Ek duje ke vaaste: Poem on yesterday episode

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Hi all the lovely members of this forum...This is my first post in this forum...hope you would all welcome me to this forum...actually I am not able to follow this show on regular basis because of my schedule, but whenever I do get time, I go for it and i'm also a big SHRAMAN fan...Just because of this reason, I never posted anything here...

But yesterday's episode was just out of this world...I couldn't help myself from writing a poem on SHRAMAN...through this poem I have tried to present Shravan's feelings in yesterday's episode...the changing emotions he went through...Hope you would like it...

Title: Ek duje ke vaaste

Ae mere dil-e-nadan

Hai kyun khud se hi anjaan...

Kis baat par tha aise khafa

Main jaanu vo nahi bewafa...

Socha tha jab hogi tumse aaj baat

Shikayaton ki tumpe karunga barsaat...

Par hui jab tere aansu ki halki si aahat

Ho gayi gumshuda mere dil se raahat...

Kuch bhi us pal samajh na aaya

Khud ko tere aansuon mein doobta hua paaya...

Teri muskurahat hi hai mera kinara

Banna chahu main sada tera hi sahara...

Jaanu main tere dil ka bhi haal

Tumhe bhi hai shayad mera khayal...

Jab tum meri baahon mein samaai

Bahaar mere Jeevan mein thi usi pal aayi...

Kaash jaldi khatam ho mera intezaar

Jab main kar paau tumse apne pyar ka izhaar...

Hum dono kea lag nahi hai raaste

Hum dono bane Ek duje ke vaaste...

Hope you liked it...if yes then please hit the like button and give your valuable comments...so that I can write more in future...if not then also please let me know so that I can improvise and improve...

Thanks for reading

Manisha...😊😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the forum dearie 🤗
Absolutely loved these lines❤️
Lovely poem 👏
Do write more
I hope you enjoy being a part of our crazy , amazing forum
-----Priyam------
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely poem ! Keep writing more 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: sapphire3

Welcome to the forum dearie 🤗
Absolutely loved these lines❤️
Lovely poem 👏
Do write more
I hope you enjoy being a part of our crazy , amazing forum
-----Priyam------



Thanks dear...I'm glad you liked it... I'll try to be regular...I'll try to keep writing here as well...ya me too hope to have a nice time here... 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: nith125

Lovely poem ! Keep writing more 👏



Thanks dear...will write more...pakka...
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I think not many takers for a poem here... 😭 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow yaar! It's wonderful. Loved every bit of it. And welcome to the forum 🤗 Hope you have a nice time here---Reshma.
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Wow yaar! It's wonderful. Loved every bit of it. And welcome to the forum 🤗 Hope you have a nice time here---Reshma.



Thanks Reshma...I hope so too...

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