SS -Yeh hum kahan aa gaye Part 2 page 6[Updated 22.5]

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: rati_pandya
Amazing Trina 👏
Waiting for next update. The confusion is nice. Waiting to see how lakshya n yuvika adjust in threta yug and what will they teach new to all there.

Thanks alot ,

I will update the next part and its going to be more interesting I hope😆

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: SenRazia
Loved it!! The confusion and the reversal... Loved it!!

Thanks a lot for liking, the masti has just began😉

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Genius!

Thanks a lot, glad u liked it

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deejagi

@deejagi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Wow trina, it is so splendid story. So 21st century kids went to Tretayug using the time machine and Tretayug guys took that machine back to Kaliyug. So unless lakshmila return to their time, Yuvika & lakshya are stuck with Sita maiyya's pravachans 😆😆. Poor kids would have tried to escape Kristina's analysis and end up with her elder sister.

Its really good that you have kept both the people in tact and not swapped them according to the age like Lakshman becoming Lakshya the moment he lands into 21st century and vice versa. 😊

eagerly waiting for the next part

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Srutha

@SriMaatangi

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

Go trin trin 👏👏
I love this 😊

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Nice part Trina😊

thanks a lot Nonie😊

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Go trin trin 👏👏
I love this 😊

Thanks, glad that u like it😃😳

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rina

@Trinaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: deejagi
Wow trina, it is so splendid story. So 21st century kids went to Tretayug using the time machine and Tretayug guys took that machine back to Kaliyug. So unless lakshmila return to their time, Yuvika & lakshya are stuck with Sita maiyya's pravachans 😆😆. Poor kids would have tried to escape Kristina's analysis and end up with her elder sister.

Its really good that you have kept both the people in tact and not swapped them according to the age like Lakshman becoming Lakshya the moment he lands into 21st century and vice versa. 😊

eagerly waiting for the next part

Lakshmila struck with Kristina and Lakshya-Yuvika with Sita😆😆

Thanks a lot for likng this 😳😃

Will update soon

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Rex_Ryan

@Rex_Ryan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#69

amazing update trina ... I just loved it them telling their story to all others is nice ... but manasvi reaction ...suspense??? and I hate it ... and didn't show reaction in treta yug too... ..., but u let's them understand the situation ...and the strong bond immediately formed was lovely and perfectly depicted ... but ur story was very easy going and lovely dovely smooth ... add some spice dear ...its a request

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rina

@Trinaa

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: Rex_Ryan
amazing update trina ... I just loved it them telling their story to all others is nice ... but manasvi reaction ...suspense??? and I hate it ... and didn't show reaction in treta yug too... ..., but u let's them understand the situation ...and the strong bond immediately formed was lovely and perfectly depicted ... but ur story was very easy going and lovely dovely smooth ... add some spice dear ...its a request

thanks for ur review

treta yug ka part will be in next update

abhi toh kahani shuru hui hai, i mean pehle sab koi settle ho jae tab ja kar suspense aaega😆 😉

many more surprises to come