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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angel13

Awesome update
Mami is too cunning
Lies to Dev his mom is sick
Dev rushes to home
He yells at them finishing her alright
It was cute how he was snoring lolz
Thanks for update

glad you liked it , you very well know I am writing after 6 or 8 months of gap
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Elana wanting to prove her point that Sona and Dev are together but she does not realize it can cause more problems for both Dev and Sona while Mami ji is so cunning with her ideas and tells Ishwari to phone Dev and let him know that she is unwell he will come home with Sona and Mami takes this chance to phone Dev he in his desperateness takes Sona as all he knows is his mother is unwell and Sona needs to be there but when she explains him that he should first enter then she'll come and when Sona entered both the elderly ladies were cold towards her and Dev hears them talking that him and Sona and now he knows that Sona was right
eagerly waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Few minutes back " all is my fault why I listened to him? " she walked out of Dev's house , Sonakshi , she heard him calling from back , she completely ignore and started walking " wait " he search his pants pocket for car keys , " hey wait I am coming I will drop you myself " he said she completely ignored him , and stopped a cab " sorry Mr Dev Dixit now I will not listen my heart , this is end of Our love story " she murmur to herself as she seated , she lower down the window , it was cloudy as if any minutes it will start raining

Ishq Sacha Wahi Jisko Milti Nahi Manzilen echo in car the cool breeze kissed her face , and her cell started ringing ,Dev 's name flash , she gulps and switched off her cell '" I will not come between you and Maa " ,his car stopped next to the cab , she turn up the window , " madam sb is calling you" driver said as he knocking at the window

" aap Chala " she said as she saw green signal

Dev POV " Sona why you are ignoring me ? Come on pick up the phone " he called her but finds her cell switched off

" neither you or maa understands me , how to tell you both you are important in my life , I can't live without anyone of you " he hits the wheel as he saw car pass him

Sona quickly paid the cab guy and ran in home " wait " Elena and Dada stopped her in middle of living room , she moved Elena and ran to her room

" Sona what happened ? " Dada asked her she didn't replied

" Can I talk to Miss Bose " Dev knocked at door and said in husky voice , Elena and Dada looked at him , they both pointed towards the stairs

He look at them " no one is at home " Elena pull Dada arm's with her and walked to the balcony

Dev run his fingers through his hairs and climb up the stairs ,he finds the door of her room locked from inside , he could see her through glass door

she was sitting hugging her pillow , the tears which she has control thought out her way back to home started running down her eyes

He knocked at the door " Sona listen to me ", she didn't replied he again knocked " till you will talk to me i will not leave " he said huskily " you know Dev Dixti is stubborn " he became restless seeing her crying bitterly " please leave me " she dug her face in pillow and murmur , he push the door with force it opened as in hurry she didn't locked it properly , he quickly ran in and sat next to her " I said please leave Mr Dixit " she almost choked while saying it he pull her in a tight hug ,she at first struggle to free herself, but his embrace calm her . he trendly brush her back " leave me Dev " she murmur next to his chest " look in my eyes and say " he said at once raised her head , tears roll down her eyes leaves mark on her an angelic face,he cupped her face and wiped away her tears " please leave " her lips tremble while saying ,he placed his finger on her lips

"Dev I don't want to come between you and Maa "she said and tried to move his him " you never came between us , you brought us close not only to Maa but to my sisters too" he murmur mesmerise her and said politely " i am no more a reboot whose only job to fulfill his sisters and Maa needs ,an earning machine, you taught me what is life Sona ,now I can sit and play games with them , I can laugh with them before we had distance " he smiled as find her seeing him in surprise " i can dance in rain , i can buy gifts without Tina help , i can " she placed her hand on his chest

" Dev this the end of our love story "

" I don't agree with you Dr Boss " he smiles " do you remember Mr Abohadra? he smiles she frown her eyebrows and look at him , " when you can change him completely you can conquer his maa's heart too " he kissed her forehead , she got up and pull his arm " you go back home please i am requesting you , i dont want Maa to hate me " she wiped her face

" till you promise me you will talk to me at night i will not leave " he said helplessly

" MR Dixit i can't promise please leave " she almost shouted at him and collapse on bed , Elena ran in room

" what happened why she is crying like that ?" she panicked and asked

"Can you give me two minutes " Dev request her , she nod and walked out closing the door behind her ,he kneel next to her picked up glass of water and make her drink while holding her hands in his " i only Love Sonakshi Bose , and only she will be my better half , Sona is my only friend with whom i can share anything my past , my fear , my sorrow , my happiness , i can laugh and cry only in front of her " he saw her looking at him " you can't end Our love story like this, as i am also part of your love story " he kissed her hands , he picked up her cell and switched it on " pick it up when i call you, and you will not cry now, Maa dont want us to meet each other , we will not meet but we will talk to each other as my day can't end without you " he wiped away her tears while talking to her ,he peck her softly without waiting walked out of room , leaving her in surprise

Dev find Elena and Dada in living room , both were worried

"She is fine " he said and smiled ,he walked out of their her home , Elena and Dada ran upstairs find her sitting and lost in deep thought

" what happened Sona , did you had fight with him ?" Elena asked her

" no " she whispered

" then why you both were so upset ?" Dada asked her while sitting next to her

"Dada kuch nahi hai " she started looking here and there

" Sona we will not leave you like this " both Dada and Elena said together

" today for the first time i was scared " she paused

"Scared of what ?" Dada asked her

" i felt as if this the end of mine and Dev's relation " she whispered

" Sona what are you saying ? He loves you like crazy " Elena said

" He loves me like crazy but Aunty ji want us to stay away from each other , today what i foresee Dev couldn't " she paused as her cell started ringing


"Dev babu naam leya aur hazir " Dada teased her , she look at them , they drop the idea of teasing her quickly left her , she received

" i never thought someone will cry for me like this " he teased her from other end

" aap na yeh bolna ka leya phone kiya hai " she asked him ,

he didn't replied , he smiled at other end " waise did you cried same way when i was getting engaged ?" he smirk and asked

" she not only cried , she became sick too " Elena said from behind

"Elena i will not leave you " Sona shouted

Dev took a deep breath " Maa now you have to answer my few questions " he murmur and disconnected the call




hope you guys like it do leave comment or i will end it


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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Loved it . Pls continue . Cant wait for next chapter
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
So lovely...continue soon plzzz 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Lovely..please update the next part soon..:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Beautiful update. Pls update the next part soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
great update
Sona upset with mami and his mom accusing her wants to be alone
Ignores Dev
Dev poor little thing no one understands him
He even comes to her house but she tells him to leave her
Dev is try to console her
She should give a thought and try to trust her love when he is assuring her
Thanks for update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
awesome start...plz update soon...plz pm me too...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Ignore mistakes please



While driving back home , Dev minds has countless questions , he took a deep breath and calm himself , as he reached near his home , he knew everyone must be waiting for him

Radha rani kabhi galat nahi ho sakti hai zaroor iss bangalan na Dev ko rok Liya ho ga Jiji

" nahi mami " Dev overheard her and said huskily

" Dev " is Ishawri glad to see him back " I am going in my room babu bhai please bring coffee for me " he said

He for the first time avoided her , he walked upstairs "jiji iss doctornai na zaroor is Ka kaan bhare hai " RR said " mein khud dekha hoon , Ishwari took the tray from servant and went to his room , she found him lying on bed keeping his arm on his eyes

She placed the tray on bedside table and sat next to him , she moved his arm and tried to massage his forehead " maa I am fine " he stopped her and sat

Both gather words to start the conversation , the heisted to look in each other eyes " why you dislike Sonaskai ? " he for the first time took her name in front of her , she in surprise look at him

" maa remember when I hire her you use to say she is a very nice girl , then why you don't like her now " he held her both hands in his and asked

"You broke your engagement with Natasha because of her ?" She asked him

Without waiting , Dev took a deep breath and look in her eyes "maa meri engagement tou ho rahi thi per mein Dil se Khrush nahi Tha "he placed her hand on his heart " aik bachani thi , Jaise mein koi galat kam Kar raha hoon " he said

Tou tum nutrition Ka saath khush ho " she asked him angrily , he left her hand and stands " maa iss mein Mujhko who dost mila hai jis Kai mujhe ko Bachpan se talaash thi "

Ishmari look at him in shock , his eyes was shining like stars and his face was glowing , he kneel near her " maa aap meri hamesha se best friend thi aur raho gai, main Kuch batain aap se nahi Karsakta woh sab main Sona se kar sakta hoon " he kissed her hands

"maa se nahi kar sakta " she look at him in confusing

" maa aapko pata hai pehla Neha , Riya aur Nikki ko jab mujh se koi baat karni hoti thi woh aap se bolti thi muhje se direct nahi karti thi , Sona decrease the distance between us , now i can sit and play with them , we can talk for hours " he smiled , "Maa now i feel as if i am living life mein aap sab kai tarah zindagi enjoy kar raha hoon , i was workaholic Maa " he placed his head in her lap Maa it has become so impossible to live without her "he hides his face in her lap "Maa Sona na itni dafa bola ka mein aap ko bata doon , per mein, Maa aap Sona ka ghar jai gai na " he with all hope and dreams in his eyes asked her , before she could reply he heard knock on door

" Arra aap dono yahan per hain hum sab aap ka khana per inteezar kar raha hain " Mami walked in room and said

" yes mami we are coming, i am feeling so hungry " he at once stand and pull Ishawri arm

"Dev beta bara khush lag raha ho ?" Radha Rani asked him

"Mera aur maa ka secret hai " he wrap his arm around Ishawri shoulder and walked with her down stairs

"Maa she respect you, she love my sisters as her's and the most important when i am with her i feel so complete " he had self conversation and smile on his own thought

Radha pointed towards him and in signs tried to asked Ishawri she nodded and tried to smile

At Sonakshi place

" Sona why you are having long face " Elena walked in room and asked her ,she look at time " Elena if Aunty ji said no " she hugged her pillow and asked her

"74 time " she pull quilt on her and said

"Dev said he will talk to her and call me , it is so late now " she bites her lip

"Sona do you have balance ?" she asked her

" yes why ?" she asked her in confusion

" you call him " she pull the quilt on her self

" Okay " she got off her bed and walked to the window , " Aunty ji na mana kardiya hoga " she stared at their picture which Elena clicked


At Dev place

"Bhai i challenge you today if i beat you ,you will give me what so ever i ask you " Nikki

"Okay " he look at time "11 she must be waiting " he at once walked to her room ,Ishwari and Radha rani too followed them , Dev intentionally lost the game , Nikki like crazy dance on her bed " yes yes now i can ask anything , Maa kya mangoo " she held Dev from his shoulders

"Kuch bhi mago Nikki ?" he smiled at her

"Bhai socho lo agar na kai tou mein aap se kabhi baat nahi karo gai " she warn him

"Nikki Bhai ko tang na karo " Ishwari asked her

"Maa charo na "Dev asked her , Nikki whisper in Riya ears both had high five

"Kya bolo bhi " Dev again look at clock and them

"Bhai hum ko Bhabi chaiya " both said together

"What " Dev look at them in confusion

" Nikki Riya yeh kon se mazak hai " Ishwari scold them

"Bhai abhi hamari demand puri nahi huwi " they said together " Bhabi woh ho jo Maa ka saath saath hamara bhi khayal rakha , woh hamari har baat samjhe ja "

" Nikki " Ishwari scold her

"Maa bhai se baat tou karna do na " she held his hand more tightly " Bhai hum dono na aap ka leya dhoond le hai " they said together

Radha poked Ishawri arm " Nikki " Dev became confused

"Bhai dekho you can't say no , in front of everyone you agreed " Nikki said

"kon ha woh larki , kya tum dono ko Neha ki Shadi mein achi lagi " Radha jump in and asked them , they nodded yes

"Nikki Riya yeh kya hai "Dev became worried

"Dev beta behna hain , chalo bolo kon hai woh "Radha asked them

"how it is possible ?" Dev said quickly

"Bhai Sona Di ko hamarai Bhabi bana do na " they both said together

Ishwari and Radha with opened mouth look at each other , Dev took a deep breath and smiled

"Thek ha your wish will be fulfilled soon " without waiting he hurriedly walked out of room



guys comment or i will end this

Edited by naddiya26 - 9 years ago

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