'Sangini'(ff-JiyaJale)full story updated - Page 3

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Bhoomi dear..nothing u write could ever be termed as boring...as usual enjoyed reading the concluding parts of u're fan-fic...liked both the lead characters Chandan n Sunaina..n the way u've potrayed their relationship...

As usual well written..looking frwd to reading some more stuff frm u're end...

N thanx for posting this today..

Hi Bini dear,... hehe mera likah hua borign nahi hota....but this was a bit different insome sense from what i write usually i mean less of roamnce and more of teh way I wanted to term teh title inthe end...dont knwo whether it clicked to u...but i wanted to write this one to bring the essense of the title in the end.... u liked both the charcters...oh ho..but in the serial ekdam tiwst n turns ekdam dhasuuu u see, bahut sare asuu aur bahut sare complications...now in future i will surely end writign soemthig with more confusion and little humour, this was a way bit serious for me....😆thats why i termed it as boring..magar kuch kuch changes laana chahiye na...

Bini, chalo dear..u take care of urself..and luv u ..keep smiling...😃 ekdam battissi ke sath😳😃😆..

beautiful story bhoomi...it kept be engrossed thruout. Btw i liked the title too: Sangini.

Originally posted by: kshreya2002

beautiful story bhoomi...it kept be engrossed thruout. Btw i liked the title too: Sangini.

Hi,

Am so glad to know that u liked it....dont know about whetehr it was ok enough to get u involved i hope it didnt made u to fall asleep 😆 btu ur encouraging words surely help me to do attempt to write such stories in future...

Yes the title was the most motivatign factor to think about writing the story ..I always felt all may just read the title and feels its for heorine but the sangini in the end comes in a different light...and thats what made to start the story and end it at that note...

thanks Moni for ur comments..😃

Originally posted by: bhoomikauttam

(PART IV)

Bhanu: Woh to tum bhi samjh jaogey, Main kya cheej hun!

Chandan : Aur main to tumhe Insaan samjh bheta tum cheej ho?

bahu ka darja nahi desakta.

Chandan: Accha to woh tumhi ho jiskey shaddi ke rishtey ko Sunaina aur uske gharwalon ne Inkaar kiya. Bahut bura hua tumhare sath, Tum jaise log Nritya ki pavitrata ko nahi jante, shankar ji ka jab tandav hoga tab naa jane tum kaise sambhlogey. Tandav jo court mey hoga. Chalta hun, court mey miltey hain.

Is marriage everything to live in this society?

woww Bhoomi i love your dialogues esp spoken by Chandan telling Bhanu importance of dance...

and the question you raised in last is very much to ponder about for everone. why we think that a girl's last aim should be marriage only. 😕 vry goood part again...

Originally posted by: gaurifan

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woww Bhoomi i love your dialogues esp spoken by Chandan telling Bhanu importance of dance...

and the question you raised in last is very much to ponder about for everone. why we think that a girl's last aim should be marriage only. 😕 vry goood part again...

Aww am so glad Reena that u liked readign this part...and ya there r very few conversation in this story and i had this in mind so kept that little conversation in it...am happy to know u liked tehw ay Chandan spoke..as u see i felt chandan of jiyajale can say these words instead of hittign him...he should speak damdaar....

About the marraieg thats my fav lines in it...and i and my friends bini here she too loved that ..i en everyone just think girsl do evrythign to get amrried..study to get a better husband...work to get a husband of higher post...coem on...why coutn marrige as the end of all for women..this mentality is so stupid..we can have many otehr goals in life btu noen want to lok at it.. even the serials..:( but glad u liked that though tof mine in it..😃

Originally posted by: sanightingale

helllooos Dii....
hows u??? Gr888 story..... 👏 👏 liked the lines too.... 👍🏼
thnx 4 writing and posting them here.... 😊 😊
Keep writing...luv to read ur stories.... 😃
m going to read Dil ki Baatein now... 😊 😊
Take care...Allah hafiz..
Luv ya, Nida... 🤗

Hi Nida sweety,

Am doign fine..hope the same with u dear...u liked this story its my first on this IF fanfic section.... was a bit in two minds kaise post karu..n all...ehhehe am glad u read thi.. i do enjoyed writign these lines here... happy to know u liked readign them... luv u for encouragign me tiem n again.. luv u..

Allah hafiz..

Bhoomi

hiiiiiii bhoomikauttam i just read this fan fic of urs i love ur writing a lot
plzzzz plzzzzz plzzzz do write a fan fic on Iqbal khan
😃 😃 😃

Originally posted by: seasplash

hiiiiiii bhoomikauttam i just read this fan fic of urs i love ur writing a lot
plzzzz plzzzzz plzzzz do write a fan fic on Iqbal khan
😃 😃 😃

Hiii Seasplash... ur apprecaition is really helpful and am thankfully for it.. 😊.. hey dotn say Plzz... i will try..wotn promise with the time on hand i have these days.. but I wotn mind Iqbal in my stories.. he has such a great voice and persoanlity.. surely will suti in many roles.. till than do enjoy these whcih i post 😃