Night- a 16+ swasan or raglak story.. epilogue up pg 37

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Hi, all this is a new idea which stuck my mind so thought of writing it.. so far nothing much is fixed neither the story is ready also I know I have other works to be completed but this is also one of those which I wanted to post.. the story will be short n quite dark... hope u will like it... u can imagine it favorite couple here...
Pls read the prologue n leave ur comments..

Prologue - they both returned to a room, both were drunk.. he locked it n started moving towards her.. she wore a short black dress exposing her milky smooth skin, she looked into his eyes they were mesmerising.. he wore a white shirt n blue jeans.. he looked breath taking... he slowly removed his shirt showing his bare body, making her lose her control. He came more close n she shifted back until she touched a wall. He blocked her way from his arms. He came more close to her, his fragrance increased the effect of alcohol.. she started breathing faster.. he came more close n jerks her close as well his hands were now on her waist.. n her fingers crawled on his chest.. increasing his want for her.. he slowly opened the zip of her dress. The effect he had on her was beyond words. He turned her n touched her back sensuously.. sending shivers down her body...he removed her dress completely n turned her face to him . They kissed passionately... she pushed him on the bed and came on top of him.. slowly pecking his chest.. he then rolled over n took control...

This lead to a story.. no body knows weather a mistake or not...

Index-
Prologue - above page 1
Cs- down page 1
Part-1 - down pg1
Part-2 - pg8
Part-3 - pg11
Part-4 - pg14
Part-5 - pg17
Part-6 - pg20
Part-7 - pg22
Letter - pg22
Part-8 - pg26
Part-9 - pg28
Part-10- pg30
Location - pg32
Part-11- pg32
Part-12 - pg 34
Epilogue - pg 37




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Characters -
Ragini or swara gadodia- so any one of ur fav lead u imagine has a bold character, she is the only daughter of shekhar and sharmishta gadodia. They were the only owners of 'karma group of industries' which now is in the name of their daughter. She is now all alone in this world after their death in a recent car accident few months back. She is 25 n now manages their industries and business alone. Has no friends. There is a hidden softness in her heart, but what she shows the world is her reserved nature. She is one of those beautiful girls who r the dream of every boy.. now she has shifted to her mansion in Shimla. A beautiful and clam place with loads of natural beauty n calm environment.

Laksh or sanskaar Maheshwari - so here the either of the character u imagine is a mysterious man ...he is 28, has no family, his nature is mysterious as well.. he has a charm which no girl can resist. He hides his identity under the name Mr. J or Jerry for all sweethearts.. he Lands from nowhere in the mansion of this lady and forces her to help him.. what r his motives, what he wants no body knows...



So here is the character sketch there is no other character much influencing these two. Hope u liked them, pls leave ur comments n thanks for ur beautiful response earlier


Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Part-1

It was 8 in the evening when,A black car stops in front of a huge mansion in Shimla, a lady dressed in a red top n black jeans comes out, her hair tied in a bun. She orders the servant Bahadur to take all her belongings from the boot of the car to her room carefully. He followed it. She entered the mansion, it was grand, huge, luxurious but silent and lonely. She sighed because this resembled her life.. grand huge luxurious yet silent and lonely.. sidelining her thoughts she decided to go n have a shower.. she entered her room all the luggage was perfectly placed there. She thanked bahadur for this n requested to prepare a cup of tea n send it here in her room. He quickly ran out in order to accomplish the task given by his mistress. She took one of her white top from her bag along with blue lower n left for her shower ...

All this went normally with its usual silence and bordum untill she returned after her shower. To her shock there was a man on her bed .. black shirt was what he wore along with blue jeans..
"Hello, miss Gadodia " he said in a calm yet mysterious voice.. she had just returned from her shower all her hair wet n water dripping from them on her face and neck ..." oh she is hot" he thought but all the thought chain broke when she spoke up.."hello, but who r u? What r u doing here? And if u want to talk something we can meet in my study u pls wait I am just coming in 5 minutes.."saying this she was about to move when she herd a sound as if something hit the shelf next to her .. she checked n in no time could see a bullet there.. she turned to him enraged.. he had a gun with a silencer.. she again repeated her questions but this time quite harshly.. to which his reply was a "ssshhh!!!".. "slow " he said .. moving closer to her he said "u know this bullet could have stuck ur foot , but ur lucky it's not .. well I am Mr. J or Jerry for u".. " for u means this is not ur name" she asked confused.. he smiled and replied" smart lady must say, well this much is enough for u .. coming to next I need ur help".. "what sort of help" she asked furiously.. " be calm babes .. I need this mansion for a stay n u have to give it to me cause u have no other option.. if not by will so I gave other ways to get it .. u know just one bullet in ur head n no body will know where have u vanished.. " .. she now moved back few steps in order to get hold of her own gun but before that she moaned in pain "AAhhh!!".. he came close to her .. he had shot her upper arm of left hand. " See don't try to act smart.. " he said holding her arm.. "who r u? What u want?" She asked all in pain... "ur husband" he said..

"What" a usual reaction any girl would give.. " yes for few days u have to tell this to everyone , got it " he said...
"Nooo" she refused" what after that u will run away , u jerk , what will I the whole world" she questioned... to which he replied saying " abhi ka socho baby doll, better for u, got it , n never ever again ask 2 things my real identity n motives"..

As soon as he finished his intro she fainted due to excessive pain. He lifted her n called the doctor, who soon arrived.
Doc- well Mr j how did it happen?
He- it's a long story doctor. Some other day .. for now my wife need me (he said with a usual smile on his face)

2hrs past the doctor left she gained conscious. He noticed it n offered her water, she sipped it n asked " what had happened to me" .. " nothing u lost ur conscious, well how r u feeling" he again questioned .. " better" she replied

He turned to look out of the window n she moved to her wardrobe to change her top as this one was blood socked .. she was about to leave for the washroom when he pulled her .. slowly opened the buttons of her top.. she jerked him n asked irritated "what was that" .. "I was helping u .. I guess ur hand still pains" he answered.. "r8 , pls keep ur help with u" saying this she left for the washroom and closed the door behind her.. leaving almost no impact on him.. soon she realised the need of he help he offered. It was tough for her to change her hand did not move properly. But still she decided to do it all by her self, when he entered, leaving her shocked.. " I knew it u will need my help" he said coming close to her.. she felt glued to her place unable to speak. Looking In the other direction he helped her change and in return all she could sy wasa thanks to this shameless man..

She immediately left n entered her room and sat on the couch. He too came out of the washroom. There was nothing except a complete silence in their room. She decided to read a novel where as he was doing all his work from the laptop.. making her more curious but remembering his warning she decided to be calm..

10pm n bahadur arrived with the dinner 2 plates containing some dal and chapati, it was all she wanted to have n ordered him to make. He got up form the couch closing his laptop n bahadur handed over the plates to him.. he placed them on the table in front of the couch. He moved his lips again to ask whether she needs help or not but she beforehandedly refused..

After the dinner they decided to sleep n he all occupied the bed. She not in a mood to fight simply took a pillow n rested herself on the couch..

12 mid night.. she couldn't sleep due to the pain her experienced .. he knew it n hence Ame close to her with an injection.. she looked at him with questioning eyes when he simply replied " u will be able to sleep after this" n injected something n her body through her arm.. she now felt drowsy n he lifted her up .. she refused but he was no one stop.. "sshhh! Sleep peacefully here " n placed her in the bed, she was now fast asleep under the effect of his drug with 100s of questions in her mind
He too slept by her side, after adjusting few pillows b/w them...

So this was the 1st part hope u liked it pls leave ur comments below they matter a lot...
Edited by harshitaloomba1 - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muktai

Interesting start😳

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☺️ thanks
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Originally posted by: Helee

awesome start...☺️

Thanks 😳
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Thanks 😊
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😳 thanks
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Nice start... But who are the couples... Update soon.

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