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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: babita..
Beautiful depiction of Raghav and Trisha becoming RaTri 👏👏
I will come back tomorrow with review on this loveliest poem ever 🤗
Thanks Manisha, hugs and loves ❤️

Thanks a lot Babita, loves to you too...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
Such a awesome poem manisha. Really loved it soo much. You are such a awesome poet.such a beautiful poem

Thanks a lot Tasha, glad you liked it...your appreciation means a lot...😊

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: DEKER
wao its awesome,wonderful i have no words to say
it was amazing,i loved it a lot dear thankyou soo...much manisha for such a beautiful poem
👏👏👏
⭐️
with lots of love ❤️🤗

Thanks Lavanya, glad you liked the poem... thanks for the motivation...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: babita..
Such a beautiful treat to know what RaTri are 👏👏
Lovely depiction of each one of them so fully in the aura of each other ! The relation is so well described that started with mind and resulted in the exchange of hearts ❤️
U have placed a lovely journey of their understanding each other and the love they possess for each other. Nice to see the closeness so pious and loving !
Nice to read your poems Manisha, they are so near to the reality.
Loved the line " Their love is bound through an unseen thread "
and your wish in the last is so pure and beautiful ! ⭐️⭐️ 👏👏

I just love U Manisha 🤗 ❤️ 🤗

RaTri has given me a lovely friend in you 😊

Thanks a lot Babita, your appreciation is the most important gift for me...

The last four lines I penned down while I was typing it...it was just a spontaneous instant thought...glad you liked them...

Lots of love to you as well... I owe a lot to this forum for giving you in my life...you are so close to my heart sweetheart... you are so very special darling...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

I'm so happy today that I've written a new poem which I'll post in some time... Hope you like it..

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Hi everyone, this time i have written a poem on Raghav's character as depicted in the show... this was not initially planned but i was so happy today with the revival of the forum that i instantaneously wrote this poem...Hope you all like it...

Raghav's...that's how I know you

He is such a remarkable person,

So easily he develops a liaison.

He has an enormous strength,

So cleverly he does comprehend.

Ever so trivial might be the details,

In his presence, truth forever prevails.

With his inner self...he has a struggle,

To outside world...he never lets it babble.

He has behind him...his dreadful past,

His fears and apprehensions are so very vast.

She being the love of his life,

For her he wants to live.

Although he loves her with all his passion,

His past prevents him from making his confession.

He is waiting for the day,

When his love finds its way.

Hope you all like this...please provide your valuable reviews and opinions...loves to all and once again CONGRATS

Edited by braveheartdoc - 9 years ago

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Tasha1994

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

wow soo awesome you showed Raghavs character soo beautifully. really loved it thank you soo much for such a awesome poem .

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: babita..
In wait Manisha

thanks babita...

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braveheartdoc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Tasha1994
wow soo awesome you showed Raghavs character soo beautifully. really loved it thank you soo much for such a awesome poem .

Thanks Tasha for liking it...i'm so glad you liked it...i'm waiting for your next vm and the next part of your story...