Cuando Te Perdi (When I lost you) - IPKKND

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Hi Guys

Don't know how many of you remember me! But during the IPKKND Crazy fangirling period I had an IPKKND story on going called Cuando The Perdi - (When I lost you)

During some circumstances I had to stop writing the story and remove the work of IF. However after some consideration and it was the my favourite story that I wrote and quite close to me because of the language and therefore I have decided to continue the story. However the story won't be available on IF other than the excerpt. Those who are interested in reading I'll leave a link below for my blog and the first 4 chapters will be available to read before it becomes password protected. The only reason for this is because I have had to suffer a lot of plagiarism and the other reason is if you write stories you want to know what your readers are really thinking and not just comments like nice update update soon. Those are the worst types of comments. So if you are going to comment like that then please don't expect any permission no matter how rude that sounds sorry.

Not only will Cuando Te Perdi be available but my other stories that I am planning on continuing will be available

Deception
&
Droplets - Sequel

I hope you all will want to join me on this journey and I hope to see you all at my blog.

https://miaddicion.wordpress.com

I shall leave the excerpt below

Thank you to those who are already supporting me. I can't thank you guys enough and I can't wait to see new readers on board

- Li x

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Cuando Te Perd


When I Lost You

Heavy heartedly she continued to write and scribble down on the uneven piece of blank paper. Her eyes calm but focusing on the intricate detail of her text she was forming. Taking deep breaths she let the pen slip out of her trembling fingers. She placed the sheet of paper on the bedside table clamping the crystal stone safely on it, preventing it's escape.

Glancing at the room for the final time, her eyes lingered on the wall, there rested the picture captured during the stable times. But now it has all changed for good or for bad? Erasing the disturbing thoughts from her mind she pushed herself out of the room, encouraging herself to complete her task.

This was it.

Her mind spun back in time, to the heartbreaking moment when she was injected with the cruelness of his words.

"You need to control yourself, you can't just lash out on her for no reason" He barked at her shaking her shoulders.

"Why can't I? She took away my life" She shrugged off his grip.

"It was your own fault" He firmly said briskly walking away from her.

Bolting back she couldn't help but let the tears freely flow out of her swollen, worn out eyes. It was her fault; she tweaked her own destiny leaving the result atrocious. She kept on walking, stumbling slightly at the images reforming in her mind. There was no chance she could go on like this forever.

"She needs help. Her minds taking over her and she has no control" She heard him whisper at the elderly woman in front of him.

"I'm trying to help her. But she's too adamant" She heard the woman usher out, as she knelt down against the table breaking down, resting her head against his shoulder.

"She's ruining everyone's lives unknowingly" She again heard him explain as he soothed her.

That faint, inconsiderate memory washed over her like a broken tape. There was no room for her, not here not there. She was doing the right thing she knew she was, no one could stop her.

Standing adjacent to the tree, she glanced at the scenery around her it was serene, peaceful and the sound of water flowing just how she wished it to be.

Not a soul could stop her today.

Inching forward she removed her strapless sandals letting her feet sink into the ground that was ready to accept her no matter how many flaws she had. Squeezing her eyes shut she uttered her final words before ending everything.

"I love you"

That was it.

Khushi Gupta did the deed.





Here comes the prologue if you are all interested please check my blog out where I will be posting the first chapter
Edited by Aveiro - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey
I never read sth from but this seems really intreting.i hope u allow me to read this story on wordpresss.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow one more story from u.: )

Excited : ))
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please don't send me PM's requesting access for my stories on the blog. I've given the blog link and following the release of four chapters for each story it will be made private. That's only because I want readers that actually want to share their thoughts and comments on my updates and they appreciate the hard work. Those only will receive an invite.
To get on the list you have 4 chapters to show me how loyal you are. Not update soon. Interesting.

Toodles see you all on the blog
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Averio welcome back
We will b waiting for you
See you on your blog

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