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gill123

@gill123

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Maan deserve second chance but loved the way you write ur story

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Hemlata

@nitika20

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

New Idea kya du...
Hmm ..
Mara peeti kar dono bhai jhagra khatam kar lete ...
I guess Daadi ne Vicky ko disowned kiya uska explaination .. De sakti hai...
villains ka face to clear kardo ... ab ...
Bas itna hi...
😉

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vasavi_sri

@vasavi_sri

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

The story is on a perfect track

I like the way it is going

Maan he needs a second chance

Maanya I didn't feel anything wrong

With her children of her age r quite

Matured

Vicky what he is going through

Reflects on his behavior

The person he hate was the one taking

Care of him all the while is hard to digest

Because all these years will be just an

Illusion and sufferings of Geet r making

Him mad

So every character u have written is amazing

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1017966

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

your writing style is awesome...

i loved the way you write this story...

maan ko 2nd chance milna chahey...

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payal.gupta177

@payal.gupta177

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Love the story the way it is progressing. Years of hatred for Maan doesn't allow Vicky to think anything positively for his big brother. What Maan did to Geet also cannot be forgiven easily as she has suffered the maximum. Nothing against Maanya as kids are smart these days. May be Vicky is going thru an emotional turmoil when he realizes that the kids he thought of his own is actually his brother's and they are getting attached to their original Dad and would leave him some day or other. So his behaviour may be justified. Love all the characters in this story.

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tessyrani

@tessyrani

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

I will look forward to read your views as the story

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RHEA123

@RHEA123

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Give maan a second chance

BT nt so soon

Thoda who bhi to tadpe

I want a high voltage confrontation drama between maneet

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Haya1022bmw

@Haya1022bmw

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

I will read what u write... A writer should write according to his or her choice

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1029644

Suspended

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

Ur a fab writer n I completely trust ur writing skill... Coming to Mann...ofcourse he did wrong but I think everyone should deserve another chance to make everything right... Vicky is not not acting insane...he just afraid to loose children's love...he already have lost his lover... Coming to mannya is very smart child n very sensitive n observant in nature...but still very innocent... Apart from these Sonia u haven't provided me with the password of last update...plzz do that