward to yours 😳

So so so so sorry Sassy for being so late in commenting. This is your first story in this forum and I should have commented the moment I read it the first time. But I didn't and I apologize from the bottom of my heart.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

So so so so sorry Sassy for being so late in commenting. This is your first story in this forum and I should have commented the moment I read it the first time. But I didn't and I apologize from the bottom of my heart.

Now coming to this OS...

My first reaction was (and I'm honestly writing what I had felt when I first read it). So my reaction was..

Why? Why? Why? Why we forced you to write? Now I have got one more writer whom I'll secretly envy for being so good in writing and expressing 😳. Yes the list is very long and your nam has now been etched in it ⭐️

You are a Brilliant Writer ⭐️. I wonder where and why you were hiding till now! 🤔

Everything was perfect in this OS ⭐️

I can understand Yash's frustration. He could have been easily swayed away, but he didn't. Why? Because deep down he knows that his Aarti still loves him and still is passionate for her. It's just that her priorities have been slightly (yes slightly) misplaced right now.

When we love someone we start to take them for granted. Same happened with Aarti. Later, later, later, became so much later that unknowingly, unintentionally, Yash took a backseat in her list of priorities. She needed a jolt to make her realize she was committing a mistake by unknowingly ignoring her husband.

Deep down Yash knew that. He knew now it was time to give his wife that jolt. And what a jolt it was. It gave me my possessive Yash

And Aarti,

What I loved about the whole OS is that Yash told her to separate, he told her that he kissed someone and was about to commit a sin with that certain someone. But I feel deep down Aarti knew Yash would never betray her.

Why do I feel this?

Because she was hurting yet she gave him a chance to explain and present his case. She not only realized her mistakes but accepted them, apologized for them AND made up for them. And what a way to make up for those mistakes. 🤢

Sassy thanks so much for this beautiful OS. I thoroughly enjoyed it 🤗

Hi Nikky

You made my day.😊 Please no apologies necessary, ever; I am just grateful that you took the time to read and comment on it. Honestly you are making me blush😳. I can't tell you how much I appreciate your compliments and encouragement and from the wonderful writers on PV forum. I was a bit apprehensive cause I had stop writing for so long despite loving it so much. So I am glad you guys forced me, in a way, and you are too kind and funny 😆, I will get to the brilliant one day hopefully. I don't know where this story came from but I am glad I was able to express it on paper. And you are spot on on what I wanted to get too. I generally like to explore face to face argument where each party present their case as opposed to running away. Its not always easy to admit one fault especially with couple. cheers