Rishabala ~ Yeh Ishq Nahi Asaan.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi there! I am here with a New Piece of Writing.. I don't know how long it will but I am sure it will be not more than 4-5 parts. According to your likes and comments I will continue this story otherwise I will not.

Prologue.

"Ahhh.. Ahhh.." Padmini cries Screaming loudly Clutching her bedshit as she try to push her Baby out.
"Just one more Push." Daima tells her worried. Padmini nods her head and Push hard. Hearing a loud scream of Baby, Padmini Looks Daima worriedly.
"It's a Boy. Right?" Padmini ask trying to get up and Praying to God that it's not a Girl.
"It's a Girl." Daima Tells her and taking baby with her she walks away to her Sahib.
"No!!!" Padmini cries hearing her.

"Sahib. Your wife gave birth to a girl. It's Daughter." Daima tells to Balraj who was Sitting on Sofa drinking. Balraj turns to his Mother and smile wickedly.
"Congratulations! Your wife is Born now." Badi Chaudherain tells Balraj happily and Proudly tapes his Shoulder.
"It's your Daughter?" Daima tells him Confused looking at Baby.
"Give me." Balraj says Stretching his hand to take baby. Confused Daima gently place baby on his arms and stand there still.
"My Wife!!!" Balraj says with a Smirk looking at Baby and Stretch his hand and examine baby.
"Wah!! My Bahu is very Beautiful!" Chaudherian says happily.

"God. Why!" Padmini cries holding her Baby in her Arms. "Why you gave her to me. Now Her life is destroyed. Whole Haveli is happy except me, Now what will happen?" Padmini says looking her baby. Padmini looks at her husband horribly who was standing near door smiling Victoriously.

Ha ha.. Shocked? Let's see if anyone can guess this or This is also from your Kalpana se Pare...
Edited by .Poorva. - 9 years ago


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-Dunyasha- thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First time commenting on a story in this forum. I'm new to the forum, but not new to the show. Story seems interesting. Hope you will post the next part soon. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg what a concept different...!!!!👍🏼
Excited to know what happens next
U always put ur reader in suspense
Why is balraj saying this? that leech 😡
I wish that my rk saves madhu from that devil
Poor madhu and padmini
Please update soon and don't keep this suspense for long
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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well shocking prologue.
balraj daughter going to be his wife in future..

would love to read it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sounds creepy n scary... wanna c how RK n Madhu overcome such bas****
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Posted: 9 years ago
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different concept... well written... thank you for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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scary prologue,,
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
.Poorva. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Dunyasha-

First time commenting on a story in this forum. I'm new to the forum, but not new to the show. Story seems interesting. Hope you will post the next part soon.😊

Welcome to this forum.. I am sure you will enjoy in this wonderful place..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Kon SA Kira tumhare dimag me ghus gya k tumne Madhu ko balraj ki biwi bna diya
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Fingers crossed 🥱
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting and confusing.
wil be waiting.

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