Second Inning of Dev and Sona Love story FFUptd-Prt17-pg119 updated - Page 16

Superb
waiting for part 5

Awesome!!!!!!! I read the 4 parts together and during that time only 3 things in my mind were going on-
1)It is so realistic.. With the current track I can very much relate with the story..Woww..U just took my curiosity level 100 steps higher
2)That what an amazing writer you are..Its your first try and it is soo good..And the way you incorporated the details about Devki seeing your lil daughter .I m so glad ..
3)I was whole time cursing myself that how could I miss such a lively lovely OS!!
PLzzz update soon..I knw wid ur kid u must be so busy..waiting for Saturday sunday when you will update.Uff these weekends without Devakshi..
Srry I blabered too much..

Thanks for the Continuation...

Eagerly waiting for u r Next Part...

what an amazing part.
i just love your writing.
your writing sense is awsome.
Update soon.
eagerly waiting for next part.
if possible then pm me.