'Sangini'(ff-JiyaJale)full story updated - Page 2

Bhooooooooooooomi ..........what can i say? mindblowing start ... i dont know m i being biasd or not but i just loved it .....waiting for the next parts yaar..post jaldi ... as u know i havnt seen jiya jale till now so dont know anything abt the story ...for me sangini is a frsh new story wo bhi ekdam apni Bhoomi style ...those shayries inbtween n all...i just kinda like sunaina's chrcter..donno age jake yeh kay karegi but abtak jitna samajh mey ayi she is quite strong yet she is bit heartbroken n i like her hospital convo with Chandan...

Bhoomi, u just dont need to thank me...it's been always my plsre to read anything u write.. next time thanks bola na toh barabar saza milegi...

Bhooooooooooooomi ..........what can i say? mindblowing start ... i dont know m i being biasd or not but i just loved it .....waiting for the next parts yaar..post jaldi ... as u know i havnt seen jiya jale till now so dont know anything abt the story ...for me sangini is a frsh new story wo bhi ekdam apni Bhoomi style ...those shayries inbtween n all...i just kinda like sunaina's chrcter..donno age jake yeh kay karegi but abtak jitna samajh mey ayi she is quite strong yet she is bit heartbroken n i like her hospital convo with Chandan...

Bhoomi, u just dont need to thank me...it's been always my plsre to read anything u write.. next time thanks bola na toh barabar saza milegi...

Wow !!..gr8 bhoomi ...i've never seen this show..so for me its like reading one of u're short stories..which is as usual well written n those lines u pen in btw are awesome.. 👏 am truly looking frwd to reading the next parts...

N thanx kyu bhai ??...it's a treat to read the stuff u write..be it the lovely poems...short stories n of course all those hilarious write ups... 😊

Originally posted by: nisisanjh

Bhooooooooooooomi ..........what can i say? mindblowing start ... i dont know m i being biasd or not but i just loved it .....waiting for the next parts yaar..post jaldi ... as u know i havnt seen jiya jale till now so dont know anything abt the story ...for me sangini is a frsh new story wo bhi ekdam apni Bhoomi style ...those shayries inbtween n all...i just kinda like sunaina's chrcter..donno age jake yeh kay karegi but abtak jitna samajh mey ayi she is quite strong yet she is bit heartbroken n i like her hospital convo with Chandan...

Bhoomi, u just dont need to thank me...it's been always my plsre to read anything u write.. next time thanks bola na toh barabar saza milegi...

Hi Dear,

Aww u liked these parts and u r liking Sunaina more than Chandan..haiii haiii....let me see agey ke parts mey u like whom?? 😆 I know u always say my story hero r so nice yeh aam zindagi mey nahi hote hain...😳...hehe U havnt seen Jiya jale na....its ok...sirf thoda bahut similar hai in Jiya jale Chandan is an architect who is plannign a project to help the people......

I have to thank u when i start kyunki tabhi agey ke parts post kar payee kyunki i remembered u all while posting and to tell that had written...meri sazaa kamm karo na...ek heart ballon kam dedo ❤️chalega..magar dena jaroor ..😆

will be posting hte next part soon...

Originally posted by: binidoshi

Wow !!..gr8 bhoomi ...i've never seen this show..so for me its like reading one of u're short stories..which is as usual well written n those lines u pen in btw are awesome.. 👏 am truly looking frwd to reading the next parts...

N thanx kyu bhai ??...it's a treat to read the stuff u write..be it the lovely poems...short stories n of course all those hilarious write ups... 😊

Hi Bini,

So read it na....theek thaak tha...u say its nice but let me see i read it again and got bored😆phir sochti hun tum sabka maine kya haal kiya hoga..😉 and those line woh sab u guys make me write it.....waise will be posting the next part soon...my net is giving a problem and post karna mey thoda problem hota hai..even reply karne mey till i copu net chala jata hai...

Litte busy with things in hadn as well but soon will post th efull sotry is readyu with me...

luv u for all those enocuraging words...😃

(PART IV)

Sunaina was broken but kept a strong face in front and helped her mom n sister to cope with the pressure. Sunaina's father knew she needs time to get out of this. He brought tickets for everyone to watch a dance concert by Pandit Birju maharaj and his disciples. Sunaina though not excited said yes to change the atmosphere she is in. At the concert Birju Maharaj met her gave her blessings and told her to join their dance troupe which has a show after two weeks. Sunaina was not saying Yes but her parents told she should go, this would be her dream come true to be along the stage with Guruji. Sunaina started practicing for the show and while she traveled for the show she met Chandan. Chandan was very excited to see her back to her normal self. This time Sunaina spoke properly with him asking him about the Trust people, inquiring about his new cases and court hearings. He was going to the court for his hearing which was near the place where Sunaina practiced with Gurujis troop. Guruji was more than happy to see her training with all her heart. At the show she invited Chandan and Dadi too, though Suniana's mom was not convinced with her decision her father supported her saying if we rejected a proposal what's wrong if someone rejects us. The show turned out fantastic and all were full of praises for Sunaina. Chandan didn't attend the show. He met her later on the way and told her he was busy with some meeting. Sunaina said she doesn't have a problem that he missed; she can very well understand how important it is to be there who need him the most. Chandan was happy to see her very cool about it. Chandan in his heart felt Sunaina was a very special friend. At his office there were many female advocate, colleagues, friends but the kind of feeling he had talking with her was special and different from the other girls. He knew he didn't had the time to ponder whether this was love but he wished he keeps his mind busy with his focus on his work than any thing which makes him weak.

I know whenever I meet u I feel very happy & nice,

When I look into ur eyes it feels like the beauty of sunrise,

When u smile and encourage my work I feel its surely helping,

I don't want to feel all this but Why is this happening?

When Sunaina was talking with Chandan, Bhanu saw her and was very furious. Chandan was walking towards the high court and he met Bhanu on the way. Bhanu said,

Bhanu: Kya baat hai Vakeel sahib.

Chandan: Baat to abhi shuri nahi ki hai, court mey jaunga to baat tum tak pahunch hi jayegi.

Bhanu: Woh to tum bhi samjh jaogey, Main kya cheej hun!

Chandan : Aur main to tumhe Insaan samjh bheta tum cheej ho?

Bhanu getting angry: Woh Naachnewali se kya baatein ho rahi thi?

Chandan: Tum kiski baat kar rahe ho?

Bhanu: Wahi S*** nachnewali Sunaina aur kaun?

Chandan: Apni zabaan sambhal ke Bhanu...(Was agitated but controlled his anger) Waise tum Sunaina ko kaise jante ho?

Bhanu: Woh Mujhse shaddi karne ke sapne bunn rahi thi, magar humara gharana nachnewaliyon ko gharmey bahu ka darja nahi desakta.

Chandan: Accha to woh tumhi ho jiskey shaddi ke rishtey ko Sunaina aur uske gharwalon ne Inkaar kiya. Bahut bura hua tumhare sath, Tum jaise log Nritya ki pavitrata ko nahi jante, shankar ji ka jab tandav hoga tab naa jane tum kaise sambhlogey. Tandav jo court mey hoga. Chalta hun, court mey miltey hain.

Chandan was furious with what Bhanu had said but was controlling his anger and was more determined to fight it out in the court hearing. And he was at his very best in the court. Counter questions, allegations Bhanu was caught in a mess in court. He was stumbling to answer, and the date of next hearing was given and it looked like in the next hearing Bhanu would surely get into serious trouble.

When u spoke ill about her I wanted to give it back,

My blood boiled, wanted to hit u and break ur back,

Still I controlled my anger and made u pay,

Though not physically but in my own way.

Chandan called up Sunaina and told her that it was indeed a very good decision taken by her n her family no to get married to Bhanu. He told her Bhanu is a big shot builder and has many businesses which r all run with black money. In his business even his father had many times invested so he knows the in and out of that. He also said Bhanu is the same builder who was trying to get that charitable trust land. Sunaina was shocked and relieved that their family rejected that proposal. He told Sunaina Bhanu did ask about her and that Chandan gave him back the proper answer required as well as Bhanu faced defeat in the court. When Sunaina told this to her family they were happy that they didn't go with that proposal.

Look my Intuition about him was correct,

His struggle story was nothing but an act,

He just had built money through the wrong way,

Still wants to cheat people and take their shelter away.

Sunainas Bua was at their home with a new proposal. She and her family decided to go through this very slowly without any hurry this time. Bua was furious that she would never let any thing wrong happen. She had brought a proposal that was an NRI and wanted a traditional girl. Still Sunaina's father told her to give everyone some time. She in anger went back telling if this proposal they don't accept soon the boy may get engaged somewhere else and Sunaina will remain single all her life in the house and bring shame. Sunaina's mother started getting tensed with her words. She also told with Suniana sitting at home her younger sister will also have to bear the consequences of her sister's selfishness. Sunaina felt very bad thinking because of her the whole family is tensed and even her sister's future is questioned. She called up Avani, Avani made her calm and to stop crying.

Is marriage everything to live in this society?

If not married why should I face their pity?

I am single yet I don't feel I am weaker in anyway,

I just feel terrible to see family getting upset with what others say.

(Part V)

As Sunaina was next day going to her class she met the elderly people who were running that Charitable trust they had come to meet Chandan at the court. Sunaina was very happy to meet them and they requested her to come to the trust they will feel nice so she agreed. As Sunaina next day went to the Trust she saw there was a small birthday celebration of a small girl. All the people were gifting the child something but Sunaina had nothing to give. She went and wished the child and kissed on her forhead she told she indeed has brought her love as gift, the child asked her that can she ask a gift from her which she has? Sunaina was surprised she said Ok. The small girl in her childlike soft cute voice told her she wants to dance with her; she has heard Sunaina dances very nicely. Sunaina was more than pleased to give her this gift. As all the people took their seat Sunaina became yashoda and made the small girl Krishna and sang song and danced on it. The child loved and enjoyed. All were clapping, Sunianas dance finished she was smiling as everyone clapped but as soon she Saw Chandan watching her dance standing in the corner and he with his hands gave her a thumbs up and later without saying told too good. Sunaina blushed and smiled. Chandan went and gave the birthday girl a small game of cartoons and an envelope too. In the enveloped he had opened a small fixed deposit in her name. Sunaina was happy with that gesture she did understand he wanted the present and future of the girl to be secured. The girl had only her ailing grandma and none to look after. Her grandma use to work here in the trust and live here, as their house collapsed with landslide and the girl's parents had died in it. Chandan and Sunaina were leaving and Chandan asked Sunina should he drop her home. Sunaina said no need to worry she will manage herself. Chandan did feel very glad spending some time with her and her dance had actually made him feel proud of her talent. It wasn't a stage performance yet it was one of the best dance he had seen.

Sunaina u have ur inner beauty to let people know,

U care for them and in ur gentle ways that U show,

Ur love is not just in words but ur eyes say it all,

Ur dance is spiritual and reflects love for all.

With every day passing Chandan and Sunaina met more often, Chandan suddenly felt he is getting attached to her, thinking about her a lot. He thought he should not loose focus and made it strict rule for himself that from now on, he will not meet Sunaina. Sunaina whenever called him he didn't took her call. Sunaina thought he may be busy with work. With Avani informing alls well with Chandan. She didn't take it otherwise.

Chandan was feeling uneasy with this as well, he started to recollect Suniana more and even his dreams had Sunaina leaving him and going far away which would disturb him. With each new day as much Chandan tried and forced himself not to think about her, the more he thought about her. When he went to the Women organization to solve their client's legal dispute, he was totally lost in his thoughts of Sunaina. He couldn't give them more legal strengths to be able to get the custody of the child to the woman. Chandan was very disturbed the way he was getting out of his focus. He couldn't blame Sunaina or himself. He went to his friend Atish for help. Atish was busy discussing Avani n his problem that he went away without asking anything. As Chandan was walking he again thought about the first time he had met her and the day she had landed in his lap, he felt why he thinks about her always. He went to his Dadi to get some peace of mind. Dadi told Chandan that away from a person does he feel near to all the people who love him and whom he loves and cares. Chandan was more confused. He knew it wasn't love he wanted to believe this strongly, he felt he cannot fall in love, he doesn't want to. He also started feeling extremely guilty that his work is suffering.

I don't want to believe that I love you,

I don't want to loose my focus that's really true,

I feel nice to be with u, I think a lot about you,

This will take away my focus what should I do can someone say?

As Chandan sat in his office, Sunaina called him up. Chandan was very happy to hear her voice and soon realized his liking for her and tried to get a bit rude. Sunaina sensed him rude to her but just ignored thinking he may be in middle of some meeting. She told him she just read in newspaper about the pending cases in court where even if justice comes it will be too late. She told him that she just got an idea that why not Chandan write a column in newspaper about such one case each day or week and make the people aware and bring back to light the sufferings of the people and this will also throw some light on the legal system which need to get quick into task of bringing justice. Chandan was extremely thrilled with her idea and he felt that it will be a stepping stone in his goal to change the system for better. He thanked her for bringing this idea to him and he will soon try and work on it. After that little talk Chandan was back again into his self of full confidence and determination. He consulted few of the publishing houses and they were more than happy to have a column by him as Chandan with his work had impressed a large section of advocates and politicians. When Chandan's first column was published he called up Sunaina and she was more than happy reading it. Chandan knew Suninan has become very special to him and like he cannot think his life without Dadi the same way he cannot think his life without Sunaina. But his mind had all the confusion about love and marriage.

U make me realize how much my goal means to u,

I feel glad I have someone as wonderful as u,

Don't know how and what relationship is this,

Friendship if I say, very special and dear to me it is.

(Part VI)

Chandan went to the Trust, to talk with the elder members and as he was speaking they asked him about Sunaina. He told she was fine and they asked him, when r they both getting married? Chandan informed them that there is nothing like that, they r just friends. He indeed has once rejected marriage proposal when his Dadi too had thought like that. The people told him why he is afraid of falling in love or marriage? Why he feels that he will loose his focus? They said wife can become ur strength if she is good and u both r compatible.

Chandan: Uncle ji, shaddi kar loon to patni ko waqt dene keliya bhi mere pass samay nahi hai. (a bit tensed)

Uncle: Yeh kehne keliye itni jijak kyun. Samay nahi hoga is ka dukh hai ya iski chinta? Dono hi surat mey patni ke liye chahat to dikhti hai..

Chandan: Kuch nahi. Woh

Aunty: Chandan, beta tum ne jis samay aakar hamey hamari musibaton se nikala uske baad hamare bete se bhi jyada hum tumhare liye duaa aur tumse pyaar karte hain. Hamse kaisi jijak.

Chandan: Aisa kuch nahi hai Aunty, mera kaam mere liye sab kuch hai.

Aunty: Pata nahi Chandan beta tumhare dilo dimaag mey kya chal raha hai. Waise shaddi se juddi ek baat kehti hoon, mere anubhav se. Purush (admi) mey ek aurat jaise ander komalta aur sensitivity hoti hai, jo ussey kabhi kaar kamzor banata hai, bahar se woh kitna bhi strong kyun na ho kai baar ander se wah nazuk aur sensitive ban jata hai. Ussi tarah Aurat mey apne ander ek apaar shakti hoti hai, woh bahar se kitni hi komal, nazuk aur sehmee hue lagey magar kuch kuch shann mey ander ki shakti emotions ko sambhale rakhti hai. Shaddi ek aisa rishta hai jahan Do Insaan ek dusre se Chudd kar uss ko balance karte hain, taaki zindagi mey kitne hi tufaan kabhi kyun na aye…jab Admi kamzoor ho to aurat apni shakti dikhaye aur ussey thame, aur jab patni kamzoor ho to pati apni shakti se ussee sambhalta jaye..

Chandan: Sachh Shaddi bandhan nahi hai kya?

Aunty: Bandhan? bandhan bandhe rakhne ka? Dekho issey bandhan matt socho ek Jod socho tabhi to ek dusre key jeevan se judey reh kar jeeogey warna apni apni duniya hai soch ek dusre se aur durr hote jaoogey , jo aksar aaj ki peedhi 'livein relation' mey dekhti hai. Tumhara mann juda hai, sang juda hai, rishta bana to ussey bandhan kaha hai bass…

Chandan felt relived and with a smile: Aunty, Uncle aaj aapne sachh mere dimaag mey ki kaii baton ko suljha paye hain. Main keh nahi sakta mujhe kitni khushi hue hai. Shayad ab main apni dil ki bechaini ko samjh sakta hun.

Chandan had realized that he had liked Sunina and her thoughts her Sang (being with her) so much that he wishes she was in his life forever. He was happy and more enthusiastic in his work now and that made him realized that love or friendship closeness is not ur weakness but ur strength. Chandan decided to meet Sunaina and just let know her feelings too. He now wanted to clear it up before any more confusion happen.

Aaj tumse pyaar hai sabko kehna chahuga,

Dil ki gehrayionse Tumsang rehna chahunga,

Maa jaise mamta,dost jaisa sneh tummey hai,

Sunaina Ek dusre ki taqat ban, banjaye Ek hai.

As Sunaina was heading to meet Avani, Chandan called her up to meet her. Sunaina was surprised but said she will meet him later. She has to now meet Avani as a new proposal has come up and the decision is still pending. She needs to take her decision. Sunaina later realized and felt why did she tell this to him, but she had spoken and she kept the receiver down and went to meet Avani.

As she went at Avani's place. Avani saw the boys snap and said he is well educated loves art and it very found of Indian tradition and would be more than happy with Sunaina's love for dance and has already said yes, Sunaina has to meet him and later on things will move. Avani was excited with all this but Sunaina felt strange. Avani was trying to make Sunaina understand that this proposal is quite nice and she should meet him but Sunaina wasn't at all interested she didn't knew why she is not excited.

In the mean time Chandan in hurry went to meet Atish,

Chandan : Aatish jaldi kar.

Atish : kya karun jaldi?

Chandan: mujhe Avani ke ghar ka ddress dedey …

Atish ; Kyun? Avani ko kya hua..

Chandan: Areey Avani ko kuch nahi hua, mujhe hi kuch hogaya…

Atish: Nahi tu aisa nahi kar sakta, tujhe Avani se pyaar hogaya..

Chandan stared at him very angrily and Atish laughed saying; Accha mazak kar raha tha, Avani ka address likh deta hun, jaa kar jaldi se Suniana se baat karle,malooom hai dono sath mey hain, dil ki baatein jaldhi clear karleni chachiye...

Chandan blushed listening while Atish raised his eyebrow and said: Acha tu sharma ta hai bada cute lagta hai,..pyaar kiya nahi jata hojata hai….

Chandan: Chal bass kar, address de,

He took the address and reached Avani's house. Avani was surprised to see him and Sunaina was shocked to see him there.

Avani: Kya hua bhayaa, aap yehan.

Chandan: Sunaina hai main ussey milne aya hun.

Sunaina: Chandan, kya hua aap yehan. Kuch bahut jaroori baat thi.

Chandan saw Sunaina with utmost love, this time he felt his heart and mind said one thing, everything was clear now. He had a smile on his face as if he had seen after a long time. Sunaina was though surprised and could sense him very relived and looking at her with a certain more happiness in his eyes…

I love u and my heart feels the breeze when I see u,

I want to marry u my heart sings to bring the breeze life through,

Ur love to me is as if u were there in life all the way,

It's just as if I didn't realize and now I love you I want to say.

last part....(Part VII)

Chandan: Haan. (Avani took their leave understanding they need some space)Sunaina main kitne dinno se tumse door hokar tumse baat naa karun yeh hi koshish karta raha, jitna tumse door hona chaha utna mushkil huahai. Tumhari soch tumhare baton se mujhe aksar bahut prerna mille josh se kaam karne ki. Main samajh nahi paya ki main kyun tumse dur hona chahata hun.

Sunaina very innocently: Mujhse duur….magar mujhe to aisa kabhi nahi laga….

Chandan: Main chahta tha main tumhe itna yaad naa karun akhir tumse maine shaddi ke liye manaa kardiya hai.

Sunaian a bit confused with his words.

Chandan|: Sunaina looks down and looks up into her eyes. Main ab tumhe apne se door nahi karma chahata.

Sunaina: Chandan lekin , tumne khud kaha usdin…..

Chandan: Main pyaar aur shaddi ko meri kamzoori maan ke chala, magar jab yeh meri takat ban mera hosla aur buland kar sakte hain to main inke begair kaise chalu agey. Kya tum mujhe meri nadani ke liye maff kar mujhse shaddi karna chahogi…(with intense look and love in his eyes)

Sunaina was silent she in her heart was happy but she wanted to say anything only after her parents say, they wouldn't possibly accept what he is saying now. Sunaina just said, ghar pe sab..Chandan in no time understood and said, kya agar woh haan kare to tumhe koi aiteraaz nahi hoga na.. Sunaina just looked into his eyes and smiled and Chandan smiled in return understanding her answer was yes.

When I refused to marry u,

I had guilt was hurt why I didn't knew,

When I realized u become my strength and my love is u,

Ur heart has the same love and I feel blessed to have u.

The next day Chandan went home told his Dadi about his decision and that Dadi had long back got to know that Sunainas was the one who can stand beside him and complete his life. Dadi was more than pleased and both decided to go to Sunaina's house. Chandan's Dad and mom were not excited with his yes, they took it casual and went to their work front as usual. Chandan and Dadi reached Sunaina's house and Sunaina parents were surprised, they welcomed them all respect and Dadi said Chandan has come here to say something and this time we have not contributed to his thoughts. Chandan first apologized for all the problems they had to face and Sunaina's parents did say there is nothing to apologize. Chandan continued.

Chandan: aap shayad aaj mujhje maaf kardey, phir bhi main aap ko batana chahata hun ki jo bhi jald baji mey 'haan' kaha gaya tha wah mere ghar walon ki bhul thi iske wajah se aap ko shayad bahut kuch sunana pada aur shayad takleef bhi kafi hue, Main yeh bhi kehna chahunga ki jalbajii mey maine jo'Naa' kaha yeh bhul bhi mujhe swikar hai. Uncle Mera Naa karma yeh sochke tha ki shayad Shaddi ka bandhan mujhe logo ke pratiy ,system ke prati mere kartavya se dur lejaye. Lekin Sunaina ke sath dosti ne yeh bhi ehsaas diladiya hai ki mujhe samjhne wali agar mere jeevan mey aye to kartavya ki oor main aur majhboot irade se jaa pahunga.. (He looked into Suniana eyes who was smiling and looked at Sunaina's father)

Father: Chandan tum rishta todd detey ho aur kuch mahino mey phir ussey jodney ka prastav latey ho, tumhare badalti soch ko tumhari kamzoori, nadani, ya phir bevakufi samjhu?

Chandan: Aap APNA samjhe to bas, phir inmey se kuch bhi mujhe kahein sab sahi hi hoga.

Sunianas father smiled at his answer. Sunaina mother spoke,: Lekin Chandan tumhare parivaar wale is baar raazi hain kya?

Dadi: Ji haan, hum sab bahut khush hain. Main janti thi Sunaina jaisi ladki mere Chandan ki soch aur uske kaam ke prati uski lagan ko samjh sakti hai.

Everyone was very happy. Sunaina was asked about her wish and she said Yes with a huge smile and immediately hugged her mother and father. Bua though was a bit upset. Sunainas and Chadnan had told they want a small marriage ceremony with only close friends, family and few guests. Though Virendra wasn't happy with this, he agreed as he thought that Chandan may be engrossed in his married life and stop getting into the mode of doing social service. He wasn't aware that Sunaina was closer to Chandan's work than the family she is getting into. The marriage took place and Sunaina looked lovely with little jewelry and beautiful Sari which Chandan had bought for her. Chandan wore a kurta dhoti which Sunaina had brought for him. Extremely simple looking couple but the smile on their faces and the glow of happiness had made them look absolutely lovely.

Kindness in words creates confidence.
Kindness in thinking creates profundity.
Kindness in giving creates love.

Bhoomi dear..nothing u write could ever be termed as boring...as usual enjoyed reading the concluding parts of u're fan-fic...liked both the lead characters Chandan n Sunaina..n the way u've potrayed their relationship...

As usual well written..looking frwd to reading some more stuff frm u're end...

N thanx for posting this today..