Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Dexterity...

I am just loving your story !

Great going !



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Beautiful update :)

Fantastic :)
Loved it :)
Update soon :)
Thanks for the PM :)



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Amazing...

Such an Interesting Part...

Waiting for the Next Part...




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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: priyavishu18

Amazing...

Such an Interesting Part...

Waiting for the Next Part...



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyGirlRashi

As usual waiting for next part
Do update soon
Nd thanks for pm



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: andy1245

amazing but i think ishwari should apologize to sona personally



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rukiaa

Devki is so cuteee...😆 .Mother-Son talks were so touching.😳 That Hug. Amazing update.
Can't wait for next part.😃



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Sona struggling by herself she had her father's illness her daughters responsiblity while Dev also feels he failed Sona he failed his daughter and he failed his mother .
I really like that both Dev and his mother finally had a conversation regarding Sona and the fact that Ishwari's insecurity of her son not loving her when he falls for a girl was nicely explained by Dev and now Ishwari too can see the difference between a mother's love and a lovers love
the Dixit family now at the Bose house asking for Sona's hand in marriage and Dev notice that Sona is not ready but I'm sure she must just overwhelmed with everything



Yes you got it right..😃

Happy to know ppl were able to understand my story which is more than enough for first time writer.

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: cutie15

Awesome update
Loved it soo much
I really loved the car scene
And then dev finally saying what he feels
Very well written
Loved it
Excited to read more




@ bold ; Ohh blackmailed thing😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
absolutely awesome
I loved it
And I also liked Ishwari and Dev's conversation
Finally dev aur sona ek hue
Precap was awesome
please continue soon and pm me too please

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