DevAkshi SS: Hidden - Chapter 13 | Pg 53 | 06.09.2017 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: .FlyingClouds.

I feel so sad for Sonakshi!!😭😭

Poor girl😭😭
Anyways, part was lovely👏👏
Cont soon


Thanks a lot!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Nice story dear
Loved it
Liked the way Sonakshi decided that she studied & make him proud.
Mamiji was Dayan of the story
Now Dev is coming back
Waiting for their meeting
Update soon plz
Thanks
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Omg... Can't wait for next part.. Their meetings


Glad you liked it!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
nice start...plz pm me too...
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#35
Author's Note:

Hey guys! Just created this new account called Devakshi_PM for PMing purposes. So, the upcoming chapters of DevAkshi SS: Hidden or any other DevAkshi work will be PM-ed from this account. Please send a buddy request to this account if you would like to receive PMs for Hidden from now on. Also, Please note that I won't be accepting any buddy request sent to the account Mushfika as that account is solely for making posts or updating OS/SS/FF and has nothing to do with sending PMs for any of the work you will be following in future. Thank you!

Love,
Mushfika
Edited by Devakshi_PM - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36

DevAkshi SS: Hidden

Chapter 3

And sonakshi just stood there shell shocked at what she just heard. She felt like her heart skipped a beat or two.

"They...They are coming back! De...Dev is...coming back!" went her silent whisper. A whisper with a wild glim in her eyes as though she was sharing a little secret that must be hidden from the rest of the world!

Suddenly, her heart started beating abnormally fast and it felt like it would burst out of her chest any moment. A part of her felt alive again. A part that she believed Dev took with him the moment he left for Canada.

She ran to her room and closed the door behind it. Clutching the diamond shaped silver pendant that has been adorning her swan like neck since the day Dev had gifted her, she opened it with her two fingers. She discovered about this feature of her pendant a few days after he left for Canada, during one of their skype sessions, when he asked her about it. She almost gasped seeing her picture on the right half of the now opened pendant and his on the left, when she opened the sparkling jewelry.

Opening her closet, she moved the curtain that covered a huge collage that she made of Dev, from almost all the newspapers, books and magazines that published his pictures. Running her thin long fingers over it, she whispered, "You're finally coming back AB!". Gulping, she wondered, "Will you be able to recognize me after 10 years? Will... will you still call me Bose and..."

Her web of thoughts was interrupted by the loud bang on her door.

Radha: "Eh Kaamchorni! Are you going to lock yourself in the room the entire day so that you don't have to work? Come out of the room right now!"

Sighing, she opened the door.

Radha: listen, Ishwari jiji is coming back tomorrow morning with her family.

Frowning, Radha blabbered to herself, "God knows whats the hurry. Just started living our lives peacefully and they just couldn't withstand it!"

Seeing Sonakshi's glowing face, Radha raised her eyebrows, "why are you being so happy? Go clean jiji, dev and the sisters' rooms properly. I don't want a single dust in the room."

Nodding, she was about to leave, when Radha stopped her again.

"And listen, stay away from Dev. I don't want to see you around him, sticking like super glue all the time. I anyway told them you left with your uncle for Mumbai for good. So no need to reveal who you are infront of jiji or Dev."

And she felt like someone just snatched that string of happiness she was holding onto in a mere second. Sonakshi just stared at her, hoping against hope that she was just hallucinating pr whatever Radha said was a mistake, or that she misheard it.

Being away from someone who is a cruicial part of her life at the hope that he's going to come back and just realizing that the person you're waiting for, for the past 10 years is coming and and still not be able to reveal your real identity is two different things. Needless to say that the hope of his comeback became the only string that held her together all these 10 years, disregarding how she was treated in the house, brushed off the fact that she was provided with the minimum facilities in the mansion, not to mention, her own room was taken away by Radha and her son and she was provided the servant's wards to sleep, she wasn't even given the necessary food, medication and treatment needed for her Asthma, something she discovered she had, at the age of 15 while cleaning the storeroom that was covered with layers and layers of dust, all were ignored by Sonakshi just at the hope that when Dev comes back, everything will be just fine, but today, Radha even snatched the last hope from her, giving her absolutely no reason behind her survival. She had continued her studies along with the bone breaking part time job just to make Dev proud, so that once he gets back, she could tell him that his Ms. Bose is almost on her way to be a successful nutritionist, just what he wanted her to be! But now when he would get back, let alone informing him about it, she won't even be able to reveal who she is.

Her eyes started to blur as her heart pinched at the sudden burden that drowned her into nothingness.

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She left home early to buy the necessary ingredients listed by Radha. Her head felt heavy and eyes started burning due to lack of sleep last night. She just couldn't close her eyes and drift into sleep because of all the thoughts that's been banging her head since the afternoon encounter with Radha. She couldn't for the love of her life understand how she will be able to hold back from throwing herself into Dev when she finally sees him face to face after 10 long years.

The sun felt few thousand miles closer than its original distance, and the scortching heat of Delhi with the never ending traffic and crowd made it worse, her eyes started blurring, her head started spinning. She felt weak for not being able to eat anything for dinner and when she took the left overs for breakfast once radha and Rahul were done eating, Radha asked her to get vegetable from market. Her steps halted and her hands automatically went to grasp her now heavy heady. Her knees buckled as she was about to hit the ground when she felt a pair of strong arms hold her by her waist preventing her from hitting ground. As she subconsciously tried opening her eyes, she felt her life came back to her running on its own. The same pair of chocolate orbs looking down at her, his eye brows scrunched, and his lips moving, perhaps calling out to her. the same warmth that she experienced 10 years ago. Snuggling into the warmth, she whispered, "De...Dev?"

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Sorry but that's all for tonight. I couldn't write further with this throbbing headache I have been having since morning.

I have finally made up my mind to continue the SS, thanks for the wonderful comments. If you liked this chapter even a bit, please hit the like button and drop a comment below. If you have time, please point out the part you liked the best, or disliked, or any particular scene you would wish to see in this SS. If it doesn't change the main concept of the story and is within my capability to fit in, I promise I will be including it in the SS.

Author's Note:

Hey guys! Just created this new account called Devakshi_PM for PMing purposes. So, the upcoming chapters of DevAkshi SS: Hidden or any other DevAkshi work will be PM-ed from this account. Please send a buddy request to this account if you would like to receive PMs for Hidden from now on. Also, Please note that I won't be accepting any buddy request sent to the account Mushfika as that account is solely for making posts or updating OS/SS/FF and has nothing to do with sending PMs for any of the work you will be following in future. Thank you!

Love,
Mushfika

Edited by Mushfika - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Awesome Chapter

Radha Rani not only cruel and heartless but treats Sonakshi in a inhumane behavior I'm totally looking forward to seeing her get some sort of punishment with her awful son .
when I read the part where Sonakshi is told not to reveal herself to the Dixit family I thought oh gosh ! so this girl is going to suffer in further and Dev , Ishwari will not even know its Sonakshi but I kept thinking hey they did have skype conversations so hopefully Dev will recognize her but again you surprised me by making Dev to rescue her from falling , now that's an awesome welcome both already met without Radha Rani been around
I'm looking forward to the next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice update. Finally dev and sona met. Wow. Thank u for the pm
Oh dear take rest and get well soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
wow it is amazing dear👏..pls do continue soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Awesome update
Waiting for the next part
Update it soon...

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