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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello raglakians i know m updating after such a long time actually the reason behind not updating i was so busy in preparation of my coming university exams. Though there are many things to do and learn for exams i can't help myself from writing and sharing this piece of os with you all. So read and review as your feedback make me to improve myself and inspire me to write more...
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~positive ~


Laksh maheshwari was what you'd consider a morning person. Up and going at the crack of dawn. It was more by force of habit and not any particular choice on his part. Having to be up for years to make breakfast for his horrible relatives was the reason.

His wife ragini on the other hand was definitely NOT a morning person. She would stay in bed until the last possible second and even then get up grudgingly. She barely spoke until she'd had her second cup of tea.

Therefore, laksh was a bit surprised when he heard ragini get up and run to the washroom. Since it was Saturday, he didn't expect to see her wake up till at the earliest.

He was puzzled when he heard her flush but then didn't hear her go back to bed. He was further shocked when several moments later he heard her coming down the stairs.

Ragini walked into the kitchen with a rather shocked look on her face, sitting down heavily in her chair.

Laksh looked at her with concern. "You okay, love?" he asked.

Ragini just stared ahead for a moment, further raising laksh's concern. "ragini?"

Ragini suddenly snapped her eyes to laksh, hers starting to fill with tears.

"It's positive," she whispered.

Laksh was struck speechless for a moment. Slowly a smile spread across his face and he jumped up, ran over and picked ragini up, spinning her around.

"It's Positive!" he shouted.

Tears streaming down her face, but smiling none the less, ragini nodded vigorously. "Yes! It's Positive," she repeated.

Laksh sat her back on her feet and he looked lovingly into her eyes.

"We're having a baby," he whispered in awe, before he leaned in and kissed her tenderly.

Ragini snuggled into laksh's loving embrace, smiling just as much as her husband.

"We're having a baby," she whispered back.

~~~after nine months~~~

Laksh looked down at ragini lying in the bed. Her hair was pulled back in a rough ponytail. Stray strands were laying about here and there, most plastered to her face which had rivulets of sweat streaming down her cheeks.

She was also quite flushed, her cheeks a deep red where the rest of her face appeared quite white.

His eyes drifted further down, taking in the little bundle she was holding. He looked on in awe as his son, rishab laksh maheshwari latched onto ragini's breast and began to suckle.

Ragini was staring at rishab with a look of such pure love, it made laksh's breath hitch in his throat.

Hearing him, she lifted her tired eyes, meeting his, smiling in spite of the ordeal she had just been through.

Instinctively he reached out and tucked one of the strands of hair behind her ear. "You are so beautiful," he whispered huskily.

Though she knew she must look a fright, the sincerity and love she saw, let her know that right now in laksh's eyes, she was...
Edited by shehriz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just came across this thread and I must say that you are a brilliant writer 😃 ⭐️
Loved reading all the one-shots 😳
The way u are able to convey so much in such few words is commendable 👏 👏
Great work yaar 👏 👏
Please keep writing more 😃 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww !! This one was so so so sweet Shehriz !! Please write more soon !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww this was wonderful shehriz. Love it

Keep writing more

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