Mere Pyaar Ki Umar Ho...(Part 1/pg2)FF - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thank you so much...hey guys here is the family tresses of the main protagonists so enjoy it and I'll post the first part later on...😳

Family Tresses of Virani Family, Basu Family and Kapoor Family

Virani Family

Mihir and Tulsi Virani

1. Karan Virani

2. Shobha Virani

3. Sahil Virani

Karan and Tanya Virani

1. Bhoomi Virani

2. Eklavya Virani

3. Manthan Virani

Shobha and Vishal Mehra

1. Pushkar Mehra

2. Pari Mehra

Sahil and Ganga Virani

1. Nakul Virani

2. Archita Virani

3. Lakshya Virani (Narrator of the story and Sneha's lover)

Basu Family

Anurag and Prerna Basu

1. Sneha Basu

2. Prem Basu

Sneha and Omi Garewal

1. Prerna Garewal (Named after her Nani)

Prem and Mukti Basu

1. Gauri Basu (Rishi's lover; Main Protagonist number one female)

2. Sneha Basu (Named after her Bau; Main Protagonist number two female and Lakshya's lover)

Kapoor Family

Mahen and Nikhila Kapoor

1. Samar Kapoor (Twin brother of Shiv)

2. Shiv Kapoor (Twin brother of Samar; Main protagonist number one male)

3. Anjali Kapoor (Main protagonist number three female)

4. Rishi Kapoor (Gauri's lover and main protagonist number two male)

Kavya and Anjali Nanda

1. Baby Ved Nanda

Enjoy the family tree with a-little bit about the characters and if there is more question please don't hesitate..

Anjali Thapar

Edited by AnjaliThapar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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anjali

it sounds great

ctn it soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Before I post the first part...I would like to thank Mimi_Rani Sis 👏....for helping me write this part...without her I wouldn't have been able to write this part because I never done anythng like this...so Mimi_Rani was nice enough to write the first part so please don't thank me, but thank her... 👏

Part One:

I looked up into the dark sky that symbolizes the darkness in my life. I hear a voice whisper, "Sneha!" My heart skips a beat as I recognize his voice; I turn around slowly and look into his gorgeous brown eyes only to find myself being lost in them. "Lakshya, tum ya…yahaan?" He stood still, his eyes conveying a message to me, only to finally speak which felt like a century later, "Sneha, ghar wapaas aa jao, please, I need you, main tumhare bina nahin reh sakta, Sneha ke bina Lakshya adhoora hai jaise Shiv Gauri ke bina adhoora hai….main subha oote tha hoon aur sirf tumhare hi khayaal aate hai aur raat ko yeh umeed se sotha hoon ke main subha hote hi main pehle tumhe hi dekhoonga….kaise jee paonga aur main tumhare bina…please wapas aa jao…is it possible for my heart to beat without breathing…no toh please mujhe maaf kar do aur please ghar wapaas aa jao….!" he pleaded with tears coming down his eyes. I go towards him, time stood still until I reached out to him AND HE WAS GONE!! I wander here and there wondering what had just happened, he was just here then how come….could I possibly have been dreaming…no it just felt so real…how could it be????

******

"Main aa raha hoon Sneha, sirf dus minute ke dhoori hai….tumhe dekh ti hi main teek ho jaonga, aur phirse jeene lagoon ga….!" Lakshya drove down an isolated and empty street. Strange, just half an hour ago this road was packed with people, similarly he thought…it was so much like his life. 'SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEECH!' Lakshya stopped the car with all his might, out of nowhere an old man came in front of his car. He got out of his car and headed towards the man, helping him up. In a matter of seconds, the old man grabbed his arm, spun him around and pulled a knife to his neck. "get in the damn car now, do as I say or I will kill you!" out of nowhere five other men came up to Lakshya and stood staring at him. Panic took over Lakshya, he had just called the love of his life that he would be home…..and now it would not be possible…was he going to die without seeing the love of his life one last time???? Was this his punishment for not listening or caring???

The car drove off with such fury, leaving marks on the road. It soon halted nearby a bridge; isolated out of nowhere…it had felt like they had driven for an hour or two. Finally, Lakshya thought, I can escape, but what did he know? The old man got out of the car and stood by the bridge and his fellow companions…he put a hand on the side of his neck and pulled the face mask off, he was NO OLD GUY HE WAS a YOUNG MAN IN HIS LATE 20s. Lakshya turned around hoping to find an exit but only finding more and more people coming. He ran towards the old man and hit him only to find himself being beaten black and blue. Lakshya was thrown to the ground, being kicked by the 6 people around him. Lakshya grabbed someone's leg and helped himself up, he had to win. "I have to win, SNEHA kiliye!" He fought back with all his might, hitting one person in the face while the other in the stomach. "ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" Lakshya screamed as knife sliced through his shirt. He looked down towards his stomach to find it covered with blood. The impostor old man pulled the knife back and in again, tripling the pain running through Lakshya.

The night went black for Lakshya, what seemed like a light now turned his life upside down in a matter of moments. The only answer was……..

*******

"chalo, jaldi karo isihe paani mein pekhe do…hurry up we don't have time!" the impostor old man said. The other five men looked at him and immediately followed his orders, knowing of his past records. They dragged Lakshya towards the edge of the bridge, picked him up and threw him into the water…….leaving behind stashes of blood here and there……

*****

I (Sneha) paced the room back and forth, how come Lakshya was not here yet? Where is he? Who teek to hai naa? Just then her phone rang, hoping that it would be Lakshya she picked up and answered, "hello Lakshya kahaa ho tum?" "Im sorry mam…lekin *********** (muted). The phone slipped through my hands, tears ran down my eyes as the words sank into my mind. "NAHINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN LAKSHYAAA!"

TO BE CONTINUED…..

I hoped you guys enjoyed this part and once please don't thank me, but thank Mimi_rani for writing this part...👏

Anjali Thapar

Edited by AnjaliThapar - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great start!! continue soon 😳

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