SwaSan OS: Two Halves Of One

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

Hey SwaSanians!!
So I'm here with my first OS ever. And honestly even I don't know what I've written. I just kept on writing and writing and this is the outcome. I hope all of you like it, cause I really suck at writing I know, without any modesty!

This is based on the aftermath of this track. It is how SwaSan now do not have problems and are happy yet unhappy because Swara's guilt is somewhere eating her. And then what happens...please read and tell me via your likes and comments. All sorts of criticism is accepted!😊

And I would like to dedicate this to all SwaSanians! Just love all of you, and this is for you people.

Thank you! Hope you people enjoy reading!

Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Mallika-E-Zain

@Mallika-E-Zain

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Posted: 9 years ago

Some notes-

*Hypnos- The Greek God of Sleep

**The Oneiroi- The three Greek Gods, who are responsible for dreams collectively.
Phobetor- The Greek God, of nightmares, one among the Oneiroi

Sorry guys, I just love Greek Mythology and henceforth this is it! Hope you can bear wimme!

Just a request- Since I'm really new in this writing field, if someone could tell me how we make a members only post, it will a 'badi meherbani'

Thank you!😊

Edited by MusicAddict - 9 years ago

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akanksha

@sharif_lafungi

Inactive

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res...
will unres morning me...
sorry *running away now*

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sujay kumar

@Sujayricky

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res
Will try to unres soon

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lucky.m

@lucky.m

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Sakshi🤗

This is too good yaar👏👏 ..I loved the title to start with and I would love to watch something like this post swara regains her memory ..The start was bang on and then our darlins😳 cute convo, that hug and totally loved reference of finger in tea😆and that wink of sunny with cheesy smile😳 and the scene which followed

swara's gulit .those lines post confrontation ,that part is beautiful..⭐️⭐️👏

If guilt had been more powerful than love, then I would have never fallen for you, Swara

This line from sanskaar ..my fav and then all that which followed. chocolate scene swara's promise to sanskaar ..The flow is seamless..

Looking forward for the next part😊

Love

Lucky

Edited by lucky.m - 9 years ago

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Juanita

@BlurredLines

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Posted: 9 years ago

Res . I loved it Sakshi dear .. . Will unres ASAP..

Edited by NitaReid - 9 years ago

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Nynaeve

@Nynaeve

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

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Unres,

Dear Sakshi,

That was an ethereal OS as lovely and amazing as the bond that Swara and Sanskaar share.

The title itself had me hooked (I knew you must be a fan of Greek mythology and thought you would be aware of the greek classics - the title is very reminiscent of the Symposium, especially Aristophanes speech regarding his eulogy to love)

The whole story brought out Swara's guilt and her misery so well and a brilliant display of the understanding Sanskaar - he does know what to say that will get his message across - short, to the point and absolutely profound - as is with this line (which by now is universally acclaimed) " If guilt were stronger than love, I would never have fallen for you" 👏👏👏

She does get the message, there is no use carrying guilt, it is better to move forward and make amends, and when love is the guiding light, it is so much easier. Which is how she also realises that she and she alone is the reason for his joy and happiness. That is the simple truth, they both are the reason for each other's joy and happiness, and with the love they have they could create even more beautiful memories.

Do keep writing.

love,

Nyna

Edited by Nynaeve - 9 years ago