Tu Mera Dulha Main Teri Dulhan/ / Chapter 4 n 5 page 8 // July 19th

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"Maan tumhe mujh se shaddi karni padegi ?" Geet quickly brought a garland and put around Maan's neck..

"Kya ?"His eyes popped out...Struck dumb looked at her and then dropped down to bench almost fainted


kaisi rahi ? shocked ho



few of you had already ready this unfinished SS of me but I want to complete it...in heavy updates something funny



An unfinished comic fiction of me...I want to complete...So up to u wanna read or not...will and few parts to already written ones making it SS instead of ff ...not any compulsion


TU MERA DULHA MAIN TERI DULHAN
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Can't wait for update... Tk you..
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sch mein shcoked the

ist waiting
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I didnt read dis story of ur's di by aft readng d prolouge im waitng 2 read it
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I know few of u had read it long before but can't resist myself to complete it..Aur Jutte bhe padegay especially from Kiran Di...as she had read it too
At time I started I thought of a full length fiction.But better to complete in more five parts adding to I have already...I posted in new thread coz last thread had been closed long back...


Chapter 1


Khuraana Mension / 6:30 in the morning
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Maan is ready for office (haila jst 6:30 ).He tiptoed reached the KM main entrance for a chance to flow away.Daddi Maa tugged him from behind. She was breathless.

"Daddi Maa" Maan rooted to spot.


" Fir se subha subha bhag rahe hai aap ?" She yelled pretending to be angry


"No no Daddi Maa...I m walking let me show u 😆 " he tried to escape from her grip.


"Maan don make fool out of me...If some one goes outside nobody calls from behind...So to stop u...hum bhag kar aaye apke piche.You know I have palpitations" Breathing heavily she said


"So sweet of u Daddi Maa...Plz take care of your health first...Don run behind me again...I m going so don call me back " Maan said forcing Daddi Maa to sit on near by chair



"Maan I always beg u to get married so to avoid me u always run away early n come back home late" She was fuming while standing again from chair


" Ya Maan Sir aap shaddi kar lijiye" Nakul came in between as always he wanted to show his temptations too looking at Maan under Daddi's grip


"Meri shaddi se tumhara kya faida" he put hands on waist glaring Nakul


"After ur shaddi I can also get married" Nakul gave expressionless expressions 😆


"Koi mannat mangi hai tumne bhi k Maan Sir ki shaddi ho jaaye fir shaddi karogay tum " Maan asked contracting brows Nakul regretted (take it easy guys dimaag theek rakho)


"What ?" with wide open eyes both Daddi n Maan yelled.



"Maine kya galat kaha bahut tang karte hai aap"


"Nakul have u gone mad ? Maine kya kiya tumhare sath" Maan was frowning (hai la !!! Nakul kya kaha tumne)


" From last four years aap mere sath he sabh kar rahe hai.Deepak n Raj Kumar r also here...So why me ? "regretting he said..


" Hey bhagwaan yeh din bhi dekhna tha.? "Daddi placed her one hand over her heart and collapsed at near by chair


"What day Daddi Maa. ?..Aap roj he din dekhti hai what's special ?" Maan had no effect of Daddi's reaction..He thought Daddi is doing again emotional atyachaar on him to force him for marriage.


" Maan yeh din..kyo aaya?" Daddi on the verge of cry asked..


" Becoz nite is over Daddi Maa..." Nakul interfered...


" Shut up nakul bhago yahan se.Let me first question Maan n then I ll see u "irritated Daddi burst on Nakul


"Daddi Maa dekh to rahi hai.Oh ur haven't ur glasses let me bring it for u" Nakul grinned like a stupid...


"Nakul hum apka aur Maan ka wo haal karegay k sabh dekhte reh jaa-agay" she warned aggressively...



" Daddi Maa.plz take pity on me .Maan Sir torture me at nite now u.." he folded hands


Maan who was looking lik silent spectator roared at last "Shut up both of u. Now I got it.Daddi aapka dimaag kaha ghum raha hai ? "



" Pehle to ghaas charne gaya tha aab theek ho gaya hai..Hum samjh he nahi paaye why u r saying no for marriage" she was sobbing


" Oh apka dimaag ghas char kar aa gaya hai..but is duffer ka always ghas charta rehta hai.." irritated he pointed Nakul..


" What u wanna say ? " Daddi looked at Maan curiously ..


" Let Nakul explain what I do every nite.." Maan jerked Nakul's shoulder..


" Nahi..hey bhagwaan humme utha lo " she screamed placing hands over ears..looked upward remembering God



" Kyo Daddi Maa u can't walk ? " Poor Nakul was not aware what was on Daddi's mind...


" Nakul I gonna kill u jst answer me what I asked " he had been frustrated with Nakul's attics


" Sir isme bataane wali kya baat hai..from last four years u come late n due to that I alwayz wait for u for ur dinner.Then ur black coffee.What u want to wear next day usko theek se iron karke rakhna padta hai.." Nakul keep on answering what Maan asked.


" Kya matlaab Nakul " curious Daddi said..


" He never ask others neither Deepak nor Raj Kumar.Inki Bibi karegi fir saare kaam from dinner to cloths..So M asking him to get married " Nakul made pity face clearing things


" Sun liya Daddi Maa where u roam in ur thoughts even u don know.." Maan irked


'So this is reason behind Nakul's problem.I thought else "She wiped her tears n sighed deeply..


" Daddi Maa so I ask u don attend those kitty parties n stay away from gossips.Such a great business woman doesn't look good thinking such." He advised


" Let it go apka kush nahi ho sakta...n this Nakul iska dimaag ghass char kar kabhi nahi laut sakta..." he was ready to escape...



" Why u blame Nakul...Ur totally responsible for every one's problem. Hum apse kehte to hai shaddi kar lijiye.This is rite u r most eligible boy in the town " Daddi grabbed his wrist...


" Accha to mera swamwar (where girl chose boy from many )..I am most eligible boy...saari ladkiyo k liya sirf main he bacha hu kya " he cursed himself...( he used swamwar for him as he thought ..one boy for many girlz)


" Quite possible if u think...per jo apse shaddi karegi wo bhi Nakul ki tarah.." Daddi paused for while when Maan gave her tough looks..



"I mean Nakul ki tarah silly nahi..intelligent ho...but should be strong like him to bear you and fulfil ur silly demands atleast." Daddi pulled him near to her...



"That's good Daddi at least u realized why I don wanna get married.If u want me to get married search a girl who ll do what ever I want" He petted her cheek and left...


Daddi just looked him from back rushing away...


" Hye kon hai jo hamare bigade nabaab ko sudaar sakke...? " she nodded head ..


" Daddi Maa main dhudhna shurru karu ? " Nakul offered his services voluntarily ..



" Nakul u hav done enough drama just go away from my sight."Daddi yelled at Nakul n in a jiffy he slipped from there leaving Daddi to think about Maan's match


Hop u ll lik...


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Sonia 😆 😭


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AWESOME
AFTER SO MANY DAYS I LAUGH SO MUCH WHILE READING
WAITING FOR NEXT
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naam mein bhool gayi thi shayad ya pehle koi aur naam tha iss story ka...

I didn't recognize the story but when I read Nakul's complain then I remembered...

bechari Daadi heart attack aate aate bach gaya...

waiting for next part...please update soon...

thanx for pm...
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very funny
continue soon
i dint read before
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That was funny dear
I am reading it first tym.
Will love to read it complete this tym.
Thanks for pm.
Hope u update soon

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