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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kumari27

It was nice update!!!

Mriara ko ek pal ki judai...barson ki lag rahi...

Adi ka kidnap...toh ho gay
..BT nandini...has another plan...

Now she will cheat kalawati...

Thanks for update...



Thanks dear 😳 πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

MriAra are love sick πŸ˜ƒ

Lets see whether Nandini is able to cheat Kala as her previous attempts were not successful 😊

Thanks for reading


Updating today 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: IlaTanwar

It was a beautiful update


Glad to know you liked it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 8 years ago

Next morning Tara was at the palace to meet the Princess. When she reached her chamber, she saw it enveloped in darkness which spread everywhere. She opened the curtains and saw the Princess sleeping on the ground. She might have slept there weeping. Her cheeks were still wet because of the tears. She touched her to wake her up, "Princess..."


"Prince!!!" Meethi exclaimed as soon as she opened her eyes thinking that the Prince had returned, but Tara was there. Meethi then ran in the room in search of the Prince thinking he might be hiding to tease her but he was nowhere.

After realizing that he had not returned, she came to Tara and hugged her tightly. "Tara where is Aditya?" said Meethi sobbing.

"He will be here soon." said Tara.

"You are telling me truth?" At that time Meethi needed assurance of the Prince's return and so Tara assured her of it. Even though she too didn't know how but she was sure she would figure out a way to bring happiness to the Palace and to Wonderland.


She made Meethi sit and was going out of the Princess's chamber when she saw Princess Vasundhara standing outside Meethi's chamber. Princess Vasundhara hugged Tara. Tara said,

"It's time for you Princess to become the support of your family. You need to stay strong at this moment of crisis."

After kissing her on the forehead, she proceeded towards the Queen's chamber to see how she was. She was thinking about the Queen's condition.

"She is not only the Queen but a mother too, whose elder son is dead and the other son is kidnapped. What she must be going through?"

Her pain was unimaginable to Tara.



The Queen met Tara on her way to Meethi's chamber. She didn't speak a word to Tara because she saw a shine in Tara's eyes which was the indication of good arriving to the Palace.

Tara said, "Very soon the Prince will be here." The Queen caressed her head.



She rushed out of the Palace. She knew all her answers were with Mrityunjay, her love her life. The sun was shining brightly; it was late for her to reach his place. She knew if she was late he would be worried for her. She was almost running in the forest. She fell many times on her way to Mrityunjay. Her dress became dirty and her long sleeves were torn because of the thorns when her foot stumbled on a stone.

Although her foot was swollen and paining and bruises on her hand were paining and bleeding, she continued to run as whenever she remembered Meethi's face and her pain of separation from Aditya, she found her pain negligible. But her legs were not supporting her, so for a moment she sat to breathe in some air but in that moment she imagined herself in the place of Meethi and shivered. Without Mrityunjay there is no Tara. Thinking this she walked faster.


Here at his place Mrityunjay was cuddling Maria. He said, "Maria you know I never knew life is so beautiful until I met her. She is the breath in me."


When Tara saw Mrityunjay cuddling Maria, she stopped at the gate.

"He is there, my life is there. My Mrityunjay is there."

Then suddenly she remembered about Meethi, just her thought scared Tara to the core. She ran towards Mrityunjay and hugged his back tightly. He smiled and tried to lose her grip. She didn't want to lose him so when Mrityunjay tried to free himself from her hug and see her, she tightened her grip. She rested her head on his back.


"Never leave me." she murmured.

She was breathing heavily. He suspected something weird and when he saw the bruise on her hand he forcefully dragged her in front of him. He was shocked to see the bruises on her hand and dirt on her dress.


"What happened to you Tara? Are you all right?" he said caressing her wounds and then her face.

"Come sit." He took her to the chair kept outside the house.

"How did this happen?"

He rushed inside the house to bring a cloth and water to clean her wounds. He gave her water to drink and started cleaning her wounds.




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Posted: 8 years ago

Tara was quietly watching him and thinking, "How much he cares!"

He was continuously asking her how she was injured but she was lost in praising her destiny, Mrityunjay. She held his hand and said,

"Never leave me Mrityunjay."


He immediately stopped speaking and sat next to her and asked,

"What happened Tara? Why are you so...?"

Before he could complete his sentence, she hugged him surprising him again. He understood she was worried about something.


He caressed her and said,

"I am not going anywhere Tara, I am and will always be with you. You are my life Tara. Tell me what happened, why you are so worried?"

He slowly lifted her face.


"Prince Aditya, he is missing. The vampire abducted him."


Mrityunjay was shocked on hearing this.

"What!! When, from where he went missing??"


Tara narrated the whole story.

"Mrityunjay I had seen Princess Meethi's condition without the Prince. And I..."

He sealed her trembling lips by his and took her in his embrace. After a short but satisfying kiss, he released her lips. Tara was feeling safer now. He slowly cut the cloth from her sleeves taking care that he doesn't hurt her. Each time when his fingers touched her hand, she shivered. He cleaned the wounds with water. Then slowly he lifted her gown to clean her bleeding foot. He saw a thorn still stuck in her leg. He removed it and she cried out in pain. He kissed the wound which was made by the thorn, and she smiled shyly. Then he cleaned it. By the time he finished cleaning her wounds, Guruji arrived.



Seeing his daughter hurt, he got worried and rushed to her.

"What happened Tara? How did you get these wounds?" asked Govind, who had met his daughter after years.

He like any other father wanted to keep his daughter happy and safe. Mrityunjay narrated the whole story of the Prince missing.


"Ohhh I should have read it clearly." murmured Govind.


"Mrityunjay take her out of the forest, she needs rest."


Saying this, he rushed inside. Mrityunjay brought Maria and lifted Tara in his arms and kissed the wounds on her hand and said, "Is it ok?" She smiled shyly. He made her sit and after that rode Maria out of the forest fast. On their way back to the city, Tara hugged him tightly. She was very comfortable in his arms.



When they reached outside the forest, he said,

"Tara it's time for you to go. I am going to find the Prince."

Her face became sad hearing this but seeing the need of the hour, she separated from him and said goodbye with teary eyes.


"Come to me as soon as these wounds heal. Even for me, without you life is nothing."

He said and galloped Maria into the forest and in a second he was out of Tara's sight. He galloped Maria in the direction of where he had last seen the prince. He was sure to find some clue about vampires.


Here Guruji was calculating something and by the time his calculation ended, Mrityunjay arrived.

Mrityunjay said, "It's that same vampire which attacked Tara." But Guruji was lost in his thoughts. He tapped him, "Guruji."


He said, "Time is coming closer very fast."


Mrityunjay was confused hearing this. He said, "What is coming closer?"

"Soon you will know." said Guruji.

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Edited by Archi21 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Meethi is going mad with grief and hopes to see Adi when she wakes up!!!!

It was nice to see Tara consol her and assure her of Adi's return!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

She also encouraged Princess Vasundhara to stay strong for her family!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ

Tara already does behave like she is a part of this family!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

She does feel a lot for Nirmala and their bond is beautiful!!!❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

It is fantastic how Nirmala understood what was in Tara's mind and trusts her so much!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

Mrityunjay seems to be the solution to every problem for Tara!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊

Tara's rushing through the jungle not caring about her wounds was very well described!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘

It was so cute to see Mrityunjay talking to Maria and telling her about how Tara changed his life!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara was relieved to finally see Mrityunjay and ran to hug him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—

She was so terrified by Meethi's condition that she wouldn't let go of Mrityunjay!!!!

Mrityunjay is so caring and him cleaning Tara's wounds was soo sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Tara cannot be away from Mrityunjay at all and right now she needed assurance from him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

Mrityunjay assured her her that he would always be with her and she is his life!!!! ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️

Tara really needed that kiss and if Mrityunjay takes care of her like this then she would surely be fine!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

It was good that Guruji arrived after Mrityunjay was done with his cleaning Tara's wound!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†

Tara surely loves being close to Mrityunjay and I loved the ride back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳

Too bad Tara would have to stay away from Mrityunjay till her wounds heal!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”

But she is strong enough and can manage while he is out searching for Aditya!!!!

Guruji was calculating something and it seems like something big is about to happen!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳

The chapter was awesome!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update as usual!!!
Meethi is in great pain.she is hoping for best but this tym nothing helping herπŸ˜•

It was nice of Tara that she consoles herπŸ‘

Tara make understand vasu as well that she have to strong enough to support family...

Tara always find solution in mj😳

The way she goes to mj is really described by you wellπŸ‘

Mj also thinking abt Tara... talking to Maria that how she changed her life😳

Tara was so terrified by prince abduction that she doesn't loos her grip😳

Mj se door kaise rah Sakti hai...bt she is stronge enough...

What guruji calculating ... something mysterious


Thanks for wonderful updateπŸ˜›

Waiting for next...
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Posted: 8 years ago
really loved the way you show tara's concern and guru ji was calculating the dashas waiting for next
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey Archu dear...

Just started with your FF and found it really interesting.

It's all about the evil witch Kalavati and good Tara and MJ. Thank god MJ is in safe hands and was brought up nicely.

Kalavati is really bad to an extent she killed that young gal just to be young. She just deserves a solid punishment.

They met and as usual MJ didn't like her bak bak chit chat. Hope to read more soon and give my views here.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Hey dear just read your FF and all parts you updated till today.😊 Really a fantastic FF and I love mystery and suspense with this wonderland concept.πŸ‘ The plot is interesting but do continue soon.πŸ˜ƒ Thanks Mahak for suggesting it. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Meethi is going mad with grief and hopes to see Adi when she wakes up!!!!
She was already afraid for him and now news of his kidnapping has broken her

It was nice to see Tara consol her and assure her of Adi's return!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊
She knows her friend she needs surety😊

She also encouraged Princess Vasundhara to stay strong for her family!!!!πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ πŸ‘πŸΌ
Yes, she knows Princess needs encouragement😊

Tara already does behave like she is a part of this family!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
Yes,πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ƒ

She does feel a lot for Nirmala and their bond is beautiful!!!❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Good naa, that she has good bond with her MIL πŸ˜‰πŸ˜Š

It is fantastic how Nirmala understood what was in Tara's mind and trusts her so much!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Yes, future MIL fully understands and trust Tara😊

Mrityunjay seems to be the solution to every problem for Tara!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ 😊 😊 😊 😊
He is complete package, exclusively for TaraπŸ˜ƒ

Tara's rushing through the jungle not caring about her wounds was very well described!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Thank you😳

It was so cute to see Mrityunjay talking to Maria and telling her about how Tara changed his life!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Maria is his best friend πŸ˜ƒ

Tara was relieved to finally see Mrityunjay and ran to hug him!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€— πŸ€—
Yes, she wasπŸ˜ƒ

She was so terrified by Meethi's condition that she wouldn't let go of Mrityunjay!!!!
Yes, she has seen pain of separation😊

Mrityunjay is so caring and him cleaning Tara's wounds was soo sweet!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, he is πŸ˜ƒ

Tara cannot be away from Mrityunjay at all and right now she needed assurance from him!!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
Yes, was afraid by just thought of separation πŸ˜”

Mrityunjay assured her her that he would always be with her and she is his life!!!! ❀️ ❀️ ❀️ ❀️
Yes, he did πŸ˜ƒ

Tara really needed that kiss and if Mrityunjay takes care of her like this then she would surely be fine!!!!πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
Hehehe😳 he will take care this wayπŸ˜‰

It was good that Guruji arrived after Mrityunjay was done with his cleaning Tara's wound!!!!πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜† πŸ˜†
Yes, otherwise it would be awkwardπŸ˜†

Tara surely loves being close to Mrityunjay and I loved the ride back!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳 😳
Yes, she loves being close to himπŸ˜ƒ

Too bad Tara would have to stay away from Mrityunjay till her wounds heal!!!πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜” πŸ˜”
It's for her safety😊

But she is strong enough and can manage while he is out searching for Aditya!!!!
Yes, she will 😊

Guruji was calculating something and it seems like something big is about to happen!!!!😳 😳 😳 😳
Let's wait and read πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜‰
The chapter was awesome!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Thanks for loving it πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ

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