'Sangini'(ff-JiyaJale)full story updated

Introduction:

Hi friends , let me introduce my story "SANGINI" to u. My story inspired from Jiyajale will be a short story though for me its my longest story written online. The story will not be very romantic.... it has small bits of romance but very little..as for me the base of Chandan's work is far more relevant to write

this story.

There rnt many charcters or many twist as i like keeping things simple in this.. the story is about two individuals start to beocme one ...My style of writign here is different with less of conversation as that takes the length and the track and i promise i wil end the story and not stretch it..😆 the pattern of story few lines in btw like a small poem ..hope u like reading those as well..

I attempted this small bit please excuse if there are mistakes...

The first part will be posted soon....😃

Special thanks to my dear friends, Bini , Sara, & Reena..

keep smiling friends and enjoy...😃

Sangini Part I

Sunaina belongs to a middle class family. She respects and obeys each n every decision taken by her family. Her father Krishnaji is principal of JJ College, Sunaina's mother Chandrika is a housewife who was a good Bharatnatyam dancer and after marriage she had to quit all that. She trained her daughter in the various classical forms of dancing while Sunaina specialized herself in Kathak and won numerous awards. Dance was Sunaina's life she would forget everything while dancing.

Dance heals me and is my source of inspiration,

As it is Dance which helps my soul's purification,

I want to dance into the clouds of the sky's open sheet,

And pluck all the stars and put them on God's feet.

Once as she entered a classical dance show for charity, she saw a guy who was crowded with many people asking him and sharing their grievances. She felt quite strange as he was nor the organizer nor a celebrity nor connected to any political party and was quite young. She just enquired about who he was and got to know his name is 'Chandan' who was a lawyer by profession. As the dance show was over and in hurry she was leaving to reach home she tripped due to her ghagra stuck in the nail of the stair and she fell in the lap of a person sitting on the seat, she opened her eyes to see the person who's lap she fell was none other than Chandan. She was embarrassed and immediately apologized while her eyes went shy. Chandan just said 'It's Ok'. Sunaina left the hall and so did Chandan.

When I tripped I felt may be I will fall down,

I fell into a stranger lap, who was all unknown,

We saw into each others eyes and our heart melt,

We quite well know each other why did it felt.

Chandan was a lawyer by profession and used his skill/profession for social welfare. To the needy people he would give legal advice. Women organization always asked him to come and give them legal advice to the women suffering from injustice incases of dowry harassment or in cases of divorce. Chandan had decided he would spend all his life in the welfare of people in need. All these social relevance things seemed utter waste of energy to his dad who was a very rich business man. His father Virendra lived with his second wife and son. His wife who was Chandan's step mom always wanted Chandan to be happy and never interfered in his matter; she was never able to get close to him at all. Chandan had only his grandmother to protect him, care for him and to encourage him.

I want to help all the people, who need me,

I want to contribute in noble cause where I can be,

If all educated youngster try and stand for the truth,

The fruits will be future without any crooks.

After few days, A proposal for marriage came for Sunaina , Sunaina was doing her Last year and her mother wanted her to get married. Sunaina's father did want her to study further but Sunaina was just interested to pursue her dance career rather than anything else. The whole family came and had snacks Sunaina saw the boy Bhanu he was very fair, well built and good looking but he was all of self praise. He praised himself to no lengths and when Sunaina asked about his views on dance he said he has no problem if she wants o learn it at home even after marriage but he kept changing the topic from dance to his business turnover. Sunaina was not excited about this proposal. She felt the guy Bhanu had tried it hard to project himself very big and in the course tried to show her inferior to them. This was Sunaina's feelings but her family felt he was the right guy for her. She did tell them about him but her family insisted that his parents are very good and Bhanu must have said this as after a struggle with his hard work came from a lower middle class background to this height. She was confused but in the end as she loved her family the most, she said whatever they decide she will go by that. Sunaina's family decided to let Sunaina meet him one more time. Next weekend Sunaina was to meet Bhanu and take her final decision.

Marriage is on the mind of the family,

Should I say yes to marry him finally?

He goes on about himself, my views didn't mattered,

Somehow I find him insensitive and self centered.

Sunaina had to meet him at a restaurant for lunch but Bhanu called her up that he is busy and it would be better if she came to his office. Sunaina went to his office. As she went inside the cabin she saw him sitting in the chair and smiling. He told her to sit and take the seat. Sunian felt a bit odd, he dint even stood up just rolled the chair with a might of a king. Sunaina sat and soon Bhanu started talking about his likes dislikes and films he watched. Later a person came and gave an envelope to Bhanu. Bhanu read the letter and soon in anguish he bangs the letter on the table and gave verbal abuses. After realizing Sunaina in front he just calmed, he said that in business it happens there r so many issue which make BP rise and smiled. For Sunaina hearing such abuses was disturbing. She just kept silent. Soon Sunaina's father called her up and asked what's happening is she feeling positive. She just said, don't know I will come n tell. Bhanu started about his views on marriage and Sunaina just asked him that doesn't he want to know abt her thoughts? He said he needs only two things from his wife; she should be beautiful good looking and well behaved in public. Sunaina felt strange. Bhanu called his parents saying to decide for the date of marriage. Sunaina was a bit more tensed. She wanted to ask him up soon peon served Tea coffee, Suniana told she doesn't drink tea or coffee and Bhanu laughed loudly and said , "Change ur habit u have to give me company in the morning to have coffee after marriage" Sunaina after leaving from there felt the last line of his was not right. He wanted her to change even before anything is fixed. At home as she reached all confused and stressed the marriage was fixed, spending so much time was the only thing which made her parents, to feel she liked him that's why gave him so much time. Sunaina was caught in a fix. Her confused state was taken as Yes and engagement date was fixed.

What shall I do when none want to hear my side?
Parents say they know the best and know what is right,

In front of them he looked good with his thought,
I feel they didn't felt the intuition I got.

Sunaina told her good friend Avani about the marriage which is fixed. Her friend told her to go against her parents wish if she feels the guy is not good for her. Sunaina felt it very difficult to break her parents trust and their judgment. After her brother died two years back in hiking they have been very tense. She couldn't ever go against them.

hey,.........who are the actors of the ff......as in rajeev? iqbal? amna? shveta?....who?? 😛

Originally posted by: togepe30

hey,.........who are the actors of the ff......as in rajeev? iqbal? amna? shveta?....who?? 😛

😃no Rajeev here i would like that way too but this story is inspired by the serial Jiyajale and the two new comers of the serial are the ones who fit in this story the same....

(Part II)

Sunaina was shopping along with Avani she saw Chandan there. She was surprised to see him after a long time. She saw him buying some soft toys. Chandan saw her looking at him. As Sunaina was leaving the mall she saw Chandan giving away all the soft toys to the kids of the nearby slum. She was so touched by watching the children smiling and getting so excited. Sunaina was smiling fondly at the way a little girl had cuddled the soft teddy and her eyes said she had the world's best gift in her hands. Avani called Chandan bhaiyaa and Sunaina was surprised. She asked how she knew him and she told he is her fiance Atish's best friend. She introduced Sunaina to Chandan and after the little intro they left from there. Avani told Sunaina about Chandan and his work for the social welfare. Sunaina was more than happy to have met a person like him.

U look like a saint who wants to bring social reforms,

U are an intellectual trying the removal of unjust norms,

U know growth needs working ,living with dignity,

U know we as a society needs to seriously bring equality,

U r someone who not only talks abut the needs of the poor

But ur deeds makes the needy get justice for sure.

The engagement date was two days away. Sunaina was happy to see her parents who were heartbroken after their son died, it was after two years that they had smiled like this. There was a small charity program for blind children's fund and Sunaina had to dance there which was fixed long back. Sunaina was getting ready for it that Bhanu called and told her not to go for that program. He ordered her to give money instead but not participate dancing. She told him she loves dance and he told dance at home for ur enjoyment, dancing on stage as our house bride would not be tolerated. Suddenly her life had come to a standstill; she told her parents. Sunaina's dad understood her sadness but her mom told even she had sacrificed her love for dance as her inlaw never agreed. Sunaina felt now even her turn had come to sacrifice but soon her mother told she will not let her daughter live with that unfulfilled dream she has the talent and classical dance is part of the culture . Nothing to be ashamed of! Her parents stood beside her. They had a word with Bhanu and his family and soon nothing came through and the rishta was broken. They realized the boy was tricky and manipulative with issues.

It's a relief to break this relationship,

If we would be together I would have gone through all the hardships,

You r happy in ur world and not a leaf to change,

but when it comes to me u want everything not to be the same.

Sunaina was going for the dance charity show for Blind children's fund. The dance program was over and as Sunaina was leaving the show she heard someone saying Chandan she looked and Chandan was standing with a paper in his hand. Sunaina was smiling and was very happy to see him. She went close to him but realized she has nothing to ask him and soon just went without saying anything; Chandan saw her and said, "Sunaina, I missed ur dance performance by the way How r u?" Sunaina was very happy that he remembered her name, she said 'I am fine. How r u? " Chandan said, "I am Fine as well. Ok I need to leave now came here to meet someone to take the papers." Chandan and Sunaina both left in opposite direction. Sunaina sitting in an auto felt like looking at him and just peeped outside while he was on his bike. She saw few men on bikes had pushed Chandan down and had started hitting him. Sunaina rushed the auto towards him and called the people for help. She looked at the goons screaming Police,Police and showed her angry self towards them, trying to get some help. The goons ran as their work was already done. Chandan was lying in a pool of blood. She immediately told the people to call the ambulance she kept talking with Chandan in the mean time assuring him that he will be fine soon not to worry.

For someone who always brought justice along,

Supported the right and fought against the wrong,

For someone who is ready to give his life for reform,

God will bless and not let anybody do any harm.

When Chandan was admitted in the hospital Sunaina did all the formalities on paper and also gave her statement to the police regarding who were the people who assaulted Chandan, she even gave the description of the people who hit him. Sunaina called up Avani and Atish to rush to the hospital and soon Chandan's Granny came there. She was very worried and Sunaina took care of her telling her that for somebody who always helped others God will save him for sure. Granny got immense emotional support from Sunaina. Atish brought the needed medicines and arranged for blood. Chandan's parents came; his father kept cursing him for getting into others problems and affecting himself and the family. Sunaina understood the whole situation Chandan must have been in. Sunaina later called up her parents and informed them that a friend is in hospital so she will be late to come home. Chandan's condition was improving. Dadi had held Sunaina hands and was praying all time. As soon as it was known Chandan's condition is stable everyone took a sigh of relief. Sunaina took a glimpse of him Atish, Dadi and his step mom went inside the room. Sunaina was already very late she took Dadi's leave and left. Chandan gainded consciousness and wanted to know where Sunaina was, he wanted to thank her. He smiled recollecting how Sunaina had held him close to her and kept talking to him not to worry he will be alright. She wasn't afraid while goons were there and had bravely rushed and screamed for help. Chandan told Avani to thank Sunaina she has indeed saved his life.

When we first met u seemed delicate as our eyes met,

In those eyes I saw innocence intact,

U brought me here and helped my family too,

U stood strong and brought my life get back through.

(Part III)

As Chandan started to recover Sunaina use to call him once or twice to talk and ask him how is he feeling? With police investigation she would also tell him that the gang of people who assaulted him r behind bars but the main person who instructed them isn't yet known. Chandan would feel strange how much determined & fearless she is. Sunaina's involvement in the whole issue made her Dad be proud of her but her mother was worried that she may land herself in trouble.

Chandan was back home & met Sunaina and told her that as he is fighting a case against a Builder who is adamant on taking away the property owned by few elder people who run a small Charitable trust where they provide business space for widows, orphan children, handicapped and needy people to start business and run a living and stop begging. The building is owned by the elderly whose children haven't bothered to see what's up with them for years. The builder is taking away basic amenities. Torturing them to shut down the trust which provides business and counseling to around 30 families. The needy earn their living working and making items there and few others by selling those in the markets. Many orphan children's education is paid by the sale. If this builder takes away the land he is going to make it into a commercial place with a mall, theater and entertainment hall. The builder had sent the goons as I have issued them a notice that any harm to the Trust members the builder will be held responsible. I had legally supported the Trust. Sunaina eyes were bright with the thought that the trust is safe. Sunaina told him that whatever U have done is providing justice to the people who have spent all their money , time and self into some noble cause and a trust who holds the need of so many families cant be played liked this for someone selfish profit. She asked him if she could see the Trust. Chandan was more than happy to take her there. The children there playing and the widow mother making decorative pots, boxes , coloring them, few men was making basket, doormats, hanging items later she realized they were handicapped. The elderly people provided them the idea and the concept where & what to make and how with their skill try to earn their living without begging.

Trust has brought sunshine which made needy people feel complete,

They don't get depress or feel helpless but stand on their feet,

With trust support begging, asking for pity they have left behind,

Look forward to Swayamkrushi as their strength in their mind.

Sunaina and Chandan met occasionally whenever Sunaina went to the Trust or met Avani. Both had a friendship growing. Sunaina told Chandan she would be more than happy to help him if he needs her help any day. At home, Sunaina use to discuss about Chandan. Once when Sunaina was going in her room she heard her mother talking with her father. They were discussing Sunaina's exams r over and results just left. It would be better to marry her off. Her mother was very eager to get her married. She told that recently people are making remarks about Sunaina and Chandan and she will not like anything wrong talked about her. Sunaina was shocked to hear this but she knew her Bua who recently had come to their house must have instigated her mother about this. Chandrika told they can't shut people's mouth. Sunaina's father asked if that's the way people are talking what's wrong with thinking about Chandan's proposal for Sunaina. He is educated and works as a lawyer. He later told that Chandan's Dadi had asked him recently that when they will think of Sunainas marriage she will be more than happy if Sunaina comes into their house as Chandan's wife. Both Sunaina and Chandan are friends so they know each other well. Chandrika thought for a while and said ya, Chandan too is a nice boy. She was a bit hesitant as Chandan was from a very rich family. Chandrika was happy that the proposal came from Dadi and she was relieved that they may not think about the difference in their status. She told she will ask Sunaina what she thinks and later they can talk with Chandan's family. Sunaina had never looked at Chandan as her life partner but now she smiled thinking about the prospect of becoming close to such a good nice hearted person. She was excited and couldn't sleep all night.

My life had dance to inspire me and heal me always,

Meeting you, ur life has inspired me to fight odds come what may,

I may not be in love with u but I respect u and ur love for others,

Can destiny make me part of ur life and get me close to u forever.

Early morning Sunaina's mother asked her whether they can talk to Chandan's family, whether she likes him or not? Sunaina was very shy and her mother understood that she is happy with the proposal. She said as they wish, Chandan is a very nice person. Sunaina's father spoke with Dadi, and soon Virendra also called up to say they are happy to have Sunaina as their daughter in law. Chandan will surely be also happy. Virendra said yes to the proposal just because this would enable Chandan to settle down and mind his own affairs and divert his attention from the social causes. Everyone was very happy with the marriage fixed. Dadi spoke with Chandan and told she is glad she found the right match for him. Chandan was taken aback and told he isn't ready to get married. He said he has only focused all his energy in bringing justice to the needy. Dadi told him that it's none other than Sunaina who will come into his life and she will support him and his work. Chandan didn't agree. He felt any woman coming into his life will need attention, love, care, dreams and a lot of expectations. He can't fulfill all the duty of a husband has for him he cared more for the work he is doing alone and so doesn't fear the outcome. Marriage will pressurize him, make him weak. Dadi was not able to convince him and understood him and his view point as well. She was though very upset how she will say no to Sunaina's family.

Dadi what to do I cant think about marriage at all,

I want to bring justice to people and be there at anytime they call,

I am in love with my goal to make the system strong and just,

I cant bind myself now, to be focused is what I feel is a must.

When Chandan's family said No to Sunaina's family they were all shattered. Sunaina's Bua now told them with Sunaina's marriage every time breaking up their reputation and their family's prestige is tarnished. Now who will marry Suniana? All the people in their Biradri are talking ill about Sunaina. She started making up her own stories that people r saying that Sunaina is roaming with the guys, meeting them and getting engaged and thereafter breaking up. Many even said that Sunaina is trying hard to get into richer household and that's why dumping these as she gets hooked with someone richer, that's why she rejected Bhanu's proposal. Sunainas mother's health use to be bad after her son died, hearing these words again her health started getting worse and she was soon hospitalized. Sunaina had immense guilt and was under lot of stress. Her family knew it wasn't Sunaina fault.

Chandan came to know about Sunaina's mother's condition through Atish. He went to the hospital to meet them. Sunaina who was sitting outside the room told him not to get into this she doesn't need any pity. Chandan said that he just as a friend is very concern somewhere his decision has been the reason for her mother's condition. Sunaina told him he need not feel guilty and told whatever happened was just her fate. Her marriage was fixed before and later her family and she had refused and now again a marriage got fixed and it's broken its not his fault but destiny. She told him she isn't in a frame of mind to talk to him more on this. Even her mom is slowly recuperating with the turn of events. Chandan left the hospital with a heavy heart. He knew there was not much he could do. Sunaina in her heart held the guilt of imagining Chandan as her would be so soon. The night in which she had dreamt to be with him, she felt her heart broken but she also had to take the stigma given to her by her Bua who had this good opportunity to say how all their decision r wrong and they should listen to her.

I know whatever happened I didn't had any control,

But what happened has indeed hurt my family and my soul,

My broken heart has traces of dreams lost somewhere,

Dreams of my happy family that's all I want and care.

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Introduction:

Hi friends , let me introduce my story "SANGINI" to u. My story inspired from Jiyajale will be a short story though for me its my longest story written online. The story will not be very romantic.... it has small bits of romance but very little..as for me the base of Chandan's work is far more relevant to write this story.

There rnt many charcters or many twist as i like keeping things simple in this.. the story is about two individuals start to beocme one ...My style of writign here is different with less of conversation as that takes the length and the track and i promise i wil end the story and not stretch it..😆 the pattern of story few lines in btw like a small poem ..hope u like reading those as well..

I attempted this small bit please excuse if there are mistakes...

The first part will be posted soon....😃

Special thanks to my dear friends, Bini , Sara, & Reena..

keep smiling friends and enjoy...😃

wowww bhoomi gr88 start dear... thanks dear for thanking me ..i cant believe it... 😳 u r giving me credit for nothing..😳

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

Sangini   ; ; ; (PartI)

Bhoomiii lovellly really beautifull.. and poetry in btwn just gr888 .. i hope sunaina can gather courage to tell no for the marriage..please dont make that coz of her mother or anyone else in family .. she marries that jerk and take all stupidity.. i cant digest it..keep it just simple..no complicatons..😃

Reena

Originally posted by: gaurifan

wowww bhoomi gr88 start dear... thanks dear for thanking me ..i cant believe it... 😳 u r giving me credit for nothing..😳

Oyee Reena...yunhi credit nahi diya..its realy helped. I will tell u in detail whateevr we have discussd about JJ and its happened between u and me..warna baakiyon se kisse maine JJ discuss hi nahi kiya hai many havnt yet started watching....so after our nic discussion i fel tlike writing the something when i started i thought to stress Chandan charcter as many on telly dont give any bhau to the male actor role...here he is so strong..and so i thought to write..

So its ur discussion with me on JJ and ur updates on JJ which brought that idea to write something on it...😃🤗

Originally posted by: gaurifan

Bhoomiii lovellly really beautifull.. and poetry in btwn just gr888 .. i hope sunaina can gather courage to tell no for the marriage..please dont make that coz of her mother or anyone else in family .. she marries that jerk and take all stupidity.. i cant digest it..keep it just simple..no complicatons..😃

Reena

Heeeehehehe Reena re...chalo now i feel better after what I have mentioned in my next parts... which i have already posted..

U liked that poetry (can we call that poetry 😆) chalo u say its poetry to poettry hi sahi ..it was ok na...hehe yeh Bhoomi style hai u see..😆 My friends here Bini n Sara have told me they like when i write such lines in my stories thats why have put it in those...