Originally posted by: anonymousanju
Lara dear thanks for pm :) n m sorry for commenting this late...I guess m the last one :( was stuck in a problem... but finally read it now...n wow wat a chapter. .the name in love really suited this chapter... firstly I'd tell the word I loved the most n found hilarious ...ninja skills...God I laughed like maniac...I just imagined how she'd just sneak in n out from his room... cute, lil sumo with tiny fingers...:p the chapter was beautifully written yar .. n the song ...God ...I'm a huge fan of old songs.. I love them .. .they're just beautiful n their beauty will never ever fed away... n the song really fitted out to their situation... sumo u really spoiled the moment in last part n you expect him to act normal... girl no one would do that... n he left for London...I felt numb the moment I read the line he left for London...without informing her...n she too engrossed herself...n the text God he's so sweet n caring...close the windows...ur so lovely Mr malhotra... n she couldn't sleep without him n ramu found something fishy...good lawyer ha. . n sumo found about preekar...haha pushkie was going to tease her n left himself being teased by her... not she recognised its him just by footsteps...really those four days n the distance really worked out to make them realise they're vulnerable... how she didn't respond n then planned to sneak in his room ...ninja skills...hilarious... n how he flung her in air...finally they at least talked...they needed it... n the dialog demanding for an answer from him is like banging ur head on wall...haha...n they slept together...wow... hope they wont do any stupidity again... loved this chapter as always...beautifully penned Lara... waiting for next pm :) love ya...take care...