AarYa OS: Vitality- The Beginning

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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that was so beautiful ⭐️ both of their point of view ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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So beautiful my sweety jhil.an art of pure love.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it was beautiful
loved it
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww awesome os i loved it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful and different loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh Jhilly Jhu this was sooo beautiful! I think I already told you but I'll say it again. You are on a roll with emotional OSes and I'm loving them! ❤️

love has a language all it's own and you showed that very well in this OS: one says one thing but true love listens to the unsaid wishes too, it sees the fears and insecurities and it shows that those do not matter... What is vital is the love which remains under any circumstance, love which finds a beginning to every seeming end.

One moment of weakness (they lost control) had such a ripple effect which was felt long after... They started to shape their dreams but that one moment set them on a different route. She lost her mobility and she did not want to be a burden to him... He heard what she was not saying, her heart wanted to be loved despite being broken. Then she loses her voice just when she wants to tell him to leave: she realizes she does not want that when she fears for his life. She is able to stand, why? His loving care and her relief at having him come back to her. Finally she accepts that with him by her side they can overcome any obstacle... He never ceased to remind her that his love for her was unconditional by slipping her those notes with the same message: I love you, until she could no longer deny it and had to accept this one vital truth for the most beautiful beginning of the rest of their lives, together

superb, amazing, beautiful! A true piece of art my VD! You best keep going, you won't find me complaining 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS with great and emotional content
you always keep the reader glued throughout to your story
keep up the great work
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh wow Jhil. 👏
This is one of the most touching OS I have read in the last few months. His love is so unconditional. It became her strength and gave her courage to fight against her own body and emerged victorious as now she can stand.

I'm sure she will soon get back her voice also.

Once again you've left me speechless with your creativity. ⭐️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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really beautiful os , loved it

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