Devakshi OS: The Elevator - Page 3

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Lovely !! loved reading it ...written very well !!👏

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you😃 Dunno if we're ever gonna see anything like this on the show

Durjoy dutta writes for this show, so I think I'm way out my league there😆 Anyway, thanks for the appreciation, feel honored that you think so :)

Originally posted by: ARCH21

Oh No! You write beautifully.

Durjoy Dutta needs to expand his view from trip, fall, catch, eye lock, hug and cheek touch... Inspire him 😃

Originally posted by: Monaleojan

Oho!! Romantic Dev Babu..

Hello!
Sorry been off lately... Clg back on! I am not writing much these days and also not reading much... but cannot skip on an OS by you!

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN

Hello!
Sorry been off lately... Clg back on! I am not writing much these days and also not reading much... but cannot skip on an OS by you!

Now coming to the OS... its one thing to write a story and one to actually make the reader live a moment! You make me live a moment with DevAkshi!

The Elevator as the title had me hooked and it was like "JO socha woh paya!" Amazing work and as always I would request you to keep writing and keep making my days brighter! 👏🤗

Originally posted by: independent

Passionate os.. Lovely..

Originally posted by: neelima_menon

Well written:)

What I like most about your OSes (thsi is appreciation for all of them) is that they are transporting us away from this saas-bahu environment that we seem to have been forced into post epi 100. Speaking for myself I fell in love with the contemporary set up of the show featuring 2 individuals and their normal families (excluding mamiji).Their contemporary, relatable and of course high on chemistry interactions (not so of late sadly) were a huge plus. Your OSses are keeping that alive and it is as if we are reading a continuation of the original episodes of the show rather than going bed sheet shopping...

Originally posted by: bookworm123

What I like most about your OSes (thsi is appreciation for all of them) is that they are transporting us away from this saas-bahu environment that we seem to have been forced into post epi 100. Speaking for myself I fell in love with the contemporary set up of the show featuring 2 individuals and their normal families (excluding mamiji).Their contemporary, relatable and of course high on chemistry interactions (not so of late sadly) were a huge plus. Your OSses are keeping that alive and it is as if we are reading a continuation of the original episodes of the show rather than going bed sheet shopping...

I am tied of dixit mansion. gali romance, eye lock and pious cheek pat. They had far more awareness in their glances prior to accident. I want to see that come back because i know they are capable of it and more!