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sass8

@sass8

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Geez what a tortuous and hard road toward love it was. That self impose misery from Yash was at time frustrating , at time endearing cause the man is loyal to a fault . And what with the self scarifying Aarti, really leaving her son, 🥱😆 those two were made for each other. But I do love how she dare him after his threatening speech of her leaving, love the take charge side of Aarti. Oh and the kids so adorable, to want mummy , that was funny😆😆. Good one.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: zuby87
Magic sweet Tess, sorry for the late reply was just so busy dear...you know this is just so beautiful, at first yash didn't want anything to do with aarti, but now he has realized that he loves her, silly man...perfection

thanks Zuby-Duby, no apologies needed as long as you read and enjoyed it! 😊

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: sass8
Geez what a tortuous and hard road toward love it was. That self impose misery from Yash was at time frustrating , at time endearing cause the man is loyal to a fault . And what with the self scarifying Aarti, really leaving her son, 🥱😆 those two were made for each other. But I do love how she dare him after his threatening speech of her leaving, love the take charge side of Aarti. Oh and the kids so adorable, to want mummy , that was funny😆😆. Good one.

yes I had to make her a little more assertive, she went too much with the flow for my liking. leaving Ansh is something I would not have put past the Aarti from the show... Yash had to come around at some point right? 😆

thanks sass dear, happy you enjoyed it! 😃

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jhil

@jhillyarya

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

this is the track which everyone love most. THE MUMBAI TRACK

in which everyone wanted to see more and more and never get tired to read about this..

there was several write ups in this and everyone had the different angle and you showed it completely differently..

yes it was much needed to give cold shoulder to Yash.. his over concern for Arpita, it was neededto show that Aarti also was not a thing she had the emotions and expectations. you chose right, the bangles and i loved the way you showed everything. Aarti's anger, Yash's frustration and confusion..

yes yes he was a pure tube light and he always proved it😆

well how he could stop himself when the beautiful wife is around after all he was not saint and i am glad he took the step in time.. to say to show his love for her and how much he need her to be with.. it was🤢... well AarYA ALWAYS🤢 and you make them 🤢 🤢 🤢

it is beautiful👏.. so much beautiful👏 so so much beautiful👏

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: jhillyarya
this is the track which everyone love most. THE MUMBAI TRACK
in which everyone wanted to see more and more and never get tired to read about this..
there was several write ups in this and everyone had the different angle and you showed it completely differently..
yes it was much needed to give cold shoulder to Yash.. his over concern for Arpita, it was neededto show that Aarti also was not a thing she had the emotions and expectations. you chose right, the bangles and i loved the way you showed everything. Aarti's anger, Yash's frustration and confusion..
yes yes he was a pure tube light and he always proved it😆
well how he could stop himself when the beautiful wife is around after all he was not saint and i am glad he took the step in time.. to say to show his love for her and how much he need her to be with.. it was🤢... well AarYA ALWAYS🤢 and you make them 🤢 🤢 🤢

it is beautiful👏.. so much beautiful👏 so so much beautiful👏

this comment had me 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 and I am still 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃😃 😃 awww thaaankuuu VD of mine! 🤗