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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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Posted: 9 years ago

#211

Part 4

Awesome update Gayu

Loved it

So they have become more close than ever

Hehe...she scared him

Last part was really good

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yashivid

@yashivid

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Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Hey gayu

Read all the four shots in one go n i loved it.

Want to know how their marriage happens.

Please update soon. Pls pls pls dear.

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

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Posted: 9 years ago

#213

I am in awww 😳 with story

Such a beautiful creation 👏

Very eager for wedding 😳

Waiting for the next pm😉

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florine_20

@florine_20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#214

gayatri waiting for this one too

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Superb parts..so when are you planning to update

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#216

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Balasri

@Sri1091

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Posted: 9 years ago

#217

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Lol Gaayu bechara puttar yaar he is so frsutated as he was missing his girls and den wen he called d land line appa ne vuse dannt ke call cute kardiya 🤣 and wen he reached der he was in a alien land and people are watching him as some alien as he is gora 🤣 and den appa se hi kaha dat he came to butter up his FIL phooti kismat but appa's opinion changed wen he saw dat tears in raman's eyes and now they became frnds soo cool it is puttar is irked dat he couldn't meet his madrasan and he is soo possesive dat ishita Sat on appa's lap for wedding rituals 🤣 and den shanti muhurtam 🤣 puttar bechara and his question to appa 🤣 he is soo desperate but Ruhi be puttar ki night flop kardi with her crying 🤣 and now he is all set to celebrate suhag din or Raman muhurtam 😉

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nishaani

@-Nii-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#218

Edited...

Gaya man fabulous update...

So as promised she went off to rameshwaram😆...and the help had to bear the side effects of ishita's absence😆...bechare yaar...

So he called n got bkt😆...it was appa...I absolutely love their equation🤣🤣...superb it was...

Appa eventually started liking him...and accepted him...

Madhavi toh liked him dekte hi😉...

They got married... Phirse suhagraat ki Baj gayi🤣...I love this shanti muhurat of yours man😆

Raman asked appa about this... And appa had to wait for 21 days😲🤣...I think first they've check shanti muhurat time n then fix the marriage time🤣...

They last line by Raman... Oh Teri oneliner🤣

I want translations for the Tamil part

Edited by -Nii- - 9 years ago

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Sk-Sharmin

@Sk-Sharmin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#219

ohh biwiee chali gai sulking puttar ko chod kar..
poor maid...😛

he cant even sleep without hiz girls..
nd jab call kiya toh fir bhi bechare ko appa se baat karna padi...
poor baby..
nd mihir...
really vry sad yaar..
puttar ne uski neend bhi kharab kar di...

bt at last he landed in Rameshwaram..
People talking things that he found like some tribal song
lollzz...
i can imagine hiz expressions..
bt they dint spare him coz puttar is so gora gora..😳
hehe..
btw what's kolam??

finally use ishita dikhi...nd the edges of hiz lips touched his ears...😃
well explained😉

appa pr puttar 1st impression..
a man who seemed he never learned culture or tradition is in frnt of hiz house..
appa ka blood boil hi hoga na..
bt RKB..
pagalpanti..
wo appa ko hi keh raha hai..m.here to butter my FIL🤣
lolzz..
sachhi me yaar..
appa ka expression dekhne layak hoga..

RKB ne emotional kar diya appa ko..😭
he is n orphan keh kar...
nd appa melted next second..
dekha mere baby ka jadoo..😎

mujge wo madrasi words samjh me nahi aye..
which rituals nd all..

shanti muhuratam..
yahi ek word pata hai..
coz u k w wht...ryt😉
he was already frustrate k he can meet hiz lady love...nd uper se ruhi..🤣
kya haal ho gaya hai puttar ka..
despo..
nd dat question to appa..😲
hw can he??!!
bt appa is very patient person..
21 days...
like really!!!!!!
puttar ka reaction uspar... amazing..
loved the update..
bt sad k its ended..😔

hope u r doing great..😉

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Sharmin

@fSharm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#220

Awesome ending...
Loved it a lot...
Raman z really a open book..
He talk & say everything to everyone..
He cant even stand a night withou th ishita & ruhi...
Nxt day itself he went to rameshwaram...
& raman's enterance itself is a flop for him..
& wat appa scolded him saying

"vekkam kettavan!" 😆

Though appa thought that he vl not mend vth raman..
He nicely mend vth raman as a friend it self..
Raman z really shameless yar...
He even questioned appa about his shanti muhurtham...
& he was really frustated yar ..
He was away from ishita even after marriage...
& finally he z spending his whole life time vth ishita...
Awesome ending..