RagYa/RagLak FF - Kyun Teri Hasrat Hai Har Khwaish Se Badhkar

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RagYa/RagLak FF
Kyun Teri Hasrat Hai Har Khwaish Se Badhkar

Plot: This story beings from the track after Ragini's truth revelation


~ Index page of Kyun Teri Hasrat Hai Har Khwaish Se Badhkar ~

Chapter 1 - Page 1
Chapter 2 - Page 3
Chapter 3 - Page 4
Chapter 4 - Page 5
Chapter 5 - Page 6
Chapter 6 - Page 7
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1

Ragini Gadodia was once a girl who was shy and quiet girl yet filled with values and respect for her elders but her her obsession and love for Laksh made her destroyed not only her nature and values but her relation with her families. She went to such an extent that she was on the verge of killing her sister swara whom she loved more than herself. She had done so much to get her love Laksh but neither did she know that the person for whom she did all this so much, didn't even love her a bit.

She was all broken, after months of planning and plotting, her truth came out infront of everyone, she was left all alone, not a single person stood by herself today, was there really no one in this world who she could confine into and trust? she thought to herself while gazing out of the window of her room

She thought atleast her family members would understand her but instead her family members disowned her and told her not to step into Gadodia house again nor show them their face as for them she's already dead, same went for the Mashewari family

Ragini stood near the window side and looked towards the door waiting for Laksh to come, she wanted to apologize and ask for forgiveness, she couldn't bear his hatered and anger for long, even a second was too much. After long hours of waiting, laksh entered the room, he saw Ragini standing near the window side waiting for him to come.

Laksh looked at her in anger and went into his bed before she could say anything. He couldn't believe his eyes, the person he trusted so much, broke his trust into thousand pieces, just because of her, he broke the heart of someone whom he used to love so much - his first love Swara, he chose to believe in her over his love but after what she has done with me I can never trust her again, he though to himself

Ragini also slided into her bed, both turning the opposite side. "How can someone be so selfish?" Laksh thought to himself

"I'm sorry laksh, I was blind in love that I couldn't see anything around me, I just kept on doing what I felt right, but believe me, I did all this just for you, My intentions were never wrong" Ragini too said to herself

Ragini and Laksh both slowly turned to the middle, both thinking that they're already as sleep but situation was such that non could fall asleep

"Laks.." Ragini called his namely softly but laksh instantly spoke "Ragini, I neither want to talk with you nor see your face after what happened today so please go to sleep yourself and let me sleep too" Saying this line, he tucked into his blanket and slept

P.S Suggest a Title for the FF

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Edited by Shinning_AD - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow!!! Interesting Anji...😃


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great beginning 😊...amazing
But dear we have no idea about the concept...so what to suggest 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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loving the start 😊
great job, please do carry on and thanks for the pm ❤️

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Great story Anjale and great start👏
Looking forward to the next update😉



How about "jo bheji thi dua" as title or "hume tumse pyar kitna" 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start dear!

Title?yaar no idea about concept,what to suggest?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice Start Dear and Thanks For pm Yaar .I think Its Going Hate Love One :-)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice concept anjale..

Title..hmm
"When love speaks"

???
😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
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great start anjii!
Amazing

for title, what about
'iss pyar me ho kaise kaise imtahaan.'
or
tera pyar, mera junoon
or
love you Mr. Maheswari

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