SwaSan OS: Two Halves Of One - Page 4

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awww this was so sweet
loved it

Thanks Prachi!😃 Glad you loved it!

Originally posted by: __nidhi__

God!!

you wrote the os so beautifully!

the dialogues, the pain, the guilt you wrote exceptionally beautiful!

i am in love with the os!

and to be honest there are only some stories which touch my heart and this is one of them!

i hope you write more!

Love,

Nidhi.

Hey Nidhi🤗
Thank you to infinity and back for this comment!!😳 Can't express in words, how happy you made me!!😃 Beyond happiness and elation, honestly!
Your comment honestly touched my heart too!! It's the first time, someone said this to me. I'm sooo happy you loved this OS and that it touched your heart, it is sooo motivating. I'll surely try to write more!
"Exceptionally Beautiful!" Thank you so much!!
Lots of love
Sakshi!

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Res

Unres,

Dear Sakshi,

That was an ethereal OS as lovely and amazing as the bond that Swara and Sanskaar share.

The title itself had me hooked (I knew you must be a fan of Greek mythology and thought you would be aware of the greek classics - the title is very reminiscent of the Symposium, especially Aristophanes speech regarding his eulogy to love)

The whole story brought out Swara's guilt and her misery so well and a brilliant display of the understanding Sanskaar - he does know what to say that will get his message across - short, to the point and absolutely profound - as is with this line (which by now is universally acclaimed) " If guilt were stronger than love, I would never have fallen for you" 👏👏👏

She does get the message, there is no use carrying guilt, it is better to move forward and make amends, and when love is the guiding light, it is so much easier. Which is how she also realises that she and she alone is the reason for his joy and happiness. That is the simple truth, they both are the reason for each other's joy and happiness, and with the love they have they could create even more beautiful memories.

Do keep writing.

love,

Nyna

Hey Nyna!🤗
Thanks for the lovely comment dear. It made me sooo happy!!😃 So even you loved the title? I had sat 15 minutes chewing the cap of my pen, as to what the title should be..lol. Glad it hooked you! Another Greek Mythology fan!! Great, Hi5. I just love Greek mythology and the tales!! The 12 Olympians and all!

Sanskaar is the best when it comes to understanding his lady love. He understands what she is going through, as he himself has gone through the same once and therefore, let's her cry and then uses his best words to convince her and make her strong too.
*Universally acclaimed- Gosh Nyna, you had me blushing here, honestly!! Thank you so much!!🤗❤️

I wanted to end with Swara being stronger to fight with her guilt and realising that how their happiness is just related to each other! And how they can make so many memories together, with the strength of their love at it's peak!!

I'll try to write more!!
Thanks once again- just loved ur comment!
Sakshi!

Originally posted by: Nynaeve

Dear Sakshi,

Unres page 1

Nyna

Replied above Nyna!! Thanks!

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Awesome :)

Thank you!😳

Originally posted by: Jade0001

Beautiful OS

Thanks!!😃

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

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Just commenting Kam!!

Originally posted by: Vaiyambar...

Res... man just loving this... want to reserve my post here... will unres today at any cost... lol...

Unres... I'm sorry... for delay.. i lost the link.. then i forgot the title too... 😕 ..

Shakshi.. such an emotional os darling.. the guilt in Swara clearly visible.. those words from sanskaar. If anyone in her place they would have killed him... that line... everyone mentioned it.. were superb.. the chocolate moment was pleasant.. the promise from swara to him and herself was awesomebuild/generated/source/rs. Just loved it.. I don't know i can expect this from CVS or not... i can't keep my hope on them.. Love you...

With love...

Kam...

No sorries Kam!! I've all time in the world for SwaSan and SwaSanians...lol!😃
Thank you so much!! I wanted something like this in the show, hence it's here, like another beginning!
If CVs gave even 20% of this, I'll be beyond happy honestly!! But let's see!! Thanks for the beautiful comment, made my morning amazing!!<3❤️
Lots of love,
Sakshi!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

Awesome...

Thanks!!😃

Superb os sakshi dear... 👏