Devakshi OS: The Elevator

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld
Lovely !! loved reading it ...written very well !!👏

Thank you so much dear😃 Glad to know you enjoyed reading it :)

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Malvika07

Thank you😃 Dunno if we're ever gonna see anything like this on the show
Durjoy dutta writes for this show, so I think I'm way out my league there😆 Anyway, thanks for the appreciation, feel honored that you think so :)

Oh No! You write beautifully.

Durjoy Dutta needs to expand his view from trip, fall, catch, eye lock, hug and cheek touch... Inspire him 😃

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: ARCH21

Oh No! You write beautifully.
Durjoy Dutta needs to expand his view from trip, fall, catch, eye lock, hug and cheek touch... Inspire him 😃

Hahahaha you just described every romantic Devakshi scene ever showed😆😆

Thank you so much 😃 Glad to see my efforts being so appreciated😳

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Monaleojan
Oho!! Romantic Dev Babu..

Thanks dear😃 Hope you liked it!

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EJF_FAN

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Hello!
Sorry been off lately... Clg back on! I am not writing much these days and also not reading much... but cannot skip on an OS by you!

Now coming to the OS... its one thing to write a story and one to actually make the reader live a moment! You make me live a moment with DevAkshi!

The Elevator as the title had me hooked and it was like "JO socha woh paya!" Amazing work and as always I would request you to keep writing and keep making my days brighter! 👏🤗

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: EJF_FAN
Hello!
Sorry been off lately... Clg back on! I am not writing much these days and also not reading much... but cannot skip on an OS by you!

Now coming to the OS... its one thing to write a story and one to actually make the reader live a moment! You make me live a moment with DevAkshi!

The Elevator as the title had me hooked and it was like "JO socha woh paya!" Amazing work and as always I would request you to keep writing and keep making my days brighter! 👏🤗

Thank you so so much Aman🤗 I was waiting for your comment, and wondering where you were😕 So glad to see you back!

Your comments always always put a BIG smile on my face, and I am forever grateful for them.

Thank you so very much for always supporting me😳

Happy Friendship day ❤️

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: independent
Passionate os.. Lovely..

Thank you dear😃 Glad you liked it!

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: neelima_menon
Well written:)

Thank you dear😊

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bookworm123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

What I like most about your OSes (thsi is appreciation for all of them) is that they are transporting us away from this saas-bahu environment that we seem to have been forced into post epi 100. Speaking for myself I fell in love with the contemporary set up of the show featuring 2 individuals and their normal families (excluding mamiji).Their contemporary, relatable and of course high on chemistry interactions (not so of late sadly) were a huge plus. Your OSses are keeping that alive and it is as if we are reading a continuation of the original episodes of the show rather than going bed sheet shopping...

I am tied of dixit mansion. gali romance, eye lock and pious cheek pat. They had far more awareness in their glances prior to accident. I want to see that come back because i know they are capable of it and more!

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Curlyhairdiary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: bookworm123
What I like most about your OSes (thsi is appreciation for all of them) is that they are transporting us away from this saas-bahu environment that we seem to have been forced into post epi 100. Speaking for myself I fell in love with the contemporary set up of the show featuring 2 individuals and their normal families (excluding mamiji).Their contemporary, relatable and of course high on chemistry interactions (not so of late sadly) were a huge plus. Your OSses are keeping that alive and it is as if we are reading a continuation of the original episodes of the show rather than going bed sheet shopping...
I am tied of dixit mansion. gali romance, eye lock and pious cheek pat. They had far more awareness in their glances prior to accident. I want to see that come back because i know they are capable of it and more!

First off, Thank you so much🤗 Your appreciation inspires me to write more :)

Pious cheek pat🤣 I LOLed hard at that one! So true, even I am getting frustrated with the lack of romance and chemistry potrayed. Which is why I keep writing, as a way of venting out my frustration😆 And the most annoying part is, Its not that Shaheer and Erica are uncomfortable with each other, the lack of passion seems deliberate, almost as if the actors want to do it but are being stopped. It was their brilliant chemistry right from the first promo that attracted me to KRPKAB in the first place, lets hope the CVs hear us out on this one and give us the crackling chemistry back!

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