FF Bitter Sweet Symphony-Thread 2. ch 33 - pg 128

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Posted: 9 years ago

#451

Originally posted by: arshuaar
beautifully penned...
thanx for Pm 😊

Thank you! 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

#452

Originally posted by: Preeti.xo
Haha Awww
Finally it's starting off. Hopefully after the redemption they'll be much more comfortable together and Suman will know he's not an evil person but he truly loves her.

Hmmm... maybe, but then twists may come and they might get uncomfortable again. Just saying. 😉 Let's see...

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Posted: 9 years ago

#453

Originally posted by: alinaza
Thank you for dedicating this chapter to me 🤗

What a brilliant chapter! I found it hilarious. Shravan stole the chapter lol! Being his high horse about the misconceptions of Psychiatrists and double standards regarding junior artists killed me lmao. What was truly epic though was Shravan saying "we can do both (i.e. marriage counselling) hehe! Suman didn't even pick up on it!

I do love the writing style of having the story entirely in Suman's POV as it does create mystery and surprises as we not sure what is going on in the background (Shravan and his discussions with his dad and Pushkar, Nanu in hospital, etc).

Though every few chapters a short snippet in Shravan's POV to let us know whats going on in the background would be great.

CANNOT wait for the next chapter!

Anytime, dear! 🤗

Thanks for the lovely comment, dear. And... all the questions will be answered when the time is apt.

Also, of course I'll provide Shravan's POV as well but they'll be very few just like how they have been till now. As you noticed it will sustain the mystery. 😊

Updating in an hour!

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Posted: 9 years ago

#454

Originally posted by: orion23
This was amazing Lara!
Loved it and how!
These two are
Can't wait for the next !!!
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Thanks a lot! ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago

#455

Originally posted by: snehac2
Hey finally read 5chaps together quiet a long catch up
N as always all were amazing
Keep writng such chaps n entertaining us
Updatee soon

I'm really happy that you enjoyed the chapters. Thanks! 😳

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@devilaonmoon

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Posted: 9 years ago

#456

Originally posted by: Kaval05
amazing update. really enjoyed reading the update. these two start anywhere they don't remember their surrounding or anyone around. Once they start fighting they forget everything else. i laughed when the doctor suggested marriage counseling but loved the update. Cannot wait to read what is going to happen when suman goes home. that will be interesting to read about
update soon eagerly waiting to read more

Thanks!

haa haa... 😆, true, you're right about them. Will be updating in an hour.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#457

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Dedicating this chapter to "sman2195". 🤗

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Chapter 25

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Fishy! Isn't it? What do you think is going on that Preethi cut the call like that? Also, point to note that Shravan didn't tell Suman that all those people came over to see her in the hospital. Seriously, what's going on? Let's see how many of you can guess it right.

Did you notice? Shravan has dropped some cryptic comments in the corridor - fate; karma and all that, something different's been whirling on in his head perhaps. And it's definitely a good thing let me assure you guys.

By the way, I hope you haven't forgotten about Meethi and Ramlal, the maid and the guard. They're going to be included in chapters every once in a while.

I know, you guys have now more questions after this chapter, all of them will certainly be answered in apt time.

An important reminder to you all - please don't think that Khurana is out the story yet, he's the annoying third wheel that will barge in when least expected. Talking about third wheels, a fourth wheel may turn up in the future as well. Oh, I'm so excited!

Don't forget to like and comment please, your feedback is what keeps me going. Reading your comments makes my day so make Lara happy and keep commenting.

Take care. Lots of love,

Lara.

P.S. Pm's are sent to those who've liked and commented both on the last chapter (chapter 24).

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