A broken bangle

Where did i come from,i cant remember much. An old man gave me this shape from d molded glass, n this color Green,i found this to b a much loved one,thanks to my creator.He sold me,he sold hope for hope.That 24 year old boy bought me with my friends for his beloved.He was so happy,and so was I,finally i was going to fulfill the purpose of my birth.My color was my pride,and finally i was going to adorn d beautiful wrist of a woman.He was as excited as I was.I had the bitter taste of rejection before, some pretty hands touched me in the shop but never showed interest in me.But poor young guy, yes this time along with me he too got d taste of rejection.cz she was a widow,thereby wasnt supposed to put on any color. saw disappointment and determination at d same time in his eyes.what about d other pair of eyes?yes those were in deep pain,i felt she too wants to touch me,hold me and keep me around her wrist but she cant,cz i m green.Luckily i m not human,i dont understand why u guys impose such punishment on woman?The boy took me with him,kept me inside a box.i waited...i hope for a happy occasion to come.It didnt take much long.finally d boy adorned his beloved with my color.I must admit this was the happiest occasion of my life.Since then many days have passed,my color faded a bit.But my owner never threw me out.Today it was another happy occasion,i love celebrations,my color blends too well with d decorations and i enjoy playing with those lights in my body.My owner was looking stunning,never saw her in such get up.i was nervous,whether i will look poor in comparison with all d gold she wore.Here comes the boy,now looks older.something was missing in him.wish i could speak, i wanted to know where he was all these years.He took my owner's hand in his hand,i came in between,could feel both of their skins.Yes,i could feel so much love from both sides.i looked at him closely now when his gaze met hers.i knew those eyes so well,but where was that mischief that never left his inner canthus?Now it is all full of disbelief.A stream of question followed by tears in her eyes.i could hear one heart asking the other ,did u ever love me?did u?disbelief deepened and suddenly i tasted flesh and blood.His grip was so tight it made my slender body break and cut deep through her skin,a noise and i found myself in d ground,in pieces.the man left.i m nothing but small broken pieces of glass now...sigh.will miss my former life,i brought dreams in those eyes when she looked at me, now looking at me with so much agony.Nothing is indispensable in this world,a single bangle broken, more will come.But was i just only a bangle,am not i those dreams they had together now all shattered?One last look at my owner,she loved me...i will soon b thrown in d dustbin.but i will still b on her wrist,in d form of that wound.wound may heal,but it will still b there to remind her,once there was a bangle which got broken.


sorry for the midnight crap.was trying to write something for too long.but my English is awful.couldnt contribute to d forum much which gifted me so many things and now it is all set to end.this post is dedicated to my angels.
had weakness for all those scenes,one i want to share.
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👏 ⭐️ Joy.. take a bow dear.. it's flawless yarr.. as if ur some professional writer.. 😃 brilliant it is.. n the thought flows like a magic yaara.. Ur gifted..do u kno that.. ?? How cn u write so beautifully yaar.. docs supposed to b uninterested in literature thingy.. how come ur so polished with not onli words but thoughts too..😳 extraordinary talent it is.. at least fr me..😳
Ohh knowing the bangles perspective in ths eternal love tale was endearing.. I'm deeply touched n each n every word was giving me goosebumps sweetheart... 😳 keep it up n dun forget u ve promised me few posts before Alvida..usse pehle I won't let u go.. samjhi.. 😛

PS..Arre yaad aya it all started with bangles breaking by Viplov himself n started frm there onli 😳 u remember na how he breaks her red bangles .. so was this bangle breaking is nothing but pointing towards their new fresh start kia..??? 😳 see now even my mind started wrking all becaz of ur wonderful post sweetz... love U.. 😳

thanks, for this great piece of writing enjoyed reading.

Originally posted by: Hamlet53

<font size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Bravo! taz ...a celebration in itself , that to espressyour self increative writing, all one needs is a feritle imagination and the ideas and words flow later.. A broken bangle is also an acnowlegement of the fact of how much joy the programme Ishq provided you. It is an appealing piece of writing in which a green bangle tells the story of its journey through its short life. The fact that you chose to make it a glass bangle ,serves as a chilling reminder about life too.. That in actual fact its green in colour , which symbolises life ,growth.. but since its glass as much as we preserve life ..it will break eventually as life ends. The green glass bangle was an expression of love between the boy and girl. I loved how you show the girls wrist remains the same but the person and the ocassion changes.. and change is subject to time. Although the green bangle continues to give joy to the wearer , It takes away the sheer delight from the boy.. how can it? the green bangles that grace the girls wrist are not the symbol of his love..The very glass bangle that once tinkled of his love now jingle another 's name.. its better to snap the bangle that once joined them..for only by breaking this green bangle on his beloved 's wrist can the boy face the bitter truth that the dreams they once shared are no more.. except shattered pieces of glass.. beyond repair. But the memories of what they once had .. now decorates the wrist of their daughter.. a green glass bangle is presented to vidha by a very nice young man...
well safed coat 2.. apart from being an angel who heals and saves life .. you are also an engaging writer.. and why wouldn't you be?.. you come from the land that produced the nobel prize winner in the literary world.. Rabindranath Tagore... thanks for this much valued gift .. 😃 impresed hammie
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Hammie hammie hammie,
I m grateful to u for making time to read and comment.u know who can inspire me if I even write a word.tagore ,yes he is d reason I look at things differently in some occasions.but words n courage to write came from my regular practice to comment on ur take.sometimes when I m in deep sorrow I do something to drain them,thanks for inspiring me I write to escape,n it works.I m not a writer n neither I have words in my hand to play with.most of the times a find miyself as a mute creature with bag of emotions that I find hard to express.yes u were right.they dont betray,ur words,ur lines,always with u...
While posting this I thought angrezi k ammase mujhe chappal padnewala hain.instead u appreciated, u r so kind n gentle.love u for that.
Now coming to d small para where I put a bit of my efforts,u described it beautifully,whatever I tried to express u have seen things d same way I did.from d color of life to d wrist of a girl...a broken bangle is a shattered dream of both hearts.
Cannt thank u enough.
Take care.
Keep spreading joy as always.

Beautifully expressed, Simple! 👏 I loved your interpretation of the glass bangle and the metaphoric way in which you wrote your post. The inspiration you drew from the scene in which Viplav had asked Dhani if she had ever truly loved him while he unknowingly broke her green bangles was very creative. 😊

Originally posted by: NusiSg

so was this bangle breaking is nothing but pointing towards their new fresh start kia..???
Wahhh nusipa,hammie truly says u come with beautiful thoughts.yes I had all bangle scenes in mind.d first one u mentioned.second one when he bought bangles for her,third in navratri mela she was touching them,fourth viplab in gazipur imagines he is adorning dhani with bangles,then he made her wear his dadis golden bangle during marriage with kanak later took away...stopped watching all episodes after that so have no idea of rest.

👏 ⭐️ Joy.. take a bow dear.. it's flawless yarr.. as if ur some professional writer.. 😃 brilliant it is.. n the thought flows like a magic yaara.. Ur gifted..do u kno that.. ?? How cn u write so beautifully yaar.. docs supposed to b uninterested in literature thingy.. how come ur so polished with not onli words but thoughts too..😳 extraordinary talent it is.. at least fr me..😳
Ohh knowing the bangles perspective in ths eternal love tale was endearing.. I'm deeply touched n each n every word was giving me goosebumps sweetheart... 😳 keep it up n dun forget u ve promised me few posts before Alvida..usse pehle I won't let u go.. samjhi.. 😛

PS..Arre yaad aya it all started with bangles breaking by Viplov himself n started frm there onli 😳 u remember na how he breaks her red bangles .. so was this bangle breaking is nothing but pointing towards their new fresh start kia..??? 😳 see now even my mind started wrking all becaz of ur wonderful post sweetz... love U.. 😳

[B]apa chotiko kuch zyada hi pamper karrahi ho apto.in d morning I read it once again n I was like...ughhh so many grammatical mistakes,hammie ne chappal nehi mara abtak I wonder why.
Broken relationship,broken trust,shattered dream k nazariya se I worte it bas,if it was in my own language,I could b more comfortable.lakin ap logoko samajh aya what I meant to say. Bas ab thik hu.
Haan akram is leaving Dhaka for 25days.with his lappie.itna commitment puri kaise karu I dont know.hope ap mujhe help karogim

Originally posted by: tahera57

thanks, for this great piece of writing enjoyed reading.

Thanks a lot for making time to read. 😊

Originally posted by: ~DaZZ|ing~

Beautifully expressed, Simple!👏 I loved your interpretation of the glass bangle and the metaphoric way in which you wrote your post. The inspiration you drew from the scene in which Viplav had asked Dhani if she had ever truly loved him while he unknowingly broke her green bangles was very creative.😊

Thanks dazz for reading n commenting.so very few of us left here..so thought chappale kam milenge, but here I find u guys appreciating..
I remember all d scenes from past, how those bangles reflected viplabs wish to bring color in dhanis life.kaisa show kya ban gya.but still found that scene very beautiful yesterday when dhani was looking at d pieces of broken bangle on d floor.at that very moment I felt I m going to cover that scene in form of writing,my poor English couldnt stop me.