DevAkshi FF: Inteha hogayi intezaar ki ( Chap 1 pg 1)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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"It has been three years since I made the biggest mistake of my life.Maine apni selfishness ke liye tumhe khud se door kardiya, mami ki baton or maa ke emotional drame mai aake maine najane kia kardia.

Kese kahun how much i miss you,kese kahu how much i love you...Sona!😭"said dev to her only portrait he had


Dubai

"3 saal hogaye hain,3 saal pehle mujhe pata chala tha ke agar life main kuch matter karta hai to wo hai aapka kaam,apka profession or apka hardwork.Thats why do not waste your time in coochie cooing with your boyfriend,he will leave you one day wese bhi 😔 " Dr Sonakshi bose scolded her intern.

TO BE CONTINUEDšŸ˜›
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sajinifaby thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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super...waiting for the next...😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chap 1:
3 years ago:

Dev pacing around the hallway of the hospital.
He is panicked and he is crying his heart out.
What if something happens to maa?i will be responsible for it ;is the only thought he is getting.

He then sees Dr Sinha coming towards him and dev rushes to ask about his mom.
D:Dr.ab maa kesi hai?
Sinha:ab wo khatre se baahir hain,bohat mushkil se zeher unki body se nikaala hai but she wants to meet you.

Dev sighs in relief and goes to meet his maa,but one thing that he kept wondering was that who poisoned ishwari?

Dev in Ishwari's ward:
He goes to his mom and hugs her tight.
D:Maa tujhe kuch hojata to?
I:jab mera beta mere saath hai to mujhe kia hoga bhala?
D:magar maa tujhe zeher dia kisne?akhri baar kia khaya tha tune?or kisne dia tha tujhe?
I:chor na beta,wese bhi mujhe yaad nahi hai.
D:magar maa...

"MAIN BATATI HUN" yells padha rani in her screeching voice.

Ishwari tries to stop her but she goes ahead.

PR:jiji ne ek rasgulla khaya tha akhri baar,or janta hai wo kon laya tha?wo bangalan layi thi wo or jiji ko zabardasti khilaya tha usne.

Dev turns red in anger on the accusations PR placed on sonakshi.
D:Chup kijiye aap!sharam nahi aati uspe aisa ilzaam lagate hue apko?
Ishwari tries to stop dev and says:unpe mat chilla,wo sach keh rahi hain.

Dev turns purple.does this mean that sonakshi poisoned her mom?no!how could she?she isnt like this,she would never do something like this but his Maa wouldnt lie either.

There were many questions which dev had,and their answers were only with his lady,Sonakshi.


To be continued...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waow can't wait to see how the story proceeds...
continue soon and Pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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omg really amazing starting
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg!!
Sona par itna bada ilzaam??
Cont soon
Waiting eagerly...

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