I want to be positive ff..finale.. Part 8 and just a lil after thought

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nancyrio90

@nancyrio90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi friends...

Just inspired to write a fanfic..let's see how it articulates..all feedback good or bad is welcome

I want to be positive..ff..Part 1

It had been 6 months since PCT had closed down...Suman was working hard to bring it back to full swing.

On the other side..it was more than 2 months since the truth of Ramnaths lie had surfaced with great efforts from Kamini chachi ..for her own selfish reasons but the fact was truth was out..and Shravan of course had not taken it too well... he had confronted his father for lying to him all his life ...but somehow whatever explanation Ramnath gave him seemed tooo trivial and minimal for this act of betrayal to his own son. Chachi ensured Shravan got chance to confront his mother too...Though nirmala gave a full length anwers to her son's accusations and questions but still could not provide much respite to his wounded heart ..which was bleeding with betrayal in some or the other way by both his parents... he couldn't see anything more than breach of his trust from both ends.

After a few days of thinking and moving out of Malhotra mansion Shravan had taken up a small apartment next to Tiwari killa...he was determind t t hat no longer he would let negativity lead his life ..he somewhat came around with this thought and started talking

occasionally to his mom...Though

his hurt was still too fresh to let go so easily..he was trying hard ...despite all positivity he was trying to bring to his life...he cud not forgive his dad and.he had cut all ties with his dad..and started his own practice.

Now Sumo ...the day truth came out the realization had hit him like lightning that Sumo was the only one being truthful to him all along..she had put everything at stake selflessly to show him the truth but he was blinded by his father's love and lie and his ego

He had gone Sumo right then to speak to her...but was met with a different Sumo who was cold not ready to listen and hurt beyond repair...He tried all tactics of talking to her over the days ...followed her ...stalked her ..thru Preeti ... thru pushkar..thru masi... thru mani..but was of no use.. she was determined this time not to let this man play havoc in her life once again and she made this message loud and clear..in one of the last confrontations she told him" Agar tum chahate ho ki main poori tarah phir se toot jau tho mere peeche aana warna nahi.."..

Shravan cudnt counter this but was determined to win her back...with positivity...

To be continued soon

Feed back welcome

Edited by nancyrio90 - 9 years ago

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Mitali Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

Seems interesting.

Do continue soon 😊

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Anupriya

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Posted: 9 years ago

really interesting... chapter was amazing... loved ur concept... update soon...

loadss of love

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nancyrio90

@nancyrio90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for the comments..

Here is Part 2

I want to be positive Part 2

A lots was happening in Pushkars life too..he was now incharge of Malhotra and associates as Ramnath was in no frame of mind to run the co. And all load came on Pushkar.. Though Kamini had achieved what she wanted to but she had paidhuge price for it..she had lost her son... Pushkar ..he had stopped talking to her noticing her after realizing her intentions and the mess she had created for Shravan.. ..the last nail in the coffin was Shravans decision of moving out of Malhotra Mansion ... Pushkar wanted to move out with him but Shravan told him he needed some time alone to put himself back together and didn't want to be responsible for another broken family... his words had hit Pushkar hard and he stayed back for Shravans sake..

Also pushkar was taking charge of his personal life ..he had mustered tge courage and had proposed to Preeti...but was met with a reply he didn't know how to handle..

She had told him that she loved him but wouldn't go against her family for him..as her family was of utmost importance to her...

Pushkar knew with all that had happened in the recent past amongst the families ..convincing both families for this would be an uphill task ..but he was ready for this and more than dettermined to not let the love of life go away without giving his best shot.

On the other hand Shravan was trying hard to get Sumos attention.. he would stand all morning out of Tiwari killa to just get a glimpse of her..waiting patiently for her to give him one chance to express explain all that was there in his heart. Everyday when she came out of the house he would stand in front of her car with all the hope in his eyes that she would speak to him...but she would drive away without even noticing him...it broke his heart but ..He was not ready to give up so he used to stand again in the evening after the whole days work with the same expectation. His efforts were being noticed by not only Suman but also someone else...Nanu...

Everyday during course of his evening walks Nanu often saw Shravan walking towards Tiwari killa to take his "regular standing position"...shravan wud see him too and wud touche his feet...as if asking for forgiveness every single time.. Shravans luck smiled o. Him and one day Nanu called out to Shravan while he stood in his regular place and made him sit with him under the tree and said...

Part 3 coming soon

Feedback appreciated😃

Edited by nancyrio90 - 9 years ago

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Fero

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Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

Great going 👏
Update soon

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nancyrio90

@nancyrio90

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Continued...

Part 3..

Nanu shravan sat under the tree..and Nanu said.

" Shravan tum ye kyon kar rahe ho? Tumhe kya lagta hai isse kuch badal jayega aur Suman tumpe vishwaas karegi mauka degi...and suddenly Shravan had a feeling of dejavu...and the terrace scene crossed his mind and the memory of warm hug brought a smile on his face..he said "shayad"...Shravan continued..

Nanu mujhe pata hai maine jo bhi kiya hai Suman ke saath uske baad uska mujhe maaf karna aasan nah I hai par mai umeed nahi kho sakta..har baar sumo me itni pareshaniya jheli par woh apni positive attitude ki wajah Se har baar waapis khadi hui..ladi and came out stronger... mujhe bhi ussse yehi seekhna hai..Maine har baar pareshaniyon mein ghir kar apni life ko ek negative mod diya hai...par ab bus... iss baar nahi aur aage kabhi bhi nahin..jaise sumo ne kabhi haar nahi mani.. mai bhi nahi maanuga...ab mujhe uska bharosa dosti waapis jeetni hee hai...chahe mahinne lage saal lage ya umar beet jaye..mai usse aur ek baar khone ko tayyar nahi hoon...na kismat na main na khud sumo mujhe usse mere pass wapis aane se rok nahi sakti...maine sumo se he seekha hai..mai uss jaisa tho shayad kabhi nahin ban sakta itna positive...par haan koshish jari hai...maine jo bhi kiya woh main badal nahi sakta Maine sumo ko hamesha shayad taken for granted liya..uski aachayi dosti ki kadar nahi ki..ab jab mujhe sirf uski kadar hai tho irony dekhiye usse meri nahi hai...I can't blame her for it..Nanu main suman ki dosti waapis paana chahata hoon..maine usse bachapan se apna sacha saathi maana hai...aur main usse bahut pyaar karta hoon..Shravan paused..Nanu looked at him...but he continued without shying away from what he said..but reiterated ..haan nanu maine Sumo se bahut pyar karta hoon..par kabhi usse bata nahin paaya..yeh meri bewakoofi thi ki maine pyaar ko taqat nahin apni kamzori samjaha..par ab aur nahin..Sumo hi meri sachi saathi meri taqat hai bhale woh mere sath ho ya nahin..usne mujhe inn mushkilo se ladna sikhaya. Nanu aaap shayad mujhpe vishwaas nahin kar paa rahe honge..par main..Shravan paused as he was too emotional to talk any further.. . Nanu looked into his determined yet vulnerable eyes...he seemed honest...Nanu patted his shoulder and got up and left...Shravan wasn't sure why he left without saying a word...but he felt relieved...the pent up emotions had got an outlet and a channelised one...

It was late in the night till he stood outside Tiwari killa and he went unnoticed again..

Shravan walked back to his apartment just to find Pushkar pacing up and down out of his apmnt...they both got into the house and Pushkar blurted..Yeh Preeti mujhe pagal kardegi...ek taraf maa hai jinhe apne alawa kisi ki padi nahi hain..air ek taraf Preeti hai jo adi hai ki jab tak ghar waale nahi maan jaata!ae she won't accept my love...

Shravan..looked confused...Pushkar hadn't told him this earlier and suddenly ...Pushkar soon realised the confusion on his face and told him the background...that he has fallen in love with Preeri and has told everybody at home that he wants to marry her...but no body is ready to accept their relationship.. Shravan felt bad for Pushkar as he looked tensed but still Shravan cudnt stop smiling as he was really happy for him..and he gave his brother a tight hug before congratulating Pushkar for being in love and said chote tu tho bada choopa rustam nikla.. Shravan told Pushkar..tu ghar jaa main kuch sochta hoon..aur kal batata hoon..

Pls overlook the typos...dint ome out as well as I had imagined...

Feedback awaited

Edited by nancyrio90 - 9 years ago