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Posted: 9 years ago
hey baby..howz u hmmm I knw my BAE will be rocking always..
hmm oke cmng to the update..what I can say..its as usual awesome.After reading every story of your, I just sit and think, how beautifully you can narrate a simple scenario, so very talented writer you are #hugs

and So the mighty RK is quite into mission Madhu, hmm but I think she is now a very very tough nut and is giving tough time to RK

hahahhahahahahahahha, why is Bittuji blushing hahahhahah i just cant take that hahahhahahhahahah..lol and RK's chastity is at RISK hahahahahahahah

So, Madhu is J of dad and Daughter bond..ofcourse why shouldnt she as she gave her everythign to this angel but but she is giving eual importance to her parents huh, what will happen when a grown up Ruhi gets to knw what her dad has done to her mother ????/

and lastly the apple pie thing hahhahah she is just like RK...hmmm huh

and the way RK was begging for a chance "WAY TO GO MADHU", she begged for his acceptance once upon and now its his turn...wowww KARMA is a BITCH indeed


and ;ast;y thank you so much for being regularm unlike me..

I wrote half of "HIS REVENEGE" but not able to complete that part huh..loads of work doh

oke hugs and loads of kisses to my BAE.take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
About da note...wohooo u r making attraction a short story..good good
N we will b getting more updates of baby daddy..wohooo..I'm so happpyyy..thank u sudha
U r a magnificent writer,v can't thank u enough fr picturizing n portraying rishbala brilliantly n differently in evey story of urs..well-done
Keep up da great job
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...continuing the story...and the banner so loved it...thank u so much for extending the story dii..read all the continued parts in one go ...the cute daddy ruhi moments...how cutely Ruhi said Please...i so wanna kiss her chubby cheeks❤️i was fully engrosed in the story like i am always while watching meiej moments..can visualise each and every scene of the trio...and the complementary bittuji...what he is upto...loving the way you are finely describing the cute daddy daughter moments rk on a repentance spree in a gradual natural way...this is becoming my most favourite story i am reading here...❤️
Hoping for some romantic scenes in next update...as they are in eternal romantic France
Eagerly waiting for next update...kudos to your writing...⭐️ thanks for pm...
Edited by rishbalafan9 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG! all your comments made me cry... (happy tears)
i m so glad to know u all are enjoying this story... & i m also presenting it in a better way...
like all of u even i m loving this Ruhi so much... she is just too adorable... she will do her love magic & bring her parents together one day...
Thanks all...
love u!
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Posted: 9 years ago
gonna post the next part... now! wowhooo!!
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(Banner Credits - Dunyasha)


Q/A - 1. What happened to Bittuji? Why he behaved so weirdly?

Love happened! read the update to know more.😉

2. What Rk- Madhu will do for their living? - That's a Surprise! you will know tat probably in the next or next to next update.

3. Hey, can you show some Rishbala's past lovely moments? - they didn't have a great past. they were together only for few months... Rk used her fully for his needs... then she got preggie & they separated... but still i can relate some past moments with the present... like Madhu thinking about some happy moments or show so how much she loved him in the past.

4. How Ruhi will react once she grows up & come to know what her dad did to her mom? - I will surely take a time leap... may be some 5 - 6 years but not anytime soon... i always love showing Rishbala as young parents LOL! that's why in almost all of my stories Rishbala's kids will be less than 5 years LOL! So yeah, once Ruhi gets little big to understand things, the story will have little bit of twists & turns but nothing serious because i have promised to give you all a happy ending. LOL!

5. Those who all feel sorry for RK then give me 'Hi-Fi' LOL. even i feel so but i guess he deserves it... LOL

6. Those who want Rishbala moments - Be patient! I will surely write some special moments for then when the right time comes.

7. @ Souwmi - Yes, dear i have watched 'Thozha' movie FDFS! I liked that movie though there wasn't any story LOL! and i agree... Rk-Bittuji's relationship is somewhat like Nagarujun- Karthi's but here Rk is not paralysed LOL!

8. @ Asha - Bae! i love you. Lots of hugs & kisses! please do update your stories when u find time... u said u have written half of "His revenge" story... please finish the remaining & post it, pretty!

9. @ Anish di - Wish i could get Rk one watch di as you said... (a time travel watch like the one in Surya's 24 movie) LOL!

10. Those who learned little bit of French then u will learn little more. I can actually read & write French well & speak a lit... but still 'Google Translate' Baba helped me in writing few long lines without mistakes! LOL


Finally, Thanks all for liking this story... few even said that they could imagine the scene well, i narrate the stories well, wished to see this in our show, & stuffs like that... That just made me have a face splitting grin! 😃

You all dazzled me with your sweet comments! Thank u so much guys!

And yeah, you can ask me any questions regarding the story & i will answer like this all together... i couldn't quote each & every comment due to my busy schedule... so sorry...


Part - 9


Rk walked into his room, defeated & slumped down on the couch putting his head in his hand and then he rubbed his face.

"Oh God! Madhu hates me!" Rk moaned loudly. "And I don't deserve her love!" he admitted the fact. "I should stop being a love stuck puppy & hover around her which will only make her hate me more... she is distancing herself from me because she sensed that I was trying to near her... near her heart & find a place in it. I should really stop expressing my feelings to her... I don't want to risk losing Ruhi..."

"Chief, you want a drink?" Bittuji asked seeing Rk talking out loudly to himself like a mad man.

"Sure thing, Bittuji. Bring me something strong."

Bittuji nodded his head & went to the cabinet where liquor bottles were stored.

"Chief, here" He walked back with two glasses of amber liquid in them.

"You alright, Chief?" Bittuji asked in concern. Rk didn't reply but gulped down the drink in one go.

"Chief, I know you are hurt..."

"Hurt? Me?" Rk's body shook with mirth. "It's me who hurt her, Bittuji... I hurt that poor girl, Madhu. She was so young... so innocent... so ambitious! I took advantage of her innocence & f**ked her life. Ahhh!!" he let out a scream in agony.

"Chief, Chief... control yourself. Take it easy!" Bittuji patted Rk's shoulder.

"Yeah, I got the grip." Rk said & with his fingers he pressed his eyes to keep the tears at bay.

"Chief, why don't you two start over again?" Bittuji suggested hopefully.

"She is not ready to trust me."

"May be it's too soon to ask for such a big thing. Trust!" Bittuji stressed the word Trust'. Yeah, Trust takes years to build, seconds to break & forever to repair!

"I know, Bittuji. You know what? The irony is when I didn't love her she trusted me so blindly... and now I am truly in love with her but she is not trusting me." Rk said in pained voice as he took a gulp directly from the bottle this time.

"I want to see her eyes brimming with love for me... I want her... and her love so badly!" Rk said almost pulling his hair off.

"Chief, you should hold some patience" Bittuji said calmly.

"RK & patience never go hand in hand" Rk shook his head.

"Then it won't work!" Bittuji blurted out. Rk looked at him for one good minute.

"Sorry, Chief. I guess I stepped out of the bar..."

"No, what you said was true. I should be patient but its getting really hard when Madhu behaves so cold to me..."

"But Chief..."

"What?"

"You should keep loving her & prove your love to her. One day she will understand the depth of your love till then don't let yourself bother with the way she behaves or treats you... you should feel contented with your daughter for now & hope one day you will win your daughter's mother's love too..."

"Whoa whoa! What's wrong with you bittuji? When the hell you turned to a Love Guru?" Rk asked looking at him in shock. Bittuji blushed.

"Bittuji, wipe that blood damn blush off your face before I do it for you in my way!" Rk growled at him. "You are turning to a girl, Bittuji"

"Um... sorry, Chief... It's just..." Bittuji stammered.

"What? C'mon pop the bubble!"

"I'm in love!" Bittuji said nervously.

Rk looked at him with open mouth. "Don't tell me you are in love with ME!!!" Rk panicked & jumped up from the couch & walked three steps back, closer to the door ready to run if his answer was Yes'.

"No, Chief! I'm not a gay! I love you but like a little brother." Bittuji hurriedly said putting Rk in ease.

Rk heaved a huge sigh of relief before sitting beside him on the couch.

"You never told me you were in love?" Rk asked.

"I was so confused. I didn't know whether it was appropriate to love at this age so I didn't tell before I come to any conclusion."

"Oh Bittuji, you are just 42 years old... besides there is no age bar for love."

"So tell me who is she?"

"You know her."

"Oh! Who?" Rk wondered. "Wait, if your lover is in India then why you came with us leaving her there?" Rk asked.

"No, she is here, in Paris."

"Oh!" Rk frowned then his eyes went wide. "Don't tell it's that bitch who flirted with me in the lobby." Rk said in dread thinking about that 'check-my-boobs-and-kiss-my-ass' receptionist.

"Gah! No!" Bittuji made an Eeww' face.

"Then tell me who it is, dammit!"

"It's Roma"

"Oh that Noodles hair!" Rk couldn't help but burst out laughing. "She hates you, you know that right?" Rk asked amidst his laughter.

"That's curls not noodles!"

"Whatever! She is one funny yet annoying woman." Rk chuckled.

"Chief!" Bittuji said getting offended

"Oops! Sorry. You both will make one great pair. Good luck, Bittuji" "

"Thanks chief but I' sure she don't hate me."

"You seem so confident, Bittuji?"

"Look, Chief, you can never get so mad with a stranger... only you get mad or often bicker & end up fighting like cats & dogs with someone close to you... that clearly shows they have feelings for you but hiding it hard with the mask of anger..."

"Bullshit!" Rk muttered. He didn't get the damn logic behind it. "So this is what you were so high on from morning... no correction for the past two weeks?" Rk asked changing the topic.

Rk & Bittuji paid a visit to Paris two weeks back to finalize with some paper works for the house he bought for them. That time they met this lady named Roma & Bittuji broke his Brahmacharyam and fell in love with her.

"Why are you blushing so much since morning?"

"I saw her today in the Airport..." Now, Rk got the reason why Bittuji was behaving so weirdly.

"And from that moment you were dreaming about her & blushing like a new bride?" Rk asked teaaingly. "But then why you were literally jumping up and down when I suggested we could share a room?"

"That's because I was too excited to share this news with you & I also need your help, Chief?"

"My help? In what?"

"You know like how to impress a girl... how to woo her... how to make her fall in love with me... and stuffs like that..."

"Hold on!" Rk stopped him & glared at him.

"What, Chief?" Bittuji asked in confusion seeing the sudden change in Rk's expression.

"Are you mocking me?" Rk asked shooting his brow up.

"No, chief! I swear." Bittuji pinched his throat but Rk still gave him an incredulous look.

"If I had known to woo my girl, my Madhu... then I wouldn't be kicked out of the room by her & sitting here with you having this f**king chit-chat" Rk grumbled. Then Rk's phone bussed in his shirt pocket.

"Hello, Madhu? You okay? Is Ruhi crying?" Rk asked over the phone hearing Ruhi's loud cry.

"Come to our room!" She said & hung up the phone.

"Bittuji, I'm going. Ruhi is crying." Rk said as he raced to the front door.

"But Chief, wait!"

"What?"

"Take a quick shower & go. You smell of alcohol!"

"Oh shit! She will surely kill me if I step closer to Ruhi like this." Rk said & hushed to the bathroom all the way stripping his cloths. He stood under the cold shower as water gushed over his body. He even gargled his mouth with Listerine mouth freshener. Not even bothering to wipe his wet body, he just threw his boxers, track pants & T-shirt over his body & rushed out.

"What took you so long to c'mere from the next door?" Madhu asked glaring at him as soon as she opened the door.

"I was in the shower. Sorry. Why she is crying?" Rk asked stepping in & made a beeline to the bedroom where he heard Ruhi's cry.

"Mon ange! Why are you crying? Are you hungry? " Rk asked as he sat on the bed next to her twitching her button nose. Her nose was running as a result of her crying. "Aww... Dirty girl!" Rk teased & wiped her nose with a baby wipes tissue.

"Now, it's better." Rk said with a smile & kissed her pretty pink button nose.

"Look, your Papa is here... so now you better stop your tantrums & lie down & sleep, Ruhi!" Madhu ordered her little girl holding her hands on her hips. Ruhi looked at her momma with puppy dog eyes.

"What, now?" Madhu asked raising her voice but in a playful tone.

Ruhi took her ball & showed it to Madhu indicating she wanna play.

"No, sleep" Madhu climbed up on the bed & tucked her under the covers.

But she sat up on the bed & turned to her dad with a mischievous smile.

"Oye, Missy! He is also going to sleep so no one is going to play with you." Madhu said.

Ruhi ignored her momma & looked at her dadda & smiled at him making him melt.

Actually his head started to throb as an after effect of drinking & he knew he will surely have a pretty bad hangover if he fail to sleep but still he wanted to play with his daughter.

He looked up at Madhu asking her permission.

"No, you are not going to play. She needs her sleep so do us. We had a long day right?"

"I know but ..." Rk trailed off.

Madhu just shook her head & switched off the bed side lamp hoping Ruhi will sleep now as it was fully dark & she won't dare to sneak out of the bed & go play while they both had slept.

"Ahhh..." Ruhi cried an ear piercing cry making Rk & Madhu to jump off the bed.

When Rk switched on the lights Ruhi threw the ball in her hand at Madhu angrily.

"Oh my! She has a temper." Rk said in a whisper fearing Ruhi will hear him & hit him with another ball.

"Ruhi!"

"Mama!" Ruhi shouted back in her sweet baby voice.

"Sleep!"

"Nah!" She stuck her tongue out making her momma angry & her Papa to laugh out loud.

"Girls! Girls! Girls! Stop fighting. Madhu you sleep. I will play with her in the hall till she falls asleep." Rk stopped them from glaring at each other.

"You are not my daughter! You are my mother in law!" Madhu scowled at her daughter. Ruhi pouted her pretty pink lips & opened her arms for her father to pick her up.

"She will sleep throughout the day & at night times she will stay awake & torture us!" Madhu mumbled & tiredly laid on the bed while Rk took Ruhi to the living room. He set Ruhi on the floor & spread all her toys around her for her to play. He turned on the TV & reduced its volume so that he won't disturb Madhu sleeping in the other room.

"Papa" Ruhi patted the floor asking him to sit closer to her & not to sit on the couch. Her wish was his command!

Ruhi had wrapped her Papa in her little finger. Period.

Rk flipped the channels & stopped at cartoon network and started watching Tom & Jerry'. Ruhi was playing with her building blocks when she heard her dad's soft laugh. She looked up at him & then at the TV, then back at her dad & started laugh just because her dad was laughing though she didn't understand why Tom was chasing Jerry. Rk scooped Ruhi up & cradled her to his chest.

"She didn't sleep yet?" Madhu asked walking out of the room.

"You didn't sleep yet?" Rk asked back.

"I couldn't sleep. Come to bed..."

"Me?" Rk asked in surprise with a wide grin.

"With Ruhi" Madhu clarified that she wasn't inviting him to bed... well, not alone!

"Baby, shall we go to bed?" Rk cooed at Ruhi as he kissed her temple. She shook her head in no.

"Play, Papa play!" she bounced on his lap, shaking her fist hands in the air.

Rk looked up at Madhu, helplessly. Madhu sighed & walked towards him & jumped up on the couch, curling herself to a ball.

"Rk..."

"Hmm..."

"Can we stay in here, in the suite room tomorrow... um, I mean today?" she corrected as it was almost 4 in the morning. "I don't think I have the energy to get ready and go out... I'm hell tight so can we reschedule our sightseeing for some other day?"

"Okay, my love. We will simply cuddle in the bed." Rk said grinning staring at the TV but he knew she was boring her blazing eyes at him from behind.

"Don't call me that!" Madhu said through gritted teeth. She hated it when he called my love' or she forced herself to believe that she hated it.

Rk glanced back & smirked at her. Madhu shook her head & went back to watch the TV.

After sometimes, Rk suddenly woke up from his sleep. He didn't know when sleep took over him. He was still on the floor & the TV was still on. He took the remote & switched off the TV and looked at his side to find Ruhi sleeping on the floor with the hands & legs wide spread looking like a star fish. Rk chuckled & brushed the lock of hair off her forehead & kissed it. Then he looked over his shoulder to find Madhu sleeping peacefully on the couch, she too had her hair sprawled over her face. Rk slowly moved the strand of hair & tucked it behind her soft ear. He couldn't resist himself but kiss her, well not on her forehead like how he kissed Ruhi but on her soft pulpy lips. To his surprise Madhu kissed him back in her sleep.

"Oh god! She tastes so sweet." Rk moaned softly. He felt her lips as manna from heaven! He wanted to shove his tongue in her mouth & drink in her sweetness.

Before losing his control he stood up & first picked Ruhi from the floor & took her to the bedroom & gently placed her on the crib attached to the bed. Then he came back to the hall & cautiously lifted Madhu in his arms without waking her up & walked to the room & settled her gently on the bed next to Ruhi & then he slipped in beside her. Rk gave a gently tug to her hand & Madhu instantly rolled over & rested her head on his chest and Rk wrapped his arm around her shoulder, hugging her closer to him, he went to deep slumber.

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How Bittuji met Roma?... what role she will play? - will be answered in the upcoming update. All i can say for now is... Rama will be a support to Madhu... like how Bittuji is to Rk. 😉

I always wished Bittuji & Roma to be paired in our show... but that didn't happen... so i m making my dream come true here. 😆


Hope you all liked the update!

Thanks!

(P.S - I don't know why but I couldn't send bulk PMs... (can anyone tell me why & help me?) it shows I'm blocked from sending PMs LOL. so I try sending 10 or 20 PMs & sometimes it works but not all the time. (I simply get frustrated then... IF sucks at times LOL) i even try sending one set of PM's from phone.. then switch to laptop then back to phone... in all that jumping I miss few names in the list.. so sorry if you didn't get my PM though you are in my buddy list...)


Edited by madhurish - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhurish

OMG! all your comments made me cry... (happy tears)

i m so glad to know u all are enjoying this story... & i m also presenting it in a better way...
like all of u even i m loving this Ruhi so much... she is just too adorable... she will do her love magic & bring her parents together one day...
Thanks all...
love u!


Better is underrated word dii...it's marvellous love u too dii...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry for super duper late. I wasn't in home, and network wasn't so good. So. Will read and comment now.

For pt 8
Madhu!! She is becoming so insecure.
She thinks Ruhi will become daddy's baby!! Oh Madhu!! Ruhi loves both of you!! Don't worry. And she is afraid she'll fall in love. Oh Madhu, he has been changed. Can't you see changes in him? But, yaa you'll need time to trust him. But from Rk's charm, you'll fall in love soon whether you want it or not

French!!! You know French?? Wow!!! Seeing Rk speaking so fluently, I think Madhu'll is also impressed.

That chest pain, I also thought Madhu said to Rk. But , she had said to Ruhi. Poor Rk, that made me emotional. She didn't care for him. But she will have too, soon. Don't worry Rk and don't lose hope.

Bittuji's blush!!! Too much. Why is he blushing k. Rk scolding him for behaving like that receptionist girl lol.

Ruhi, sitting in table like princess. She is princess for her parents. Both love her a lot and me too. Too cute she is. Reading the scenes only, I can imagine her cuteness. Girl, not eating anything, troubles Rk and Madhu a lot. Rk- Madhu's banter while feeding, lol.
Atlast Bittuji fed her.

Rk- poor him, couldn't sleep with his girls. Tried so much but Madhu became too stubburn. He was right, Ruhi learnt to be stubborn from her mother. But, that day will also come soon.

Thank you so much for pm and this lovely update.
Now time for pt9.
Edited by kaustavi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome.. Baby awesome..

This ruhi! I know you will be irritated bcoz I always Sings Ruhi is so cute.. Ruhi yeh.. Ruhi Vo.. But I.. I.. Love her so much..

God! Rk kissed Madhu.. And she kissed him back.. In sleep..

Bittuji in love.. Hyeee.. With Roma.. Cute.. Bittuji become Love guru.. Hehe
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Res for pt 9

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Wow!! Wow!! Rk kissed Madhu even though in sleep and Madhu too kissed back. I can't help but be happy for that.

So, Bittuji fell in love. That's why, weird behavior. Achha!!! But he gave Rk a lot gyan.

Now, Roma will be Madhu's support. Hmm...she also needed support. So, happy for Madhu. And Bittuji, he found the love of his life. I feared like Rk, he'll tell yes, with you, lol.
Yeah, love has no age boundaries.

Ruhi, so stubborn, want to play then play.
But, because of her stubbornness, Rk could sleep with them, yah!!!! Poor Rk ,despite of being too tired, couldn't refuse to his little girl.

Rk watches Tom and jerry lol. Haha, this Rk, never fails to say something like that. Madhu!!

Rk is having too many dirty thoughts for Madhu. But he has to reach that stage.

They are sleeping close. Now, what'll Madhu do in morning. Waiting for the reaction.

Awesome update. Loved it. Thanks for pm.

And wow!!! You're making 'The Attraction' ss.
Yay!!!! And it is coming soon, wow!!!!!! Thank you so much!!
And this story too, so glad that you're not ending soon. This is becoming so good. Thank God, you decided to continue this. Otherwise we would miss these lovely updates.
Edited by kaustavi - 9 years ago

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