MANAN FF :TRAVELLING UNKNOWN PATHS (part 4B updated)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey readers,

I am silent reader on indiaforums from a long time and have started liking kryan and manan very much.

so i would like to write a story on manan now...




TRVALLING THE UNKNOWN PATHS



PROLOGUE

WHAT HAPPENS WHEN BEEN A PERSON FULL OF LIFE FOR OTHERS SEARCHES FOR HER LIFE...

A GIRL NANDINI MURTHY A BUBBLY ,LOVING AND CARING PERSON SETS HER FOOT ON UNKNOWN PATH TO SEARCH A UNKNOWN PART OF HER HEART.

PART 1

Somewhere in beautiful city of Manglore there was a beautiful soul talking to herself standing near the window enjoying rains

NANDINI POV

Aiyyapa pata nai main ams ke bina waha Mumbai mein kya karongi apko pata hain na ki I can't deny any of her decision then why you always put me in these situation .Now I cant do anything but I can do one thing I will fulfill my ams dreams of been the greatest classical singer ever...

But i dont know anything about mumbai how will i settle there will i be able to adapt to their lifestyle...Leave it Nandini

You think too Muchh.

Let It come Waise bhi Nandini murthy is not afraid of anything .

Let see what mumbai holds for me.

Mumbai I am coming...

Character sketch

Nandini Murthy (female lead ):She is a very bubbly ,chirpy and fun loving girl.She lost her parents in Car accident and is now leaving with her ams in manglore .She loves her ams a lot and her bro rishabh.

They mean their world to her.

Manik Malhotra(Male lead): He is son of nyonika Malhotra (A Business women ).He loves his mom a lot.

He is vulnerable to others but very caring and loving for people close to his heart.He has a family of 6 that includes his 5 friends cum family of Dhruv ,Aliya ,Mukti ,Cabir and himself and his mother. They all share a great bond.

All villians will be introduced later in the Story.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting plot
Looking forward to read more
Update next part soon...
Keep smiling always
N stay blessed 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 2

Nandini POV

"I finished all my packing for Mumbai and will be leaving tomorrow morning I will so much miss manglore , ams and my home where I had grow up since my childhood my friends over here you know na you are my part whom I share all my feeling secrets MY FIREFLIES"

I dozed off don't know when while talking to them and woke up next morning as usual at 4 am and went for practice to garden.I am so gonna miss these practice sessions. I was brought out of my thought by my dear ams who called me to start with practice no sooner the air was filled with my soft and beautiful voice these and not my words but my ams she always says that I have got blessings from goddess saraswati.

After the practice I had my breakfast and biding everyone an emotional goodbye left for Mumbai.(In my story only Nandini alone is going to Mumbai and rishabh is in manglore continuing his treatment).

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 3

NANDINI POV

"I finally reached Mumbai" I thought and jumped in joy like a girl who got her favorite candy.

After that I reached taxi stand and started searching for taxi and to my bad luck Taxi drivers were on strike.

"Damn Aiyyapa why is that to happen today only" I exclaimed my frustration to aiyyapa and started walking in a hope to get a lift.

"I didn't even know where am I heading I just have to reach chacis house and my phone battery is dead "I thought

Yippee I came up with idea I can make a call from PCO and then I remembered that their contact number are feeded to my cellphone not to me...I started walking again and I couldn't have expected anything worst then this wright now

"Damn why is it raining now bin bulayi bearish is not always good" I said to myself and started walking while I was walking a car passed by me in speed and worst happened I was fully drenched in mud water.

I was so angry and then

"Oye ruk I will show you now you rich spoilt brat" exclaimed Nandini

and with that I picked up the stone lying nearby and aimed at that car.

MANIK POV

I was returning back from yet another party when all off a sudden I heard a sound of mirror shattering then only I realized that my cars back mirror pane was broken by some idiot who threw a stone on my car.

I was hell angry I immediately stopped the car and got down.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing storyline...
Read d updates in a go...
Must say all d updates r awesome...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3 B
As soon as Manik came out of his car he saw a girl fully drenched in mud water looking at him with utmost anger and came shouting to him...
"Are you blind? Can't you drive carefully "said Nandini in anger
Manik self thought "She's so beautiful her eyes looks damn cute even when she's angry" He was brought out of trance by Nandini's shout and immediately he realized what was he thinking. Composing himself he fired back.
"Oh miss whoever you are I guess you don't know me I am Manik Malhotra, so better don't cross my path ever again it won't be good for you and ya you broke my Favorite car glass now see what I do "said angry Manik.
And with that he picked her up and dumped her in a nearby trash bin.
"What the hell .U monster Malhotra How dare you " Nandini shouted with that she pulled him with full force and he stumbled over a rock and landed in the same bin as hers.
"Now scores are equal" said Nandini and walked away with full attitude sharing her complains with her aiyyapa.
Manik came out of the bin and shouted aloud "you better never cross my path ever again else I will make your life hell" and left from there.

Edited by Manankryan - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4

Manik POV

I returned back home my mood been really bad after tiff i had with that commoner only to meet the devil prankster of FAB 5 CABIR waiting for me sitting on couch and doing nothing

CABIR :Hey bro whats up?

asked CABIR to which i replied casually least interested in the talk

MANIK : nothing much .

cabir sensed my anger and asked me with concern

CABIR: what happened bro? anything serious you seem to be stressed rather than tired.

Manik POV

Cabir had been the only one in our group who knows me in and out.we all have been their for FAB 5 in difficult times but cabir had been the only one who can calm me down only after lots of effort but he had been and will be always my soul brother.

I shared with him the whole incident that had happened and he was rolling on floor laughing his guts out.

MANIK :WHAT THE HELL?
I screamed bringing cabir back to reality.

CABIR : Really bro i just cant imagine a girl had shut your mouth and fought with you mean fought with the MANIK MALHOTRA...LAUGHING...I still cant get over the fact that you lost against a girls..man she has guts.I have to meet her.by the ways did you asked for her name

CABIR said mockingly only to get punched by MANIK

MANIK : Saale Tu mera dost hai ya uska aur main kyu uska naam puchu i swear if she comes across me ever again na then she will face the hell.

CABIR took a leave from there and informed me to be on time tomorrow since its first day of college and we been fab 5 how can we miss the first day fun.

After cabir left came my mom Neyonika Malhotra (She is modern and very caring mom).

Manik: Hey mom

Neyonika: hey manik my child hahah expecting this kind of chessey and she laughed how was your day my baccha.

Manik: tiring mom

neyonika: you go and get fresh and come down for dinner

Manik left for his room upstairs.

Manik Room
It was no less than a paradise with a huge circle bed with soft mattress in the middle of the room which had manik's huge poster hung on the wall beside it and to the right is the huge balcony with many different kind of flower surrounding.To the left of the bed was the huge glass sliding windows behind which is the pool area and his private gym to its right is another room with all kind of music instrument and the room next to it is the study room in short every room is so designed that its connected to manik's room.

After having dinner manik left to his room and lied on his bed thinking of the girl he met today

Maniks Thoughts

How beautiful she was her big eyes that were twinkling with naughtiness even in anger she looked so cute with that mud on.

I wished i had been able to see her face.

"WTH" manik "what are you thinking?Why are you thinking of that commoner?Don't you remember everyone is the same they make you trust them and then break it leave you to die and go away"

with all this thoughts running manik slowly drifted to sleep.


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 4B

Nandini POV

I walked away muttering awful curses to that monster for drenching me in mud.

Later I got an auto and headed to Chachi's Home

I reached Chachi's Home and rang the bell. She welcomed me and was shocked to see me drenched in mud but still she welcomed me warmly by hugging me and at that moment i missed my mother i wished i had her by my side and a lone tear escaped my eye. Chachi saw this and patted my cheek warmly and said "I am like your mother feel free to share anything with me."

and tell me how you got drenched in mud to which i replied saying long story and will tell you later

and then i hugged her back tightly. I feel like home again.

Nandini "Thank you Chachi"

Chachi "OK now come i will show you your room go and fresh up and come for Dinner."

Nandini went to her room and was very happy seeing the room it had one small balcony attached to it through which we can see moon and stars though i am not that fond of it but soon i took bath and came out the first thing i did was to place my favorite jar filled with fireflies on the table beside my bad and removed cloth from it and they were shining and i was shocked would be an understatement i was so happy to see such a beautiful scene in-front of me that i was dancing with that jar in my hand.

From childhood only i have been fond of fireflies because my mom also loved it.My mom used to tell me they glow when there is true love around them.But i don't know the reason of their glowing now but i was happy to see their light.Maybe these light will bring shine to someones life and i prayed to Aiyyapa for that person and headed downstairs for dinner.Dinner was a highly informal affair where Chacha was trying to find faults in Chachi's cooking and Chachi was saying that he wont be able to do as its an expert cooking and laughed at her own statement i joined them at breakfast had some talks with them and i liked them a lot and headed back to my room after bidding good night to both.

I laid on my bed thinking of the eventful day and prayed to Aiyyapa "Aiyyapa please take care of Amms and Rishabh and lots of Happiness for Chacha and Chachi and That Monster also."

Soon sleep overtook because of day's exhaustion and she drifted in deep slumber with sweet dreams.

Next Day


Next Day

Early morning two souls were sleeping peacefully one in a hope of start of a beautiful new journey and other hopes to find his peace.

Nandini's Room

Nandini's sleep was disturbed by sun rays kissing her face she woke up and search for her alarm clock and was shocked to see the time Aiyyapa 8 o clock

"Shit main toh aaj riyaas bhi nai kar paayi Koi baat nai i will start with it tomorrow Chal Nandini lets get ready for your first day of space with that she left to get fresh-n-up"

Same time on the other side of the city one soul was sleeping peacefully when suddenly he was splashed by water and he woke up with a jerk and shouted

"What the hell"

only to find a smirking cabir

"Cabir i am gonna kill you wright now." with that he threw a pillow on him which he successfully got saved with and shouted

"Abey Saale baat to sun meri Ek Baar ghadhi ki taaraf dekh le "

and he got shocked "8.30 hogaye aur tu mujhe abhi baata raha hai pehle nai bata sakta tha"


And After getting ready Manik and Cabir left for College in Manik's new car(Porsche).


Manan Meet in next update

Guys pls comment and like.

Edited by Manankryan - 9 years ago

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