Nibir OS : ****My Rainy Love****

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Nibir OS : MY RAINY LOVE



Today...I shifted in the colony "GREEN CITY" ...such a huge and beautiful colony it is...just like its name...the whole colony is surrounded by greenery...i was sitting inside my room and was arranging my things...when some cul breeze entered inside my room through the window to invite me to enjoy its freshness...leaving my things around i took some steps in forward direction to follow those breeze which led me to my balcony and as soon as i reached my balcony i welcomed those cul breeze by closing my eyes and stretching my both arms ...enjoying the rainy weather with greenery all around such an amazing feeling it was...i was busy in inhailing those fresh air when tiny drops of rains started falling on the earth...feeling those freshness of rains i opened my eyes and stretched my arms infront to capture those beautiful drops in my hand...and as soon as a drop of rain fall on my palm i immediately tasted it...and closed my eyes to feel those wonderful taste...

"Hey go out and enjoy the cul weather kabir"...my heart said to me...
Listening to my heart i went outside and reached to near by park...and as soon as i reached der...rain started falling heavily...making me wet completely... i was standing beside a small tree...and was ruffling my wet hair when my eyes falls on the most beautiful girl of universe...yes she was just like a beauty of heaven...who was dancing flawlessly enjoying the rains...her sparkling coal black eyes were twinkling like stars with her each step while her bushy eyebrows were adding an innocent looks to her eyes...her smile...her smile was shining like a moon... her pink sleeveless top which now became wet was perfectly fitted to her curves while her white pant was ...adding more beauty to the combination of her outfit...seeing her dancing...so effortlessly yet smoothly... i too wanted to dance with her...to follow her each step...her each move was so clean and perfect..that it cant be expressed in words...seems that the rains falling on the floor became her music...and asking her to make herself free like a bird and enjoy the moment...she was twirling herself dreamily...when i reached der not being able to control myself ...and hold her index finger and srarted twirling her...she at first gasped in shock wen i helded her finger but then i made a cute puppy face and asked her to continue her dance through my eyes...she then smiled brightly and started following my hands...yet being unknown to each other we were enjoying our dance laughing and smiling like we knew each other from so many years...i wanted to tell her that she is the most beautiful and prettiest girl of the universe i hv ever seen but damn to my voice...i cant speak...as i m dumb from birth...i look up at the sky and pleaded to God to give my voice back for just a sec. Just to compliment her...but the truth is truth which cant be changed...but i hv to compliment her...dat she is not only beautiful from her face but she is also beautiful from her heart though i hadnt talked her once but i can feel the pureness of her heart...and as soon as we finished the dance...i kneeled down infront of her and helded her right hand with mine taking the golden opportunity of the situation...i said to her "U R AN ANGEL WITH PURE HEART" by lipsting my lips...and as soon as my heart said this word to her...a magic of love havoic in air...because she smiled...yes she smiled ...she read my lips...and after smiling brightly...she turned around and ran from there while my eyes were continuously gazing with love at her retreating feature...as soon as she vanished from there i open my arms to thank the rains...that brought rainy love in my life...

"I Love Uh My Rainy Love" i said in my heart and went from there after once again collecting those beautiful memories from this sight...

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I was sitting on the bench of park alone and was enjoying...the greenery along with cul breeze playing with my hairs and kissing on my cheeks...when tiny drops of rains started falling from the cloud...i stretched my one arm infront to captured those drops and as soon as a drop fall on my palm i tasted it and closed my eyes to feel those taste...as the time passes the rain started falling heavily which made me drenched...i always love the rains...as it always soothes my pain and gives me new hope...

"Go nisha go...dance with your heart and enjoy the rain"...my inner voice said to me...

Then in verry next moment i stood up forgetting about the surrounding...and started dancing...to free myself from all the pains...and soon i started enjoying my dance...i was dancing happily like a free bird when my eyes falls on the most hottest yet cutest guy of the universe...yes the cuttest guy who was busy in ruffling his own wet hairs...i cant tell you how cute yet innocent he was looking while ruffling his hairs. ..then i again shifted my concentration towards my dance...my rainy dance...i was again dancing happily when i felt his hot gaze towards mine...his those hazel brown orbs...which have the tendency to melt me like a chocolate ice cream...his those white shirt which now became fully drenched...exposing his manly figure...completely...oh damn he was looking so hot...but his antics were so cute...how can anyone look hot yet cute at same time...thinking about him...i started twirling and again enjoying the rain...when he suddenly came infront of me...and holded my index finger...firstly i became shocked...while his touch sends shiver to my spine...then in verry next moment he made a cute puppy face and asked me to dance with him...i was so lost in his orbs that i didnt knew when i smiled...and started enjoying dance with her...i tell uh that dance was the most beautiful dance of my life...then as we finished our dance...he kneeled down infront of me like a gentle man holding my right hand with his and complimented me..."U R AN ANGEL WITH PURE HEART" ...I so wanted to hear his sweet voice but damn to my luck that I M DEAF from birth...i then look up the sky n pleaded to God to let me hear his voice one...but the truth is truth...which cant be changed...after listening his compliment i smiled brightly...pink hues started forming on my face due to his constant gaze...and to hide those blush i turned around and ran from there...still smiling like a mad girl. ...now m standing on my balcony holding the railings...and thanking the rains that brought rainy love in my life...

"I Luv Uh My Rainy Love" ...i shouted opening my arms...to feel those warm gaze of his on me once again...

Pata nhi kya likhi hu kyu likhi hu bas ye soch lo ki ye mere boredom ka side effect h...so yr criticisms are most welcome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Edited by ...Shibu... - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow wow wow kitna beautiful tha ye wow
Rab ne bana di jodi hai kabir can't speak nisha can't hear😛
Loved it loved it so much...!!!
Please make this ts I want one more part... Please😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Woow!! It touched heart. Its so damm beautiful. Loved it to the core.
Pls one more part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely OS nimi!
Kabir and Nisha's pov and their admiration of the other was well written 👍🏼
Nisha being deaf was an unexpected twist!
Very nice OS on the whole!
Do write more and thanks for pm 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow Nimi it was so beautiful😳...luved it❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was sooo cute 😳 awesome... bus typo thik kar le 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow nimi it was superb
Totally a unique one 👏
Loved it
Do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Plz make this ts. It's awesome
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update...luved It...
Plzzz Write a Second Part of It...

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