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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#171

Hope khushi vibes are wrong...

nice teaser

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#172

that is big step for khushi...

to bring arnav there...

worries still there...

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#173

hope she do not turn against her daughter...

and hurt them...

at least arnav going to be prepared

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Linsie

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Posted: 9 years ago

#174

is she going to test him... nice teaser..

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Yagya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#175

Part 15

Arnav and Khushi stood in front of Khushi's house with their fingers intertwined with each other as they mentally made a promise to each other; will not part, till death do us part.

Sumitra patted Khushi's shoulder affectionately and gave her courage. Taking a deep sigh to calm her wrecked nerves, Khushi guided Arnav inside the living room where Suhasini was waiting for them.

" Mumma, this is Arnav Singh Raizada." Arnav joined his palms in a formal and respectful greeting while bowing his side slightly. Suhasini just smiled at him and remained in her seated posture so Arnav immediately withdrew his respectful gesture, obeying his instincts which told him that the lady in front of him, didn't deserve his respect.

" Please be seated."

A frown appeared on Suhasini's face when Khushi chose to sit beside Arnav rather than her or on a more neutral place but that frown was soon replaced with a smile, which could be easily distinguished as a fake one. Sumitra took a neutral side which was placed adjacent to both the couches of Arnav and Suhasini.

" So Arnav, how much do you love MY daughter?" Suhasini's question made Khushi look up at her mother questioningly while Arnav's posture and face remained unaffected.

" I love your daughter more than anything. My wife means to me more than my own life." Arnav's public expression on Khushi being his wife erased the slight smirk on Suhasini's face for a second, only for it to be brought back with a greater intensity.

" We will see to it, dear son-in-law."

Khushi looked at Sumitra who was looking positively suspicious and a worried look appeared on Khushi's face immediately. Arnav let his curiosity out and questioned,

" What do you mean?"

Another voice greeted their ears, much to surprise of three of the assembled audience. " Maybe I will be able to answer the question in a better manner."

Khushi found herself getting rid of the seat in a shock and Sumitra followed her suit.

" Papa..."

" Sudhakar Ji.."

Arnav's instincts kicked in. He knew that something unpleasant was going to take place and surge of protectiveness for the lady beside him followed it. He stood up and took a rather defensive position in front of Khushi.

Khushi gripped his arm tightly while Sumitra took baby steps towards the couple so that she would go unnoticed by her husband. " You just said that my daughter means to you more than your life right?"

Arnav stared at Sudhakar without blinking, trying to notice any susceptible movement from his side while the lady grasping his tightly, eyed the surroundings of her own home where they might be attacked. In a calm and clear voice, Arnav replied,

" You heard it right, Sir."

" A little testing wouldn't hurt. Or maybe it would." Sudhakar's hands moved towards his pockets while Arnav grasped Khushi's hand in his tightly while planning and calculating in his brain, knowing that Khushi would be doing the same.

A deafening sound resonated throughout the room and blood spilled on the floor, followed by a painful shriek.

Arnav had dragged Khushi along with him towards the backyard where Nikhil was waiting for them, in case of an emergency but Sudhakar's painful shriek stopped them mid-way. They turned around, still in their defensive position to learn of the happenings to realize that Sumitra had shot Sudhakar, probably with an intent to stop him for a while, at his arm.

" RUN!"

Sumitra's firm and stern gaze compelled Arnav to follow her order and pull Khushi along with himself, while tears flowed down Khushi's cheeks as she knew that the consequences wouldn't be very pleasant for Sumitra.

Another sound of bullet being fire evaded their sense of hearing and Arnav's hold over Khushi's hand grew tighter than ever, to ensure that she doesn't stop and get herself caught. A deafening shriek, this time in a female voice, was heard and it didn't take longer than a second for Khushi to realize that it was her own Sumitra Maa's voice.

" Maa.."

A shaky and hoarse whisper left her lips as she found herself facing Nikhil and Arnav taking the car keys from him. Before Nikhil could ascend the car, Khushi pulled him down,

" Nikhil, you are not doing this. Run away from here. You are not getting into this with us. I don't even know how Maa is. Take care of her."

Nikhil looked flabbergasted and shocked. " Didi.."

" Kuch Mat Bol! Didi Bolta Hai Mujhe! Tho Meri Sunn. Khud Ko Bacha Aur Yahan Se Bhaag Nikal. At least Tu Safe Hai, Yeh Jaan Kar Mujhe Khushi Hogi. Please. Akhiri Baar Meri Sunn Le." Khushi's stern voice compelled Nikhil to nod with tears brimming in his eyes. He knew that it was a suicide mission for both. He had a better chance to survive than his sister and brother-in-law but the risk was no less. He wanted his sister, who cared for him as a second mother, to be safe and sound and if this relaxes her, then so be it.

Nikhil sighed deeply while looking around himself to see if there was any danger, but since it was the backyard where no one actually comes, they were on the greener side. " Theek Hai, Didi. Aap Khayal Rakhna."

Khushi nodded and smiled affectionately for the last time before joining Arnav in the car and the brother-sister duo parted in two different directions.

Arnav drove at a speed faster than he ever did while looking out for possible dangers. Khushi was doing the same but the feeling that she might never see these places again, as she might lose herself to death or if she survives, she will never be able to look at them without fear clawing her nerves.

Her birth mother's betrayal, her real mother's love, her father's arrogance, her brother's affection and her husband's resolve to be with her, no matter what. Myriads of feelings flooded in her eyes as every feeling she had received played on the canvas of her heart, some tormenting her and some soothing her.

Arnav glanced at the tears wetting the cheeks of hers and felt tormented. This was what from which she wanted to save him from and for him, she was leaving everything of hers behind and was out on a mission where they could die in a way more horrific than they could imagine.

Khushi could read those fear and angst-filled orbs of his, burning her skin under their intense gaze." If we cannot make it, I want you to know that, I love you and I will never regret dying for you, Arnav."

Arnav looked surprised for a second before his lips spread out slightly and his eyes glistened with warm brine." Me too, my love. I love you."

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Will they make it?

Edited by .MereRangMein. - 9 years ago

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Dhruvi Gupta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#176

Oh wow.. this is getting interesting :)

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chinnulu

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Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#177

Nice update

Loved it

Thought atleast after hearing what Sumithra told Suhasini she will give priority to her daughter's happiness rather than scumbbing herself to what society thinks but in the end she did what she wanted and put Arnav's and Khushi's life in danger. Poor Sumithra in order to bring these two together she lost her life. Atleast if Arnav and Khushi live happily together then the scarifice which Sumitra made will not be wasted. Hope these two make it to a safe place.

Thanks for the PM

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deesha1989

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Posted: 9 years ago

#178

Wow. What an update. What happened next? Come on you can tell me. I promise not to tell anyone. Please?????

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Lily30

@Lily30

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#179

Loved part 13 👏
Khushi birth mother is a kalank on the name of mother, hope she reaps what she sows 😡
Poor Khushi love mother, saved her by giving her time to run away 😭
What a cliffhanger, hope they make it, don't want the sacrifice of actual mother to go in vain, eager for the next part.
Thank you for the pm 🤗

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sasir

@sasir

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#180

This sunaina is too disgusting.. N creepy creature..
She is really a black mark on the word mother...
Chi...
Hope nothing happens to Sumitra...
Hope arnav n kushi make it..
N that sunaina n her so called husband rot in hell for their crimes