SS -Yeh hum kahan aa gaye Part 2 page 6[Updated 22.5] - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: vrinda65

Intresting...

Very intresting plot and story

Lets see LakshMila in kalyug... bahot maza aayega
Plz update soon n do pm me

Plzzz pm me

The masti will begin soon
Thanks for reading
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: SanjanaKhan_2

Its very interesting.

Please pm me when u post next part.

Thanks for liking
Sure will update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

Fantastic part Trina😃

Thanks alot
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
New Characters


Before I continue the story let me introduce you to some new characters which are there in the 21st century.

Rahul= Ram of Kaliyug, well he smart, intelligent, caring, loving, strong... in short an ideal person just like Ram

Simran=Sita of kaliyug, she is the best friend, best daughter, best student, and just the right person you need for any advice

Yuvika=Urmila, fiery, independent, smart, she loves playing pranks on everyone especially Lakshya and she is Simran's best friend

Lakshya=Lakshman, handsome, angry young man, but very playful and naughty, loves fighting with Yuvika, Rahul's best friend

Bhuvan=Bharat, a sweet, innocent and intelligent person, he loves drawing and is very good in studies,loves Manasvi

Manasvi=Mandavi,she loves chatting, playing on internet and is always updated about what's happening around and she loves teasing Kristina about anything

Kristina,Shrutkirti, she is the brain of the group, you ask her any question and she will tell the answer within seconds, an expert in technology but don't think of her a bookworm, she is equally bubbly and a cute-pie

Shravan=Shatrughan, the prankster among the gang, always joyful, happy and optimistic, he is the one who loves bringing smile on others face

Sakshi, she is the mother of Yuvika but she loves all the kids equally and is very protective about them and yes, one just can't hide anything from her.

The eight of them are childhood friends and are currently living together at Rahul's uncle's place.

Khusal, Simran's uncle, a great scientist, he loves inventing devices and he only is the creator of the time machine which he has just made and wants to test whether it is working or not. But he has a habit of forgetting things which often causes problem for the group.

Edited by Trinaa - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
Yaar Trina, we thought only lakshmila got into 21st century through Time Machine but looks like you are transporting the whole bunch to the future. Are you trying to say Dashrath will die off without having any kids / bahus in his presence or are you planning to bring them also to the 21st century?
Who is Ravan and where is Shurpi? Will they come out due to the malfunctioning of the time machine?😉😉
But it looks more promising and more thrilling and interesting. Please post soon. Can't wait now tahtr you have let the CAT out of the bag.😆😆😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
Its very interesting.
Please update soon.
And please pm me.
Edited by SanjanaKhan_2 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: deejagi

Yaar Trina, we thought only lakshmila got into 21st century through Time Machine but looks like you are transporting the whole bunch to the future. Are you trying to say Dashrath will die off without having any kids / bahus in his presence or are you planning to bring them also to the 21st century?

Who is Ravan and where is Shurpi? Will they come out due to the malfunctioning of the time machine?😉😉
But it looks more promising and more thrilling and interesting. Please post soon. Can't wait now tahtr you have let the CAT out of the bag.😆😆😃

Well there is no Rvan and Shurpi in my story😆😆
You will get your answers soon when I will update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
your story seems to be very interesting
😊 😊
update ur story ASAP 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
GREAT!!!
Loving this one...
Now the forum has two 21st century Stories to read..
A save from my stupid one😆

Waiting for the updates!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: SenRazia

GREAT!!!

Loving this one...
Now the forum has two 21st century Stories to read..
A save from my stupid one😆

Waiting for the updates!


Yours is not stupid, its very interesting
But you see my ideas are crazy😆

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