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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update Gayu
Puttar is hell frustrated
Sil and fil on good terms...yay
So all well
Last line...hehe...loved it
Perfect ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
excellent..though you are not well..you are updating ur stories..
How mice yaar...
Do give us epilogue for this..
this was ery nice story..
Last part was so funny!!!
Raman tho gaya..
End dialogues are so flirty..I just loved this entire story:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow such a nice update

how many days did u wait appa ?🤣

21 🤣🤣🤣

raman was fab

well i read it as os 😊

but now back to part one 😃

and i know i'll enjoy it for sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
loved it very much

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Posted: 9 years ago
🤣

Such a funny ending...ohhh myyy god...

Raman kumar bhalka and funny antics...ohhh teriii...
Sasur ko manana...then shanti muhratam🤣🤣

Rooh baby...papa ke plans kharab kiye...

But fiki ending...i want thoda sa hot romance...ummm ...cheating...

Chal u are unwell so given u some time...

Loved it...superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Such a cute part
awesome ending gayu
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Posted: 9 years ago
beautiful ending
thanks for pm

get well soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wonderfull ending little sad you end it you have to take care of yourself is more important than anything et the moment so waiting for your come-back with a bang like you always do 👏 😉 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
Shot 3-5 : So Raman was in mission searching his mistress in pretention of searching babysitter. He tried a lot to confess his feelings but he didn't get a chance poor he. Here he is trying to confess her but there she thrown a bomb by telling she is going to engage huh :/ . They fought very bad at night and in the morning everything came back to normal cool. Gosh there is nothing called contract poor she always stayed in her limits by thinking about that so called contract *Roll* . He deserved one more slap 😈. Oh god at next moment I didn't expect her to submit herself to him 😳. In our room Raman 😛 sound proof glasses ha 😳 poor helps faced difficulty in handling Ruhi. How could they do that for such a long time [xxx]. Morning she really scared me by her behaviour. She is really nautanki 😆. Raman dailed to her landline talk to me baby 🤣 baby nahi baby ka father hai 🤣. Alas he went to Rameshwaram to marry his madrasan jkr 😉. Mr.Iyer doubt how his daughter got one-year old daughter in eight months 🤣 I am still laughing at this line. Raman told he came to butter his FIL to him only 🤣. Glad their relationship is not like cat and dog. Poor he cried because appa told him not to call him as his appa 😔. Now what's this shanti muhurtham 🤣. Appa waited for 21 days 😆 poor man. Finally he survived all muhurthams 😆. Now no shanti but only Raman muhurtham 🤣 ahahahh aaahahahhh. I loved it so so too too much.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update di
luvd raman n appa convo
he was behaving lyk he is his buddy
Aww poor baby had to wait 4 three days
but ruhi d smart kid helped her papa
he actually asked appa hw long he had to wait
d end was lovely
continue soon
thnxx 4 pm

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