MY PRINCE CHARMING- NOTE PG 39 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 9
nice update..
maaneet's bike ride and maan left geet suddenly..
rk came at right time n rescued geet..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Brilliant update! Thanks for PM
But honestly...am feeling bad for RK. I couldn't help but feel like that when he notices Geet lost in Maan's thoughts or during Maaneet interaction. Esp. during the phone call which RK assumed that they were on a date. He loves her so much.

This Maan is one handsome mysterious person. Why did he leave her halfway after the phone call? And his surprising entry in Atif Aslam's concert. My fav song 'Dil bar mere'...hope he sang well.
Good Geet also sang for RK. I loved that part. And Maan wanted RK to sing too...it's very bad...he called him a thirdwheel!
Rk proved his talent...Nice song!

Geet was quite rude towards RK in the breakfast table. He told the cake was delicious not to hurt her only na?

Waiting for the next update! Thanks for PM and password link!
Sorry for commenting late..lost myself in the beauty of the three songs...the link which you posted.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Fantastic update
maaneet on bike
maan left her suddenly
rk helped her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice part.
Maan has reasons behind being with queen. If he really loves geet then he should either fight sameera or let geet go. Coz he is hurting geet n rk in process. Feeling bad for rk coz it seems he is going to be empty handed in the end.
If and when you decide to end story hopefully geet makes right decision of choosing someone who loves her and makes her happy than someone whom she loves but makes her miserable.
Edited by Anntempleton - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful Update
What is Maan doing , first he took Geet on bike and stopped his bike in the middle of the road and brought her favourite flowers and then left her there all alone and reached castle without bike, according to servant he was in Sam,s room and was in washroom and then flew away from window, somehow RK found Geet and brought her home, this Maan is really a mystery, waiting for next

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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Maan n geet happy for them
Rk is tensed for geet n her safety he is a really nice guy for whom geet is first before him also I really loved dis rk
New side of Maan is seen who is sweet n caring I think there is a reason why he behave rudely with geet before
Sam is such a shameless women
Awesome update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Superb part
maaneet ride...maan stops at his fav place...he wanted to tell her something..guess d reason why he is with sameera..
Samera is shamless
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
gr8 parts..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Chapter 9

RK allows Geet to go with Maan as he believes Geet's safety comes first
Maan on the other hand has been somewhat kind and much more friendlier to Geet telling her how he felt and what he saw when they first met however it seems that Sam has been phoning him and there is surely something missing as he disappears and goes to Sam leaving Geet all alone .
I get this feeling that Sam is using Maan and he has no option it felt as if he wanted to tell Geet something but was held back by the phone call .
RK has been worried about Geet and finally rescues her but she believes she saw Maan while RK thinks its her illusion
It also seems like Geet would have given Maan a chance to talk as she found him different from his rude arrogant self he was normal he was caring

Sorry about late comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
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A brief recap
My Prince Charming is a story of a lonely princess (Princess of Dordale) 'Geetakshi' who just lost her father...She was raised in a very strict disciplined life under her father...Only person who supported and loved her since childhood was Prince Rishabh of Vymland...After the death of King of Dordale , Queen Sameera , 2nd wife of King of Dordale sat on the throne , controlling Geetakshi like a puppet...She was helpless to listen to her...Sameera fixed her marriage with a quite aged King of Samora...But in one of her party , Geet met a handsome and mysterious prince - Maan Singh Khurana of Valdeny...She instantly fell in love with him and Maan seemed to smitten by her too...Her bubble burst when she saw Maan having sex with her step mother Sameera...Broken and humiliated , she decided to avoid Maan at all cost...When she was in a vulnerable condition , Rishabh came back to her life , who was related to King of Samora...He inspired her to stay strong and not to give up to either Sameera or Maan...
In the engagement party ,Geet again met Maan who seemed to be confused of her cold behavior towards him...On the other side , it was difficult for Geet to suppress her love for him...She tried to stay away , but simply couldn't do so...Rishabh on the other side , felt Geet's pain even she didn't voice it out...We saw a invisible bond , a connection between RK and Geet...
When Geet came out of her party to get away from Maan and Sam , she was attacked by a masked maan who touched her improperly and threatened her to stay quiet or he would kill her next time...Shocked by the incident , she fainted ...
In the morning , when she woke up , she saw her best friend RK beside her worried...When she inquired about the killer , he said that no one was found suspicious...She suspected Sam , but RK allied her out...So , naturally her suspicion turned towards Maan , Sam's lover...On the other side , Maan constantly tried to contact Geet and convinced her to trust him and his feelings towards her , but was not comfortable to share anything about his life beyond that...As a result , Geet cut him off completely and began to spend time with RK...Seeing the closeness between RK and Geet and the way she was avoiding him like a plague, Maan couldn't control himself and badmouthed the friendship shared by RK and Geet , breaking her more...

Geet-RK went for a concert secretly outside their town ...Both felt attracted to each other during their short horse ride , but geet , as usual , brushed off her feelings...In the concert , they found Maan...He dedicated a song for Geet which turned into a small competition among the RK-Geet-Maan...When RK and geet came out , he expressed her that he was jealous of Maan and he was not a good company for a girl like her...In return , Geet assured him that he could never take RK's place in her life...When they found their car's tyre puncture , Maan offered Geet for a ride , but she refused...But RK agreed thinking about her safety and maaneet left for home while RK waited for another car to arrive in the middle of the road...

Maan showed his soft side to geet and tried to say her his feelings but a call disturbed them.RK thought they were in a date and was quite hurt.But when he saw them still out in the snowfall , he got worried.He found out that Maan was with Sam.He tried to get info from Maan about the place he took Geet , but Sam tried to seduce him reminding him about their kiss when RK was drunk.When they saw Maan was not in the shower , they were shocked.Somehow RK found Geet and saved her , but she saw or believed that he saw Maan hiding and watching her before she lost her conciousness.

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