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Hi
First of all my readers will ask why this new post...When I have ff thread ? Well my straight way answer is that replies to ff will mingle with the response I want here...which is very important ?
Keeping things apart let me come to main questions...
1: What Maan did to Geet that was unforgivable..He was devil till now but don't you think circumstances should change now.Every story has up and downs like our life...
I don wanna discus anyone in real life but it is fact I have seen people who commit mistake in married life they forgive each other...not easily but giving one chance to relationship..
But as this is fiction lots of masala will be there and Maan will not get forgiveness any soon...
But u think he deserve forgiveness or second chance...?
If Vicky is turning out to be insane ? or its his normal reaction..Many readers are sympathetic with him..
Readers say Vicky's outblast on Maan n Maan's silence and helplessness
in front of his younger brother...and as he was craving for Geet on his side in his drunken state..It seems like I want to make him Mahaan in jiffy....Is it really ? If there is any other option please tell me ...I need Ideas frank ideas and response...
Justification for over smart Mannya,...if she is behaving mature than her age... ? No I say no..she is not.I have nephew almost 3 and I closely observe him how smart he is...and she is almost 6
One more incident a funny one but related to this point...at supermarket I was arranging things in my grocery bags putting them on shelves made there for customer's convinece...when a four year old jumped over it just near by me...I said please baby be careful...
He and his brother ( 6 or 7 ) first apologized me in a gentlemanly way...I asked younger one how cute baby you are he said " I gonna be four ...( that n that day ) and they both were busy talking to each other until their mom arrived..I felt how much genius kids are of this generation...So for girl like Mannya its normal...
Still if some thing u feel annoyed or u think I m on way to make him Mahaan instead of showing where he pays for his deeds please tell me
I need frank opinion and if u wanna tell me something is wrong u are more welcome to point it...I wll never mind..and it will help to improve my ff...
I know it is my story but if I want to make it worth reading for readers Their attached to plot is much needed instead of bearing boring track...
Will wait
Thanks
Sonia
Shiv Shakti
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