MY PRINCE CHARMING- NOTE PG 39 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry if I'm late ... As I didn't. Know that there was other stories link too in the pm...chapter 8 ...
you .. Come on ... You are a awsome writer ...
rishab is really a sweetheart ... Caring.. Protective ... About his geetu ... He loves her ... But somewhere he know that she always looked him as a friend .. Or say she never realized it ... Hate sameera... But the main thing ... Suspicious... Its maan.. What's wrong with him?? ... Something is totally off ... He isn't himself.. Is he falling for geet?? ... Truly?? .. The disco scene ... I loved that song .. Dilbar mere.. Its a song which surely gives Goosebumps ... A soulful song ... It truly showcased their situation... Then rk's song ... He is in pain. ... .
don't know .. At one point I really want maan to be hers. . .. Something fishy about him ... Then seeing rk ... A gem... Deserve her ... But then its geet's choice... Coming to last scene.. Aww.. Rk admitted that he is jealous ... Not as a friend ... But as a lover .. But geet didnt take it that way... Now a ride with maan... Wooah... What u planing for it?? Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8 A

Geet already in love with Maan and she seems to sense that something is wrong with him while Sameera just makes an excuse that he is exhausted because of the night they spend together it also seems that RK gets upset with Sameera when she tries to say something nasty to Geet
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 8 B

Geet and RK out for the night but surprisingly Maan too is there and he does seem more then interested in Geet there is something about him that I'm not understanding maybe in a few updates I'll get his true self but when it concerns Geet he seems honest while I'm enjoying RK and Geet's closeness too they have been friends forever so if love does happen between them it would be perfect
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A brief recap
My Prince Charming is a story of a lonely princess (Princess of Dordale) 'Geetakshi' who just lost her father...She was raised in a very strict disciplined life under her father...Only person who supported and loved her since childhood was Prince Rishabh of Vymland...After the death of King of Dordale , Queen Sameera , 2nd wife of King of Dordale sat on the throne , controlling Geetakshi like a puppet...She was helpless to listen to her...Sameera fixed her marriage with a quite aged King of Samora...But in one of her party , Geet met a handsome and mysterious prince - Maan Singh Khurana of Valdeny...She instantly fell in love with him and Maan seemed to smitten by her too...Her bubble burst when she saw Maan having sex with her step mother Sameera...Broken and humiliated , she decided to avoid Maan at all cost...When she was in a vulnerable condition , Rishabh came back to her life , who was related to King of Samora...He inspired her to stay strong and not to give up to either Sameera or Maan...
In the engagement party ,Geet again met Maan who seemed to be confused of her cold behavior towards him...On the other side , it was difficult for Geet to suppress her love for him...She tried to stay away , but simply couldn't do so...Rishabh on the other side , felt Geet's pain even she didn't voice it out...We saw a invisible bond , a connection between RK and Geet...
When Geet came out of her party to get away from Maan and Sam , she was attacked by a masked maan who touched her improperly and threatened her to stay quiet or he would kill her next time...Shocked by the incident , she fainted ...
In the morning , when she woke up , she saw her best friend RK beside her worried...When she inquired about the killer , he said that no one was found suspicious...She suspected Sam , but RK allied her out...So , naturally her suspicion turned towards Maan , Sam's lover...On the other side , Maan constantly tried to contact Geet and convinced her to trust him and his feelings towards her , but was not comfortable to share anything about his life beyond that...As a result , Geet cut him off completely and began to spend time with RK...Seeing the closeness between RK and Geet and the way she was avoiding him like a plague, Maan couldn't control himself and badmouthed the friendship shared by RK and Geet , breaking her more...
Geet-RK went for a concert secretly outside their town ...Both felt attracted to each other during their short horse ride , but geet , as usual , brushed off her feelings...In the concert , they found Maan...He dedicated a song for Geet which turned into a small competition among the RK-Geet-Maan...When RK and geet came out , he expressed her that he was jealous of Maan and he was not a good company for a girl like her...In return , Geet assured him that he could never take RK's place in her life...When they found their car's tyre puncture , Maan offered Geet for a ride , but she refused...But RK agreed thinking about her safety and maaneet left for home while RK waited for another car to arrive in the middle of the road...




ch 9 updated...


Guys , the low comment is making me sad...please tell me if I should wrap up the story in next update or not...I will finish it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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if u want me to continue , then next update will be the turning point of the story...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update 😃
maaneet are good happy for them😊
As i m Rk fan 😉... i don't know 😕
that's why i hate triangle love stories because in the end one left empty handed😡
and in this Rk is the one that is my sure guess 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please please don't end this one soon.. I loved the mystery touch on it... It gives Goosebumps...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 9 ... someone punctured rk's car ... And maan on his bike came there and gave geet a ride ... On the way ... Geet again felt the calmness and comfort with him ... Its getting better and more better ... The mysterious persona of maan is really soo cool ... Hehe ... I seriously don't know why people don't read ur stuff ... But its always amazing... Hope the no. Increases... In sha Allah... Maan took her to his favorite place ... The shy and childish side of him made it look like that he badly wanted to tell geet something but the call disturbed him very much ... On the other side .. Rk was very much tensed. ... He ran in Sam room ..there she very shamelessly tried her best to seduce him but for him geet and her safety was more important ... Love this man ... But somewhere seeing the pure and kind side of maan ... I think something make him to do ...or someone else... Don't know.. Geet was so much terrified of the surrounding and also she couldn't find maan there... Where he gone?? ... But don't know how but rk found her but then again she felt maan behind him and also someone was there ... Bit she couldn't dare to see ... Its so chilling... Update soon
Edited by doll.12 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 9

maaneet's bike ride n then their lovely moment was so nice but then why did maan left geet suddenly that too without informing n here geet was so scared.. rk came at right time n rescued geet but maan was there too.. then why didn't he show up.. Sam is disgusting
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n lovely update! well written! Maan left Geet alone! Y did he do that? Geet scared! RK worried abt Geet! RK confronts Sam! She recalls their kiss! RK n Sam kissed in college! RK says she was drunk! RK leaves! RK saves Geet! Geet saw Maan! RK says its her imagination! update soon

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